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| פּFlash | Jun 16 2014, 07:29 PM Post #1 |
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Those whom the gods wish to destroy, they first make mad.
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Name: Aiza Arizu Adjustment: +1 AP, Becomes Rank G, Delete "General Hatsu Conditions" and replace with "Mainly based on charge times", Space out the last paragraph of "Personality" from the first paragraph of "Origin" in "Background", Void Sparks Upgraded to Rank 3 and Reworked. Old: Aura: 14 Might: 14 Agility: 23 Endurance: 14 Accuracy: 21 Reputation: 99 6,700,000 Jenni Technique Name: Void Sparks Type: Supportive Technique Category: Transmuter Technique Rank: 4 Description: Aiza can electrify the aura in his palms and can direct it as he pleases. The voltage, and fear factor can be intensified by committing more aura to the lightning. Aiza also uses this in conjunction with his conductive sickle blades, which allows him to give the swords an extra bite. In a situation where he wanted to move into close range to attack, Aiza could electrify his palms which in turn would charge the blades with the void lightning. So it would last for as long as he maintained the charge. Of course if Aiza tries to maintain a powerful charge in the blades it will drain his aura and energy relatively quickly. If he does use Void lightning to charge his sickle swords, he usually only maintains a small charge. A fully charged Void spark (using all available aura) looks more akin to a large laser beam surrounded by a helix of Void Lightning bolts. Here are some effects based on the charged time of the sparks: 1-4 Seconds: A quick burst of void electricity. Will cause the opponent to flinch. 5-7 Seconds: Can effectively taze an opponent for a couple of seconds. 8-10 Seconds: The beam blast, if concentrated can vaporize parts of a normal human. Nen users will just sustain a damage and may be forced back. Conditions: Depending on the voltage/fear factor it can require a few seconds to charge. Though the electricity is effective, due some of the nen being dedicated to the fear side of the Void Lightning, the electricities raw power is not as powerful as the pure electricity used by hunters such as Killua Zoldyck. Range: Short to Long Effect: Depending on the power of the beam, current aura levels can be significantly depleted and can force Aiza to have to use Ryu/Ko to defend specific areas with very little aura until it regenerates. New: Aura: 16 +2 Might: 14 Agility: 23 Endurance: 14 Accuracy: 23 +2 Reputation: 109 +10 (G Rank) 7,700,000 Jenni +1,000,000 Technique Name: Void Sparks Type: Supportive Technique Category: Transmutation Technique Rank: 3 Description: Through his extensive exposure to varying levels of electricity throughout his life, Aiza is able to transmute his aura into raw electrical energy and direct it as he pleases throughout his body using his aura as a sort of conductor, though all of which originates from his palms. Aiza is able to manipulate this electricity through his movements and is able to electrify his Fulmenite blades "Phobos & Deimos." Aiza's fierce electrical abilities have special properties though, due to the nature of his aura. Instead of the usual blueish white hues that electricity usually has, Aiza's "Void Sparks" take on a deep black colour, with a white glow at the edges. Due to the effects of his fear inducing Aura, Void Sparks take on the properties of that aura, inducing fear in those that come into contact with it. Aiza's usage of Void Sparks take on different forms depending on how he decides to use it, the names of the three current applications are: Malign Discharge, Virulent Current and Sinister Static. Conditions: Naturally, Aiza is only able to use one application of Void Sparks at a time, due to the nature of the abilities which require dedicated usage of the hatsu. Aiza's actual application of Void Sparks requires various charge times and have their own conditions all of which drain his aura by a rough amount: Malign Discharge Virulent Current Sinister Static Range: Short to Long Effect: Malign Discharge: Aiza simply gathers Void Sparks in his palms and fires it in a helix of electrical energy. The size and intensity of the blast is determined by the time spent charging. These blasts may be fired from the end of Aiza's sword, due to them being incredibly strong and quick conductors, though any other weapon will require him to use Shuu on the weapon, it must still be able to conduct electricity. Virulent Current: By charging Void Sparks for a minimum of five seconds in each hand, then placing his palms together, Aiza pulls his hands apart, creating a long, snake-like stream of void lightning, which is as long as he extends his hands away from each other before turning his palms facing toward the side of the stream. By turning his palms so that hey are both facing outwards, Aiza is able to move and control the stream by moving around both hands, controlling the direction of either end within a five meter radius. Sinister Static: Aiza, by electrifying his palms and then directing the electricity throughout his aura, is able to lightly electrify his aura in it's entirety causing it to be essentially a low-powered void lightning field of sorts. The electrical power that his aura will have as a whole is dictated by the amount of time spent charging electricity in his palms, before spreading it evenly throughout his body. He is able to control the strength of this by directing his aura as he would normally through Ryuu or Ko increasing the amount of aura in an area of his body and thus the electrical strength of that area. Naturally, whilst his aura isn't concentrated in a particular area, the electrical and fear inducing effects of Void sparks, due to being spread thinner across the whole body, will not have as potent an effect on contact, though the effects of Void Sparks will apply to all contact made with Aizas aura. His swords remain electrified in this state (Strength of the electrification is dictated by aura levels around his hands). By using En to deactivate sinister static, Aiza is able to use a weak area of effect blast, causing a chill to run down the spines of his opponents and making their hair stand on end. Idea of what the electricity looks like Source: s1.zetaboards.com/Hunter_X_Hunter_RPG/topic/5494979/ [/font] Edited by Flash, Jul 9 2014, 12:27 PM.
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| :)Westborn | Jun 16 2014, 09:17 PM Post #2 |
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Firstly, I'm a bit new to this, but I don't know if you can spend an AP on an NN tech. That being said, you do need to specify how long he closes his eyes to mediate before the ability becomes active. |
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| פּFlash | Jun 17 2014, 06:53 PM Post #3 |
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Those whom the gods wish to destroy, they first make mad.
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Oh and also can someone space out the last paragraph of "Personality" from the first paragraph of "Origin" it's driving me maaaad. |
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| הּKen sweatshirt | Jun 18 2014, 09:40 AM Post #4 |
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?
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1/2 I suppose |
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| Asylum | Jun 18 2014, 10:11 AM Post #5 |
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Prone to Madness
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I'll approve the nntechs. No more condition/cost reductions after this, though. Where are you getting the AP for the new hatsu, however? As far as I can see, you already have all six of your AP spent |
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| פּFlash | Jun 19 2014, 03:11 AM Post #6 |
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Those whom the gods wish to destroy, they first make mad.
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Nevermind this for now, i realise i need a few more SP for an AP only a bit more though so i'll leave it up |
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| פּFlash | Jul 2 2014, 10:10 PM Post #7 |
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Those whom the gods wish to destroy, they first make mad.
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Adjustment is done |
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| הּKen sweatshirt | Jul 3 2014, 12:15 AM Post #8 |
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?
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Where are the sources? |
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| פּFlash | Jul 3 2014, 07:31 AM Post #9 |
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Those whom the gods wish to destroy, they first make mad.
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Done. |
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| הּKen sweatshirt | Jul 3 2014, 05:32 PM Post #10 |
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?
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1/2 accepted |
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