[Approved] Kain's Nen Adjustment

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[Approved] Kain's Nen Adjustment
Topic Started: Aug 19 2012, 02:04 AM (173 Views)
פּKain	Aug 19 2012, 02:04 AM Post #1
Posts: 238 Group: Global Moderator Member #48 Joined: Feb 29, 2012	Character Adjustment Template Clean Character Adjustment Template © Hunter אּ Hunter RPG 2009-2011 Name: Alistair "Kain" Oozuru Adjustment: Hatsu Ability Old: Spoiler: click to toggle Technique Name: Black Betty Technique Category: Emission Technique Rank: Rank 3 Description: A nen ability that materializes a pair of rugar .22 pistols w/ .223 silencers. The Guns themselves are no different from normal rugar’s except they’re nearly indestructible as nen weapons. The special ability endowed with the nen blasts is that there are various ways Alistair can fire them, e.g. various blast types. * Normal Nen Blast: 3in diameter, Explodes on impact (8 shots), 3 sec between each shot. 10 might. 2 post cooldown. * Vector Shot: 1m diameter, Explodes on impact (4 shots at once) maneuverable to shift positions once. 5 might. 2 post cooldown Conditions: Neither shots above can be at the same time. (e.g. cannot be used in the same post) Black Betty can only be used once he has been engaged in battle. Additionally, Black Betty’s stamina usage will increase +5 if the target is not a criminal. The stuff in parenthesis is how much he can fire in a single post. But always one at a time, and the "at once" is how much comes out when he squeezes the trigger. Range: His Rugars have a range of 60 meters. Effect Each blast travels with the speed of a normal bullet. Cooldown: 4 post cooldown. New: Spoiler: click to toggle Hatsu Theme: Black Betty General Hatsu Description: An emission ability that utilizes his nen to cover his hands in a sentient, nen that takes the shape of 2 black rugar pistols covering his thumb, index, and middle fingers. Kain is able to project a powerful nen from either hand. General Hatsu Conditions: As a tool for his self-imposed Justice, Kain must ask permission for his ability to grant him a certain percentage of its strength, basically a loan of power. Hatsu Techniques Technique Name: Double Homicide Type: Offensive Technique Category: Emission Technique Rank: Rank 4 Description: Kain's most common and most powerful technique that involves him concentrating his aura into single or multiple focal points using his hands. His ability gives him the power to affect a general area on multiple scales; Small, Medium, Large. Conditions: Kain must ask permission for his ability to grant him a certain percentage of its strength, basically a loan of power. Range: 45 meters. Effect: Double Homicide is a technique that enables him to change the size of the area of effect of his nen bullets by changing the size of the bullet and the amount of nen placed in it. with 25% power, the nen bullet has about the same effect as a normal nen bullet, semi-full auto available; At 50% power the nen bullet is about the size of a nen blast and has the effect of a .50 caliber rifle, Semi-auto available; at 100% or Full Power, Kain's nen blast is about 4x the size of a nen blast and the same effect as an Artillery gun, semi-auto available. . Cooldown: 25% takes 5% aura per post usage, 1 post. 50% takes 10% of Kain's aura per post usage, 2 posts. 100% , prolonged usage of full power (3 post) will leave Kain in an exhausted state, each full powered blast takes 15% of Kain's aura. 6 posts Thanks: TY to whoever takes this into their care. o.o Source: http://s1.zetaboards.com/Hunter_X_Hunter_RPG/topic/4710658/1/#new [/font] Edited by Kain, Aug 25 2012, 01:02 PM.



הּZephistopheles	Aug 19 2012, 10:38 AM Post #2
the Spirit that denies Posts: 904 Group: Administrator Member #28 Joined: Oct 8, 2011	i'd approve of this but seeing how this is a reworking of your hatsu its probably better to wait for a second oppinion on the topic. in this spirit: Approved 1/2



Umibouzu	Aug 19 2012, 10:58 AM Post #3
Killing Fun Since 2001 Posts: 497 Group: Member Member #24 Joined: Sep 27, 2011	The last two conditions are highly subjective. You wouldn't even need nen to beat a normal person, so that point is moot, and you would need prior knowledge of all the criminals activities otherwise you can decide what he's committed is petty. And naturally, you can choose whoever is good or evil IRP, so that point is moot too. Conditions have to limit you, they cant be loophole that can be exploited at your whim. And if you are using your Nen for the percentages (for now I assume you are) then their have to be obvious drawbacks to using 100% of your aura to attack.



פּKain	Aug 19 2012, 08:51 PM Post #4
Posts: 238 Group: Global Moderator Member #48 Joined: Feb 29, 2012	The third one is kinda a limit as it limits who i can actually go all out against. The gist of it is basically to weigh the user's own feelings against what he actually knows, thus leaving the ultimate judgement down to his own ability's will. (which is totally unbiased lol). Also, if he doesn't know the enemy is a criminal, then he can't really use his ability to it's max now can he? :D loophole. The two rules have been editted slightly as well as a drawback to my ability.



Umibouzu	Aug 20 2012, 08:16 PM Post #5
Killing Fun Since 2001 Posts: 497 Group: Member Member #24 Joined: Sep 27, 2011	We're not talking IRP here. You ultimately choose, in a mission or thread, whether someone is good or evil, and since you as a player can choose who it does and does not affect in a topic, it doesnt restrict you in any way. For example, Your hatsu could work if you left it in the hands of an admin or mod to ultimately make the call, but since you as the player are choosing who is right or wrong in a topic, it doesn't limit you in any way.



פּKain	Aug 21 2012, 12:14 AM Post #6
Posts: 238 Group: Global Moderator Member #48 Joined: Feb 29, 2012	Ok i eliminated the criminal part with a better one :D



Umibouzu	Aug 23 2012, 02:03 PM Post #7
Killing Fun Since 2001 Posts: 497 Group: Member Member #24 Joined: Sep 27, 2011	Again, "Having the Advantage" can mean a lot of things. He could have better weapons, more guys, be stronger, you could be poisoned, weakened, hurt or even holding back and your ability would still activate. Ill just tell you now, the initial condition is fine. You do not need to make this harder for yourself when, after the 1st condition, it is good. This is a starting hatsu, so itll grow stronger on its own, there's no need to give it a power-boost when it doesnt need one. Double Homicide has too large a range, 100 meter is far to large an area, cut it in thirds and we'll have a deal. As with all emission abilities, their has to be a debuff for using a percentage of your nen (especially 100%). We typically just remove the XX% from your aura for a set amount of posts until it cools down.



פּKain	Aug 24 2012, 08:02 PM Post #8
Posts: 238 Group: Global Moderator Member #48 Joined: Feb 29, 2012	alright, its been edited



Umibouzu	Aug 24 2012, 10:11 PM Post #9
Killing Fun Since 2001 Posts: 497 Group: Member Member #24 Joined: Sep 27, 2011	You didnt describe what -50% is. Im assuming from your aura, but otherwise, the other abilities require a debuff too. Since you are literally throwing part of your aura at people, it is going to cost you to remove 20% from your own defenses.



פּKain	Aug 25 2012, 01:02 PM Post #10
Posts: 238 Group: Global Moderator Member #48 Joined: Feb 29, 2012	check it



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