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[Approved] Kiren Jaenks (Kenichi scoop)(Done)[Archived]
Topic Started: Dec 22 2013, 06:47 PM (801 Views)
Ken sweatshirt
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?

× General Information

Name: Kiren Jaenks
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Height: 175 cm
Weight: 80 kg
Species: Human
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Profession:Treasure Hunter
Reputation: 16 (Rank H)
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× Physical Statistics

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Aura: 14
Might: 10
Agility: 10
Endurance:13
Accuracy: 10

× Nen Techniques

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Hatsu Affinity: Reinforcement


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Edited by Ken sweatshirt, Dec 31 2013, 11:27 PM.
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?

I am done.
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Kain
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Tiger Lord aka Star Lord aka Vigo aka Chocolate Thunder

So by Ko, do you mean that you remove aura from the rest of your body like normal Ko does?
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You need to update the SP earned bracket, and your coding under history needs work. To make lists use this format:

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[list][*]First Source
[*]Second Source[/list]


Which becomes:
  • First Source
  • Second Source


Also, why not add Winter Appreciation while it's up?
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?

Done.

And i ment that the strike itself has the power of 1.5 his KO would.
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Dec 22 2013, 06:47 PM
It is very simple, 25 percent aura is added 4 cm before the impact, and retracts just 4 cm before impact.
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Here you state that it adds 25% before impact and then retracts 4cm before impact. Its a contradiction. Please clarify xD
Edited by Kain, Dec 26 2013, 10:24 PM.
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Make the Jenni total 1,550,000, and update the TP brackets. For Dynamite Impact, does that mean that its like Ko but has more power than the normal Ko? Otherwise, you're just saying that its stronger than Ko without putting any nen into it. Please specify that. You also haven't stated how many TP you've spent on Flash Impact.

I find it a bit strange that both hatsu basically say that they can be used with both a sword and a fist. It's basically Uvo's Big Bang Impact that can be used by swordsmen too. It's not that jarring, but I would stick to one unless you really want him to be an unarmed fighter as well.

Even though these are low ranked techs, you might want to add a condition for Dynamite Impact if you really want to strengthen it to fearsome levels (sort of like Gon's Jajanken Rock). Otherwise, you could just say that using these hatsu techs tire the character out more than using standard moves.

Edit: Also, change DI from percent increases of Ko to simply set aura buffs. Say +4 more Aura than normal Ko during the attack to start then with the possibility to increase from there. As it is, the power would begin to increase exponentially as you added to his aura stat, which would really start to get out of hand after a while.
Edited by Asylum, Dec 27 2013, 04:11 AM.
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?

I'm not sure, i thought i read sonewhere you can't buff aura?
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It's the same thing you're doing now, anyways, just without the percentual effect. If it's just for a single attack, I say it's fine (it's basically how Phink's Ripper Cyclotron works anyways).
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?

Mweh, deleted it so i have more time to work on it.
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