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[Approved] Zhurong[Archived]
Topic Started: Nov 11 2013, 03:21 AM (530 Views)
theonetruezombie
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× General Information

Name: Zhurong
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Height: 5"11' (183 cm)
Weight: 150 pounds (68.04kg)
Species: Human
Appearance:

Zhurong's bootyful face


Profession: none
Reputation: 10 (Rank H)
Background

Backpack

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× Nen Techniques

Basic Nen Techniques

Hatsu Affinity: To be decided


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[0/1]


Hatsu Theme:N/A
General Hatsu Description:N/A
General Hatsu Conditions:N/A


Hatsu Techniques




× Non-Nen Ttechniques

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Techniques
Edited by Asylum, Jun 13 2014, 07:07 PM.
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kk lets see how diddly diddly wrong i was shall we?
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Asylum
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You're missing stats for starters.

I would say that being able to sidestep at blinding speeds up to 25 yards at a moment's notice and repeatedly is too strong for r8. Maybe if it was only for like 2-3 meters.

Also, does the other tech grant him an immunity to air-based poisons in addition to the hot environment resistance and ability to survive on less oxygen? That might be stretching it, if so.

I think you might have gotten hatsu ranks slightly confused. R5's cost 1 AP, R4's cost 2AP, and so on up till r0 at 6AP. R5's are also rarely approved unless they're really basic; like a simple application of an affinity or a unique variation of a basic nen technique.
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kk i re worked the 3rd move to be a full on r5 adaptation on kou as well as re work the second non nen tech and tweaked the first what next oh wise guru
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r5 abilities are supposed to be really simple applications of a hatsu, typically having limited usefulness as well. Your Glass Saw, basically just allowing him to make a jagged edge capable of cutting out of his nen, might qualify for that, but the enhancement with charges part (especially Reaper Death Cyclone) would likely rank it up to 4. I would get rid of that part, maybe choosing to upgrade it to r4 later on if you prefer.

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hat me or love me but i feel like cutting hatsu for now cuss as i know nothings set in stone and id like to see how my character progresses first
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Tiger Lord aka Star Lord aka Vigo aka Chocolate Thunder

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