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[Approved] Daisuke Akihiko[Archived]
Topic Started: Aug 21 2012, 01:29 PM (530 Views)
Ashe
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× General Information

Name: Daisuke Akihiko
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Height: 145 cm
Weight: 45 kg
Species: human
Appearance: Daisuke has a red short hair, his bangs are long enough to reach the end of his eyes and it looks like its covering some part of his eyes too, the hair completely covers the back of Daisuke’s head too. Every hair in his body is all in the color of red. He doesn’t have any other special hair or body hair due to the fact that he’s born to not have any. Due to being young and very careful of what he does in his body, his body looks clean and fresh. Daisuke has a fair white smooth clean skin and his body build isn’t much muscular but rather simple. He usually wears a simple polo shirt and a simple red tank top under it, he would wear a red slacks and wears a red belt. He usually uses a red pair of shoes and a white pair of socks.

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Profession: Crime hunter
Reputation: 0 (Rank H)
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× Physical Statistics

[0/0]
[0/50]

Aura: 5
Might: 8
Agility: 8
Endurance: 8
Accuracy: 20

× Nen Techniques

Basic Nen Techniques

Hatsu Affinity:


[0/6]
[0/0]


Hatsu Theme:
General Hatsu Description:
General Hatsu Conditions:

Hatsu Techniques


× Non-Nen Techniques

[16/16]
Techniques
Edited by Ashe, Aug 22 2012, 10:12 PM.
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Asylum
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Sorry, but raising a stat from 32 to 33 costs 2 SP, not 1, so you've currently spent 51 SP rather than the allotted 50. Besides that, [X/16] should read [16/16].

Lastly, a technique that basically says you can autohit anything within a certain range isn't allowed. You could say that your char can quickly master the use of any ranged weapon if he picks one up, but auto-hitting as the description seems to imply is out of the question.
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Ashe
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i made the edits now hopefully there's no more problems
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Zephistopheles
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the Spirit that denies

well if Asylum's math is correct there shouldn't be any more problems.
approved 1/2
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Umibouzu
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Killing Fun Since 2001

Regardless of whether of not you use Nen, you have to leave the Basic Techniques in the profile.

Im apprehensive about this profile because basically, you arent able to fight at all. A single person with some skill in Ren means that you cant hurt them, from any range. And without a weapon (unless some stupid new rule is in place) you cant do anything. Im saying this now because you will see the large difference between you and other players because you choose to place all your points and skills without any sort of techniques in a fighting style that is at a supreme disadvantage.

You dont have to make any changes, but it's just something you should be aware of.
Edited by Umibouzu, Aug 22 2012, 02:21 PM.
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Ashe
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i understand what your saying umi so i balanced my stats a bit as for Nen, well i'm good not having any for now.

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Umibouzu
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Killing Fun Since 2001

I see nothing else wrong with this profile, so 2/2
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