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| Blackus | Oct 5 2012, 07:18 AM Post #1 |
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× General Information Name: Mollen Hillus Gender: Male Age: 22 Height: 195 cm Weight: 80 kg Species: Human Appearance: Mollen is a fairly muscular, and rather tall person. He has a serious, dull, and discouraging face, with brown eyes, and black cornrowed hair. Even if he was a little slim, he can still be called a fit person with barely-visible muscles and a well-built torso, with a broad chest. Mollen wears a Japanese style red robe with sun and leaf designs, underneath he wears a blue boxers. He also wears beach sandals, making him look like an exotic vacationist. Profession: Black-List Hunter Reputation: 47 (Rank H) Background Backpack × Physical Statistics [0/18] [0/68] Aura: 16 Might: 12 Agility: 17 Endurance: 11 Accuracy: 12 × Nen Techniques Basic Nen Techniques Hatsu Affinity: Specialization [6/6] [4/9] Hatsu Theme: Juggle Watch General Hatsu Description: -Mollen wears a rare kind of watch, rather than just the major numbers 12, 9, 6, and 3, they are replaced by 4, 3, 2, and 1 in that order. Also, with a white base, and a clown replacing each tips of the arm. Depending on the number the minute and hour arm is nearest/is on(meaning the time), he can gain access to a variety of abilities. But, the abilities is limited only as the arms are near to their number. General Hatsu Conditions: -As this is still a normal watch, Mollen can't control where the arms are near/on. He must wait for the right time is he wants to use a specific ability. Hatsu Techniques × Non-Nen Techniques [20/25] Techniques Edited by Asylum, Jan 8 2013, 09:27 PM.
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| Zephistopheles | Oct 5 2012, 07:39 AM Post #2 |
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the Spirit that denies
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i like the ability and i like the semi-random condition you have given it a lot. one question though: would the sythe eath trough the aura i.e. ignore it and get sharper in the process or would it actually consume a part of the aura, making the opponents over all defense weaker against anny incoming atacks (even from other scources while strengthening the sythe? in the later case, how long would that effect last? until the moment it disappears or even longer? (PS: i know you said eats and absorbs but that could mean he aura that is there in the instant the blade hits as well as a percentage of the aura that wouldn't be accessible anymore, depending on interpretation.) |
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| Blackus | Oct 5 2012, 07:46 AM Post #3 |
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It would actually consume the aura. Only the part that was sliced and a small area around it would be consumed. Because it was consumed, it can't be restored but rather, replaced(or is that restored too?) by more of his/her aura. About 2% per slash and also depending how clean and big the slice is - to a maximum of 10% in one hit. So, it's not actually not that much of a negating effect.
Edited by Blackus, Oct 5 2012, 07:46 AM.
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| Zephistopheles | Oct 5 2012, 07:49 AM Post #4 |
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when would that part of the aura be returned? (keep in mind permanent buffs and debuffs are impossible) also i noticed you haven't included a hunter's licence in your backpack. you can decide wether your char is a hunter or not. if he is he would have a licence and if he isn't he is entiteled to a mobile phone, a survival kit and a laptop in exchange. |
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| Blackus | Oct 5 2012, 07:55 AM Post #5 |
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Oh, that kind of thing. It'll be until Mollen gets out of his range. Let's say about a few kilometers. Added the hunter license, will change the description of the scythe technique also.
Edited by Blackus, Oct 5 2012, 07:55 AM.
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| Asylum | Oct 5 2012, 01:43 PM Post #6 |
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Prone to Madness
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I don't think the conditions you have for Dark Shade are anywhere near strong enough to accommodate for the abilities it has- basically ignoring nen defenses like Gyou or Ren (a massive part of nen combat) and stealing the target’s aura to increase the weapon’s strength. We have a recent character with a very similar aura-stealing hatsu who had to give it very strict conditions in order for it to get approved and I recommend you check it out to get an idea for how the aura-stealing ability can work: Alistair Lace For one, it will have to take aura from the target as a debuff to the aura stat (no percentages) that can be measured and there will have to be a maximum amount that it can steal (which can increase by giving it TP later). However, since nen defenses like Gyou and Ren are a massive part of nen combat, the part you mentioned about pure nen defenses being weak against the scythe is probably not workable here. |
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| Blackus | Oct 5 2012, 02:36 PM Post #7 |
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Wow, our abilities are almost identical. Anyway, changed it, "removed the pure nen defenses are weak to it". See if this is limited enough. And don't worry, the increase in sharpness is very small.
Edited by Blackus, Oct 5 2012, 02:37 PM.
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| פֿDante | Oct 5 2012, 02:58 PM Post #8 |
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Candy flavored Death
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How is the time of the watch decided? |
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| Blackus | Oct 5 2012, 03:06 PM Post #9 |
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It's time is like a normal watches, the only different thing about it is the numbers, for the abilities' of course. |
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| Asylum | Oct 5 2012, 06:47 PM Post #10 |
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The effect is still too powerful for the conditions. You'll probably have to make it so that it can steal only 1 aura per hit and can only store up to like 6. Besides that, it is still lacking in conditions to its activation- stealing people's aura upon cutting them is too powerful an ability when the only real condition is that it has to be near noon or midnight (you should also specify how near). For example, try a condition like having to go through some sort of 2 or so minute ritual in order to summon it, then must cut himself every three posts to keep it active, and perhaps the more aura he has stolen the more of a strain keeping it summoned puts on his body. Also, change its rank to 2. |
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