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[Approved] Elpeo Vilmonth[Archived]
Topic Started: Feb 24 2013, 01:59 PM (773 Views)
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× General Information

Name: Elpeo Vilmonth
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Height: 6 ft 1 inch
Weight: 150 lb
Species: Human
Appearance:
Elpeo represents almost perfectly the average individual of his age. You won't define him as handsome, but in his appearance there's something that often push people to instinctively trust him. He's in the average also regarding height and weight, but you won't find an ounce of fat on his figure. His skin is particularly pale, his eyes (often screened by sunglasses) are scarlet red, and his hair often dyed, not always in the same colour (usually purple). He wears a black coat and pants, a sort of neck-warmer which he can also use to hide part of his face. Under the coat he usually wears dark blue dress shirts. His daggers are fixed on his back such that he's able to recover them quickly when needed, crossing his arms while outdrawing. He also has a set of four black rings pierced along the auricle of his left ear.



Profession: Black-List Hunter

Reputation: 0 (Rank H)

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× Physical Statistics

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Aura: 16
Might: 6
Agility: 10
Endurance: 8
Accuracy: 10

× Nen Techniques

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Hatsu Affinity: Manipulation


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General Hatsu Description: -

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× Non-Nen Techniques

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Edited by Elpeo, Feb 28 2013, 02:32 PM.
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Kain
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Tiger Lord aka Star Lord aka Vigo aka Chocolate Thunder

It'd be best to classify your first ability as an emission. Where you wouldn't need so many conditions and it'd be simpler to just emit a clone and imbue it with a single or multiple commands ( "If - then" type of command would work as well)

-And if you do choose to go emission you could rank down to R3, as well as eliminate your 1st condition.

Whereas, conjuration/manipulation for your primary ability would need the conditions and the rank would be near correct at an R4 since it would combine manip and conjure which aren't as close as emission/manip which tend to go hand in hand.

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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?

Conjuration and Manipulation are two different hatsu affinity's. Which means the rank lowers by 2 then it normally would be. How strong are the clones? If you want you could make stats for them. Also, instead of saying hours or days or seconds, its easier to say posts. Since hours and days are interactive. Bluff daggers is a feint right? Why is it put as illusion? Describe it more, because now it seems pretty weak for a rank 8.
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I'm trying to make the first Non-Nen techinque more like a "Rank 8". About clones...I don't know. I really wanted the option to teleport between them, but putting it as emission, and being Specialization (I didn't find any similar way to teleport in other Hatsu affinities) it would leave me...40% affinity with Emission? A bit low, and it wouldn't fit the points...Restrictions are not a problem, I can empower clones a bit just to make them more "acceptable". The problem is I probably need someone to help me out with the right way to adjust things...
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?

Why do you have to be Specialization? Just go emission? Then describe the rank 8 more powerful. Like, make it an optical illusion or something.
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I changed teleport into mindblowing illlusions. Tomorrow I'll find another non-nen techinque. (The new Nen technique has to be settled, I decided and described it in 2 minutes, now :\)
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The copies will need to be given stats. If you want to change how strong they are depending on how much aura he gives up to make them, set up a chart for each percentage. Say, as an example:
10%: 2 in each stat
20%: 4 in each stat
30%: 6 in each stat
40%: 8 in each stat
50%: 10 in each stat

I just made that up on the spot, so the mods are free to add their opinions regarding what's allowable. I think that being able to create a clone with more SP than the real thing wouldn't be workable, but you could improve the SP totals by investing TP later.

Also, [50/50] should be [0/50].
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I tried to fix things up, adding the power of the copies (setting as max value for stats the max value of Elpeo in the respective stat). I also tried to make Schizophrenia a bit more than a simple illusion.
I also changed the non-nen technique, making it an offensive one, hoping that it would fit better the rank (I couldn't think how to make a rank 8 techinique the previous one.)
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About the Illusions, you've stated that the more his nen touches the target, the more powerful the illusion becomes. I'm wondering if by powerful illusion you mean reality bending? or something where the illusion damages the target?
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I tried to work it out better with Kain, but I still need something to fill up the last "rank" of illusions...I'll think about it!

EDIT: Worked out last rank of illusions, still not sure about missing hits and losing sanity relation, though.
Edited by Elpeo, Feb 26 2013, 03:29 PM.
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