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[Approved] Ai Enma[Archived]
Topic Started: Aug 21 2012, 10:34 PM (1,164 Views)
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× General Information

Name: Ai Enma
Gender: Female
Age: 14
Height: 5'1
Weight: 100 lbs
Species: Human
Appearance:
Ai has a small, petite body frame. Pretty, but with a blank emotionless expression on her face. She likes to dress in kimonos or long gowns. Occasionally, she likes to parade around in a school girls uniform. There is an air or nobility around her, and even though her attitude is to be frowned upon, her appearance is somewhat alluring.

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Profession: Archaeological Hunter
Reputation: 0 (Rank H)
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× Physical Statistics

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Aura:16
Might:8
Agility:10
Endurance:8
Accuracy:8

× Nen Techniques

Basic Nen Techniques

Hatsu Affinity:Manipulation


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Hatsu Theme: Plant Manipulation
General Hatsu Description:
Her ability is to manipulate plants and accelerate their growth. She can enhance dominant traits of plants to a ten fold by infusing them with nen making them efficient tools. She uses them for a variety of uses so her ability can be classified as supportive.
General Hatsu Conditions:
Although she can use any plants for specific purposes, their are certain breeds that are more efficient than most that is why for certain techniques she brings specific seeds with her so she can use them as mediums.

Hatsu Techniques


× Non-Nen Techniques

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Edited by ilyria, Aug 31 2012, 11:40 AM.
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I added the method most likely to defeat the vines.
The claming effect, if you mean calming effect of the 2nd ability, generally its meant for allies since its a recuperative ability. But if the person doesnt want to be any medical attention all he needs to do is increase his Ten.
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Asylum
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For Sentient Garden, being able to just manipulate any plant or seed she touches/within range at will with no real conditions isn't approvable, imo. Make some sort of strong condition and/or requirement to use that limits her/makes the ability more difficult to use. Besides that, complete and utter control over any kind of plantlife like that would probably be higher than r3.

When it comes to seeds she carries around and the ability is compatible, I suggest making a list defining each one she can use this ability on (with the one you've listed to start) and then you can add more by paying TP later. This would prevent situations where you just so happen to be carrying a seed to some strange plant that would solve some problem that comes up (a river? Oh, I'll use my canoe plant seed and sail across).

Can Bloom Patch be used on enemies to make them tired mid-fight? I suggest adding a condition where it takes some uninterrupted time to prepare so you can't just pull out a flower and make an attacking bandit fall asleep mid-swing.
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Actually bloom patch wasnt mean to be an offensive ability. Its sleeping effect is so a person in pain will fall asleep so he/she wont feel the pain anymore, also when they wake up theyll feel invigorated. Ill just remove that to avoid further misunderstanding.
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Umibouzu
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Didn't we say Sentient Garden can only be used by seeds youve had with you?
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Its not sentient garden anymore i did what asylum said.
And yes seeds I brought with me hence devil vine seeds.
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Zephistopheles
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the Spirit that denies

i think with the new limitations (and knowing how the ability was intended) the character is grand.

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ilyria
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Yey one more ^_^
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Asylum
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A few things:
-[50/50] should be [0/50]
-Rank 1 Non Nen Techs are basically things that anyone can do with a little practice and don't cost any TP, so [14/16] would be [12/16]
-How much mass of vines can each seed grow to? Infinite? You'll have to give it a set limit and if you want to make so that you can germinate/manipulate more than so much at once, you'll need a more limiting condition than just having to have touched them at some point.
-How long does the soothing aroma/animal repellent parts of Bloom Patch last?
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It can grow as much as it wants as long as it doesnt exceed the 15 meter limit, that means 15x15 meters.15 meters above,15 meters below,and 15 around. That's how much mass it can grow, its not like I would simultaneously fill the whole space with my vines. For the limits im stomped, I dont know what limitations your expecting to get from me. The limit was it should be a specific seed and that she should have touched it with her bare skin. Also that it must be within 15 meters of her for it to germinate, if it goes beyond that limit it wont germinate or she looses control over it. The 1 post germination period was also placed so its not instantaneous.

2nd skill "usually 3 posts before the injury heals".
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Another limitation.
She gets easily dehydrated then she uses this ability making her thirsty. He has to take a sip of water every 7 posts or the vines will wither and die.
Can grow max of 10 seeds that doesn't branch out, but they can grow as long as they want as long as they dont go outside the 15 meter radius.
Each vine can only regrow 5 times max when its hacked off.

If you approve of this ill add it to the main profile.
Edited by ilyria, Aug 30 2012, 11:30 PM.
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