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[Approved] [Ready for review]Ban't Orodreth[Archived]; Hey, its finished XD
Topic Started: Sep 25 2013, 04:04 AM (624 Views)
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× General Information

Name: Ban't Orodreth
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Height: About 5'8
Weight: about 64 kg
Species: Human
Appearance: He often wears his striped shirt with long sleeves and black gloves, he has strange eyes, grey with a black center, surrounding the center are black rings. He is usually pale almost grey-ish. His hair is originally black but he dyed half of it white/light grey. When needed, he carries around a sort of roll of thread about 2 and a half feet wide, able to carry a few hundred feet of thread (depending on size)

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Profession:He wanders around doing odd jobs not staying in one place.
Reputation: 0 (Rank H)
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Aura: 15
Might: 5
Agility: 10
Endurance: 10
Accuracy: 10

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Hatsu Affinity: Reinforcement


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Hatsu Theme: Trap
General Hatsu Description: He uses kunai like blades and tosses them around certain areas of the location where small but strong threads are attached to the handle of the blades, he then strengthens these threads with Nen and when the enemy passes through said threads, they receive major injuries ( such as loss of a limb or even decapitation) where he would then finish them off from a distance. ( He uses Shuu to envelop and strengthen the threads , also sharpen them enough to cut through flesh and bone)
General Hatsu Conditions: The user must stay completely still otherwise the nen flow would be distrupted, Also, the longer it is used the weaker the threads become, also wearing out because of the amount of nen flowing through it. Also, the longer the thread the weaker it is.


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I think you should specify how long each thread is and how many you have. Are they normal string or metal wire? I would also make note that the strength of the wire should decrease the longer/more wire it is used on at a time, since the character would be spreading the aura out over larger distances.

You didn't answer/do any of these.

Shuu doesn't actually sharpen anything, it just means applying aura to a weapon as if it were a part of the body. That said, I can see how the threads would cut things that move into them quickly if they were stationary and completely stretched out like a tripwire.
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Sep 25 2013, 10:19 PM
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I think you should specify how long each thread is and how many you have. Are they normal string or metal wire? I would also make note that the strength of the wire should decrease the longer/more wire it is used on at a time, since the character would be spreading the aura out over larger distances.

You didn't answer/do any of these.

Shuu doesn't actually sharpen anything, it just means applying aura to a weapon as if it were a part of the body. That said, I can see how the threads would cut things that move into them quickly if they were stationary and completely stretched out like a tripwire.
Well, I think i put that i have a roll of said thread, its not metal but its just stronger than the average thread. And yes, I do intend to use them as stationary trap like things.
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Well im logging off and I'll be back in about 4 hours or so, hopefully its done by then <3
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Regardless, note about how many meters of wire the character is able to use in his profile, and add the condition where the strength of the thread decreases the more are created or the longer they are (thus smaller webs would be stronger than longer ones). It makes sense since the character is actually spreading their aura over larger areas, and its how Machi's nen threads work in canon.
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Sep 25 2013, 11:36 PM
Regardless, note about how many meters of wire the character is able to use in his profile, and add the condition where the strength of the thread decreases the more are created or the longer they are (thus smaller webs would be stronger than longer ones). It makes sense since the character is actually spreading their aura over larger areas, and its how Machi's nen threads work in canon.
Done~
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If the other mods all alright with it, I'll approve this.

Approved 1/2.
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Tiger Lord aka Star Lord aka Vigo aka Chocolate Thunder

I guess I can approve it as well, but let me get a 1 post cooldown for your hatsu's ability.
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Kain
Sep 27 2013, 03:13 PM
I guess I can approve it as well, but let me get a 1 post cooldown for your hatsu's ability.
Alright.
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Tiger Lord aka Star Lord aka Vigo aka Chocolate Thunder

2/2 Approved
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