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[Approved] Daegon[Archived]; FINISHED READY FOR A REVIEW
Topic Started: Jan 6 2014, 01:42 PM (1,041 Views)
RaMp4g3
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× General Information

Name: Daegon
Gender: male
Age: 14
Height: 170 cm
Weight: 60 kg
Species: Human
Appearance: He has a spiky dark hair, much like indians have. I belive it is called "Chiroki". It is not as long as you migt think, maybe 5 cm at the most. other parts of his head are shaved. He likes to wear his 2 earring, 1 in each ear. They go tight araund your ear, creating a circle. They are made from iron, and they are black. He has war paint drawn on him, 3 stripes on each cheak. He has light brown hair and eyes, small but a perky nose, full lips and a medim sized ears. He wears a mask on( yea like Kakashi :D ) but sometimes, in special ocasiones, he takes it off. He has a long dark coat, pitch black with some silver details. He wears a black T-shirt, and a black vest. His baggy pants are held by a iron belt, with the mark of his Indian tribe. He has a dark pair of shoes, that go well into his personal look(he is a bit narcissistic). Oh yea, and the most important is his weapon that he has on his wrist(I will explain later)

Profession: Rank 5 Hunter Applicant
Reputation: 7 (Rank H)
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× Physical Statistics

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Aura: 12
Might: 11
Agility: 12
Endurance: 9
Accuracy: 9

× Nen Techniques

Basic Nen Techniques

Hatsu Affinity: Transmutation


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Hatsu Theme: Animal Spirits
General Hatsu Description: Daegons aura changes into shapes of diffrent beasts
General Hatsu Conditions: He has to drink the blood from his totem to change

Hatsu Techniques


× Non-Nen Techniques

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Edited by RaMp4g3, Jan 10 2014, 12:28 PM.
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Finished :)
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For occupation put Rank 5 Hunter Applicant. You can put he aspires to be a Blacklist Hunter someplace else if you’d like.

Under the Heart Totem, you may need to specify which animals blood you have with you at the beginning of a thread, also switch it to once per thread, as we don’t regularly keep track of moon cycles in game :P

I’m also pretty sure that parkour has nothing to do with dislocating your limbs (as that’s my real life job.)

You also need to fix the [X/6] and [X/16] numbers to [5/6] and [15/16]
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How about listing a description of exactly what each totem is capable of providing when he drinks it. Can he have multiple ones active at once? If not, you could probably pay TP to be able to create more later.

For Martial Art/Weapon Expert: We don't allow nntechniques that basically just say 'the character is good at fighting', especially since all yours really implies is that he can handle opponents stronger then him. If you want to specify a style, that's workable.
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Hmm i was thinking of saying ninjutsu but i worgat, I will work on it and he has 3 totems that are the same, it just depends of how much blood can each of tham carry, It also depends of how much he drinks. If he just takes a sip he will transform for 2 posts, if he drinks half of it he will transform for abaut 5-6 posts and he would have to whait 4 posts in between transformations to be able to transforming into another animal.
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So is it a full transformation into the animal, or partial? Like gaining wings from hawk, hair and claws from wolf, and scales and gills from fish?

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I posted a picture, my aura changes not me :)
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ok, also add in somewhere that he'll need to refill IC. and try to describe exactly what abilities he'll earn when drinking the animal blood.

Like, when he drinks fish blood, does it allow him to breath under water and increase his swimming speed, etc. just things like that so we know its general extent.
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Alright, I thought i gave an example but I will try to describe it more
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the example is fine, just want to know the extent of what it grants you not a vague understanding.
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