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[Approved] Daegon[Archived]; FINISHED READY FOR A REVIEW
Topic Started: Jan 6 2014, 01:42 PM (1,040 Views)
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× General Information

Name: Daegon
Gender: male
Age: 14
Height: 170 cm
Weight: 60 kg
Species: Human
Appearance: He has a spiky dark hair, much like indians have. I belive it is called "Chiroki". It is not as long as you migt think, maybe 5 cm at the most. other parts of his head are shaved. He likes to wear his 2 earring, 1 in each ear. They go tight araund your ear, creating a circle. They are made from iron, and they are black. He has war paint drawn on him, 3 stripes on each cheak. He has light brown hair and eyes, small but a perky nose, full lips and a medim sized ears. He wears a mask on( yea like Kakashi :D ) but sometimes, in special ocasiones, he takes it off. He has a long dark coat, pitch black with some silver details. He wears a black T-shirt, and a black vest. His baggy pants are held by a iron belt, with the mark of his Indian tribe. He has a dark pair of shoes, that go well into his personal look(he is a bit narcissistic). Oh yea, and the most important is his weapon that he has on his wrist(I will explain later)

Profession: Rank 5 Hunter Applicant
Reputation: 7 (Rank H)
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Aura: 12
Might: 11
Agility: 12
Endurance: 9
Accuracy: 9

× Nen Techniques

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Hatsu Affinity: Transmutation


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Hatsu Theme: Animal Spirits
General Hatsu Description: Daegons aura changes into shapes of diffrent beasts
General Hatsu Conditions: He has to drink the blood from his totem to change

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× Non-Nen Techniques

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Edited by RaMp4g3, Jan 10 2014, 12:28 PM.
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Ok i finished can you check it out now
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I think ninjutsu is more of a collection of various tricks or stealth/subterfuge skills than a traditional fighting style. If you're going to use this, please describe how it works as a fighting style; like what kind of moves it utilizes. You might want to completely rewrite the description for it as yours doesn't really do any of that. Also, I would rank up Stealth/Heightened Senses quite a bit if you really want those skills to stand out from what others are normally capable of since r3 is pretty low.

Also, you can note that he can acquire more animal forms later by investing TP (amount would depend on the type of animal; a bear would probably cost more than a goat for instance).
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Well I did think that investing TP will get me more totems so i can aquire animals. Well ninjutsu is actually a legit figthing style. Well in my country you can train it, and my friend did it for a while and said that it's diffrent from other styles in some ways. Well that's what i think and know now the rest is up to you :)
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I'm actually ok with the ninjutsu as a fighting style. A friend of mine trained it for a real long time. It focuses on disarms, sweeps, and single strikes.
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Ok guys take a look now, Is it all good :D
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?

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