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| GokuSuperRome | Mar 9 2014, 07:13 PM Post #1 |
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× General Information Name: Gunn Hrunting Gender: Male Age: 13 Height: 5'4" Weight: 167lbs Species: Human Appearance: Gunn is slightly tanned, muscular along with black spiky hair and dark blue eyes and bushy brows. He generally wares a black hooded-less jacket and dark blue pants, underneath the jacket is a white tank top. He wears grey sneakers which look quite dirty, On his face he has a scar on his chin that spreads just below his lower lip, including slight liver spots underneath his eyes. He has a sword holster on his back where he keeps his machete, On his waist is a belt with a large knife. Image Profession: Survivalist Reputation: 0 (Rank H) Background Backpack × Physical Statistics [0/0] [0/50] Aura: 10 Might: 10 Agility: 10 Endurance: 10 Accuracy: 10 × Nen Techniques Basic Nen Techniques Hatsu Affinity: Enhancement [X/6] [0/0] Hatsu Theme: General Hatsu Description: General Hatsu Conditions: Hatsu Techniques × Non-Nen Techniques [8/16] Techniques
Edited by GokuSuperRome, Mar 28 2014, 11:22 AM.
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| GokuSuperRome | Mar 11 2014, 11:39 AM Post #2 |
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Anyone give me Idea's or Advice on how to improve this. I'm open for people to also modify this, but must ask permission.
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| Kain | Mar 11 2014, 11:55 AM Post #3 |
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well, for starters perhaps using the template coding lol Clean Template
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| GokuSuperRome | Mar 11 2014, 01:23 PM Post #4 |
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If any admin is willing to put this in a template that would be helpful...I've followed the template format
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| Asylum | Mar 12 2014, 07:32 PM Post #5 |
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-The general hatsu section doesn't give you anything on its own, so any abilities such as the buffs you describe in the general description can't be used unless you fill out a hatsu template and pay for itfor it. Furthermore, percentual buffs such as 2x a stat aren't allowed; you need to make them actual numbers, say +3. Intense Might: You can make this r4. Attacks like this in our system are mainly calculated as aura buffs; meaning that the weight of the conditions being met causes the density of the aura gathered in the fist to intensify and thus cause more damage as if there was more aura in the attack. Instead of putting it in terms of weight, it would be best if you put it in terms of aura. For instance, for each second spent charging, the aura around your fist could increase by +1 for the attack. I suppose you could use the might stat instead of aura if you prefer. -Make Cleaver Dash r8. |
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| GokuSuperRome | Mar 12 2014, 08:24 PM Post #6 |
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That's great advice, Thank you. Also how the Intense might works is that it adapts the aura's pressure to the same weight of previous weight the character has lifted and surrounds the fist, adding onto the punch, Which is around 24 tons of force. BTW I will get to the improvements ASAP -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I've done what you asked, And also changed the name of my character. Edited by GokuSuperRome, Mar 12 2014, 09:04 PM.
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| Kain | Mar 13 2014, 11:46 AM Post #7 |
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-Instead of minutes or seconds lets go with Posts since its easier to keep track of in RP. -And idk if I understand Intense might well, but I assume it turns Potential Energy into Kinetic Energy, meaning that what he "can" lift becomes his strength instead of actually needing to lift anything at all, is that right? Edited by Kain, Mar 13 2014, 11:47 AM.
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| GokuSuperRome | Mar 13 2014, 12:10 PM Post #8 |
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Yes, that's basically the gist of it. Also once I've changed it is it ready to be accepted?
Edited by GokuSuperRome, Mar 13 2014, 12:12 PM.
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| Kain | Mar 13 2014, 12:45 PM Post #9 |
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Almost, one other things is that for Intense Might, its a bit iffy to calculate your overall buff using weight as a theme. I was hoping that you would have an alternative, something along the same lines, for example maybe something along the lines of "A charged attack that grants a +5 buff to might for each post the user is at rest." Which is basically the same thing but simplified and without alot of detail. Just an example by the way, not a requirement to change it to that. |
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| GokuSuperRome | Mar 13 2014, 01:42 PM Post #10 |
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I'd rather have the detail. But to explain it for you this is what I done to get my current calculations which are generally easy. 2 tons x 10 = 20 tons 20 tons = 196.133 kilonewton |
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