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| [Approved] Basil Zeeble[Archived] | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 2 2014, 08:12 AM (437 Views) | |
| Oro Jackson | Jan 2 2014, 08:12 AM Post #1 |
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× General Information Name: Basil Zeeble Gender: Male Age: 21 Height: 6 feet Weight: 163 pounds Species: - Appearance: Basil is a young man standing at 6 feet while weighing 163 pounds and is completely dressed in black. His upper body is concealed by a long, dark cloak that is decorated with surrounding leather straps. The cloak also possesses a black interior, and a chin-high collar. Basil does not possess any other garments on his upper body aside for the cloak. The lower parts of his body are concealed by black pants and high black boots that also possess some leather bands. The man has black eyes and a messy mop of black hair on top of his head. On his ear the man possesses an earring that is made of a black diamond, albeit not an expensive one. Basil carries with him a multitude of knives that are hidden on many different parts of his body. Image Profession: Grade 5 Hunter Applicant Reputation: 5 (Rank H) Background Backpack × Physical Statistics [0/2] [0/52] Aura: 9 Might: 8 Agility: 12 Endurance: 10 Accuracy: 13 × Nen Techniques Basic Nen Techniques Hatsu Affinity: Manipulation [6/6] [0/1] Hatsu Theme: Requiem of the Six Realms General Hatsu Description: By using his Nen Basil gains the ability to use sound as a primary weapon/shield. Attacks can be performed by the use of his voice, making a distinct sound with his body or weapons in order to deal damage or to hypnotize the opponent or to take away said noise. General Hatsu Conditions: Basil is not allowed to use his voice for anyone that is not deemed as an enemy, human, Majuu and Chimera Ant alike. If it did not attack him first he cannot talk to it. Area wide attacks will then need to be used by anything else that can produce sound if allies are around. This also means that any attacks that are created by his voice are to never be used around innocent bystanders and allies. Punishment: If people not deemed as enemies hear his voice Basil looses the ability to use his voice based sound attacks for 5 posts (excluding other people's posts). Requirements to be deemed an enemy:
Requirements to be deemed an ally:
Hatsu Techniques × Non-Nen Techniques [16/17] Techniques
Edited by Asylum, Jan 10 2014, 08:19 PM.
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| Oro Jackson | Jan 2 2014, 01:52 PM Post #2 |
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This application is ready to be reviewed and to get any kinks kicked out of it. |
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| Asylum | Jan 2 2014, 04:06 PM Post #3 |
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Prone to Madness
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[50/50] should be [0/50]. What's the point of making people into allies? Are they allowed to hear his voice? Do they become immune to the sound hatsu? I guess Sound Wall is alright as a r5 if it only protects against ranged attacks and is only active for a moment. Also, I have some suggestions for further conditions that might interest you. What about adding that using Screaming Blades places a lot of strain on the character's vocal cords? The more frequently/stronger its used, the harder it becomes to use it or speak again afterwards (like blowing out your voice). You could also add a condition along the lines of needing to focus aura around his diaphragm/lungs in order to gather power for it. |
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| Oro Jackson | Jan 3 2014, 12:36 AM Post #4 |
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Edited. Also about the point of making people into allies. To be blunt, there is no benefit for these people for the moment. The main reason for the requirement between ally and enemy is that sometimes an enemy wants to be an ally which would then be done by the blood exchange, unless Basil killed them. The other reason is that sometimes friends playfully threaten or attack one another, by using the blood exchange they would then be protected from his voice based attacks that are more often than not capable of harming bystanders if they are too close. You might have noticed that I said 'for the moment'. That is due to the fact that some of the techniques I plan on making will deal mental damage to Basil's surroundings and messing with the opponent. If they are his allies they cannot be caught in these techniques, even normal citizens can be caught in it. I hope the explanation is satisfactory ^^ |
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| הּKen sweatshirt | Jan 3 2014, 12:56 AM Post #5 |
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?
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So just that they are protected against the sound hats's? Also, you probable won't need to use that scream blades 7 times in a day, nevermind 20. |
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| Oro Jackson | Jan 3 2014, 01:08 AM Post #6 |
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They will only be protected against a certain branch of Hatsu techniques that will mess around with people their head. Like Kaname Tōsen's Shikai that takes away the sight of a person one of the strongest attacks will take away the sound of enemies and bystanders. Allies will not be subjugated by these attacks. Any attack that will bring harm will need allies to get out of his reach. Also I changed it from seven to three. More limits equals more strength :D |
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| הּKen sweatshirt | Jan 3 2014, 01:14 AM Post #7 |
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?
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1/2 approved |
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| Asylum | Jan 3 2014, 03:54 AM Post #8 |
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Prone to Madness
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Approved 2/2. |
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