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[Approved] Eva, All Seeing[Archived]; ^-^
Topic Started: May 5 2014, 11:40 AM (566 Views)
Kerum Kosha
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Replacing my assassin girl for this one.

× General Information

Name:  Evageline
Gender: Female
Age:  14
Height:  5
Weight:  95 lb
Species:  Human
Appearance:
Eva


Profession: Information Hunter
Reputation: 107 (Rank G)
Background

Backpack


× Physical Statistics

[0/43]
[0/93]

Aura: 23
Might:  14
Agility:  16
Endurance: 17
Accuracy:  22

× Nen Techniques

Basic Nen Techniques

Hatsu Affinity


[5/7]
[0/21]


Hatsu Theme: 
General Hatsu Description: 
General Hatsu Conditions: 

Hatsu Abilities


× Non-Nen Techniques

[26/31]
Techniques
Edited by Kain, Jun 15 2014, 03:51 PM.
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Asylum
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I'm going to have to think about the hatsu a bit. Rank 5's usually aren't all that useful, for starters. Rather than a plain-old power up of a basic technique, something like the ability to alter the shape of one's en so that it stretches further in one direction instead of equally in all directions are what I had in mind for r5 En variations (the examples I have is specially trained guards making theirs into semicircles instead of circles, but don't have a template filled out for it atm). I'm not saying you can't have a pure, advanced En period, as there are En specialists with greater range than normal like Zeno out there, but the rank will probably need to be lowered.

For All Seeing Eye, you have a lot of useful effects, which I do like, but the strength of your current conditions seem quite tame in comparison. My suggestion would be to make it more difficult to use (i.e specific conditions must be met before it can be activated) and/or have some harsh drawbacks (like putting great strain on her mind that can leave her in a coma if overused, for instance).

For your techniques, things like Smoke Bombs, grenades, or Flash Bangs need to be bought like any other weapons (and a remote trigger attached to the bow would require a customization). They aren't that cheap, and can only be used once in a thread (per item), but they are restocked between threads so you don't need to repurchase them or anything.
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Kerum Kosha
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edited the hatsu, removed the nntechs, and added a new archery nn, also if can't do the en mastery could i add it into all seeing eye and just have her en be bigger when using hatsu?
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Kerum Kosha
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double posting but o well lol., edited the hatsu and changed en mastery to something that would warrent only 1AP hopefully lol. -drum roll- come on please be accepted :D
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Kain
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Tiger Lord aka Star Lord aka Vigo aka Chocolate Thunder

Firstly, imo some of All Seeing Eye's conditions can be scrapped:

-Can no longer use Shuu even if hatsu is not active.

-Must know the persons name before can communicate telepathically

-Can only use En while using the hatsu.

-While in cooldown she may only use Ten

-May only have this hatsu and En Mastery

-Loses ability to talk for 2 posts afterwards

-For half of cooldown she is forced into zetsu do to the strain on her aura and mind.

-If she uses this 3 or more times in a single thread she risks putting herself into a coma, each time she gets weaker.

-End of 3 post, loses 2 stamina and 1 accuracy, and Aura

-End of 6 post, loses 2 more stamina, (total of 4) 1 more accuracy (total of 2), and 1 to speed and aura.

-End of 9 post, 2 more stamina (total of 6), 1 more accuracy (total of 3), another to speed and aura. (total of 3 aura and 2 speed)
These will not go away until she is able to use the hatsu again.

-She also gets worse headaches as the hatus goes on, same as with the stats starting with minor, moderate, major.


Also, correct the [0/16], on your nn-techs to look like [16/16]
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Kerum Kosha
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ok edited again. :D
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Asylum
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Prone to Madness

Approved 1/2.
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:)Westborn
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