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[Approved] Elpeo Vilmonth[Archived]
Topic Started: Feb 24 2013, 01:59 PM (772 Views)
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× General Information

Name: Elpeo Vilmonth
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Height: 6 ft 1 inch
Weight: 150 lb
Species: Human
Appearance:
Elpeo represents almost perfectly the average individual of his age. You won't define him as handsome, but in his appearance there's something that often push people to instinctively trust him. He's in the average also regarding height and weight, but you won't find an ounce of fat on his figure. His skin is particularly pale, his eyes (often screened by sunglasses) are scarlet red, and his hair often dyed, not always in the same colour (usually purple). He wears a black coat and pants, a sort of neck-warmer which he can also use to hide part of his face. Under the coat he usually wears dark blue dress shirts. His daggers are fixed on his back such that he's able to recover them quickly when needed, crossing his arms while outdrawing. He also has a set of four black rings pierced along the auricle of his left ear.



Profession: Black-List Hunter

Reputation: 0 (Rank H)

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Aura: 16
Might: 6
Agility: 10
Endurance: 8
Accuracy: 10

× Nen Techniques

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Hatsu Affinity: Manipulation


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Edited by Elpeo, Feb 28 2013, 02:32 PM.
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I feel like you need some more definitive activation condition for both hatsu. Say, saying a certain sentence to create the copy or activate rank 1 of Schizophrenia (which I assume you then upgrade from there).

Sanity loss... I find iffy as a condition. It can easily be brushed over if it comes up, though it can also be done well. I'd like to see a clearer explanation as to what this state entails. Does it make him unable to fight? Does he just lash out at anyone nearby? Is it permanent?
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I added activation conditions for copies and specified what "sanity loss" means in the two different cases. I found nonsense to require a phrase to trigger Elpeo's abilities, since he focus on becoming invisible and strike from the shadows. Since he hasn's a great endurance, he'll probably hide as first action, then the need to speak out loud revealing his position will make him...useless and probably dead. If this kind of trigger for my techinques is really needed, I'll probably completely change the character, since his combat style would not fit the character's personality. I'll probably create directly another one, since there is no mean of editing all entries of this thread!
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Saying something was just an example. You could include something like making a mark on the ground, a handseal, inflicting a self-injury, or anything similar you can come up with. Just a more definitive activation condition (which differs from a prerequisite like requiring he have enough endurance and the target has seen him and a clone together) that he's required to do just before making a copy or altering their perception rather than just thinking about it and having the clones/illusions show up/take effect instantly.
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Approved 1/2.
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Tiger Lord aka Star Lord aka Vigo aka Chocolate Thunder

2/2 Approved Congrats!
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