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Christophe Benou.

Christophe Benou..

Christophe Benou...

Grey smoke filled the dark, dingy dorm room. She whispered his name surprising her self at how shaky it came out. Swallowing hard starting to regret going through with it.What if the legend was true. Every one on there campus had heard the legend of Christophe Benou[be-noua].They said if you said his name three times he would show himself. A classic urban legend . Some compare it to Bloody Mary. Others candy man. What ever he was , tonight she would find out. A tiny gasp left her thin lips as a dark shadow appeared. The dark figure continue to walk forward through the foggy smoke. This all was creeping her out. Just a moment ago none of this was here. She tried pinching her self. No luck. This was not a dream.

"You call for me?" a deep voice called out from the shadows.

The bottom up her lip quivered. Not believing this was happening to her.

" Come on ma speak up?"

Curiosity struck her. She wanted to know, what he looked like, why did he sound so young? And how did he become what he is?She stared down at her wigi board. The arrow still pointed on yes.

"I'm here."

That was all he needed to here. He made his self appear to her in his human form.

Hewas smiling from ear to ear. Her fear was making him powerful. So powerful he could touch her.


Her eyes hazel eyes scanned his whole attire. From his handsome face to his muscular physic. This was all too real.

"What are you? How are you?" She uttered

"I'm everything you want and more " With that he placed a kiss on her trembling lips. Silencing all the eager questions she had yet to ask. His hands rubbed down her sides. She was so lost into his kiss she had forgotten what he was... or at least what she had heard. His tongue felt like heaven as it swirled in her mouth. Shortly after she felt slight pain. His hands made there ways across her chest. He placed his palm directly across her chest and exhaled feeling her heart beat.It was beating faster then the average heart. With a swift motion he balled his palm squeezing it tight. Each time he squeezed she felt like he was tugging on her heart. Soon after her body went numb. She looked down and saw a hole in her chest. No more thoughts. She had met her maker.
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Edited by Mrs. Brown, Sep 9 2010, 05:07 PM.
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" This is channel 7 news, reporting live at Chelsea College dorm where Shauna Riley a 19 year old sophomore has been found heartless." " No one has any information yet on who did it and how it happened." " The only thing we know so far is that her roommate found her dead this morning at 5 am, when she came from a homecoming party.""This case is still under investigation, back to you Gary, this is Rose Marina ,Channel 7 news."

Kelly looked at the screen shaking her head. She wasn't a friend of Shauna but she had her in a few of her classes before. From what she observed the girl didn't deserve a death like that.

" That shit is sad."

Her roommate said taking a seat next to her.

"Didn't you know her Alicia?"

"Yea. We were friends."

The two friends sat in silence.

Both thinking of the recent event.

"Would you go with me to her funeral."

Kelly thought about it then slowly nodded her head.

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Rain drop's the size of gum drops ripped through the Grey sky taking the mood of the people inside of the Riley's home. After the funeral . and after her will was read they through a little reception for the friends and family who supported them through their time of need. The Riley's where not originally from United Kingdom. They are a upper class couple from the United States.Shauna was there only daughter, so they spoiled her. When she asked them to go to the uk for college , they quickly asked how much she needed. They visited several Art schools with her until she fell in love with Chelsea College . They knew it would be hard having her being so far away so they bought a vacation house near the school for themselves. When the holidays came around they would come to her.

"I'd like to take the chance to thank every one for coming here today." Mr. Riley announced.

His wife stood next to him unable to even speak. Her ebony face was flushed red. She looked like she was ready to loose her balance any minute.


Alicia occupied the seat next to Kelly. On her lap sat a black box she received after the funeral. She promised her self she wouldn't open it until she had gotten to her dorm.

Alicia looked around the room one last time she could no longer take being in this atmosphere she had to leave.

She looked over at Kelly who looked as if she was thinking the same thing.

"Ready to go?" Alicia mouthed

"yea." Kelly mouthed back. They picked up there belongings in headed out the door. On there way to the car , Alicia noticed some one was following them. She didn't want to jump into conclusions so she didn't make a big deal about it. When she stopped in front of her car though she realized they did to. Kelly noticed and started starring.

A women about 5'4 stood in front of them dressed in an all black short tube top dress. She had a black Vail covering her face.

"May I help you?" Alicia asked annoyed.

It came out rude even though she didn't attend it to.

"It's me girl.. Keisha."

"Keisha?"

"Yes Keisha..." She said removing the vial from her face.

Danielle exhaled once she realized who it was. Keisha and her had been friends since freshmen year. Her, Keisha ,Shauna where the best of friends back then. Some how they grew apart during the summer.

"What are you guys doing after this?" Keisha asked as the rain drops cascaded down her face.

"Well first getting in this car then back to our dorm." Kelly replied.

"Do you mind if I come with you? I really don't want to be alone right now."

"Nah we don't mind" Alicia said with a shrug.

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The three sat on the dorm couch talking. Alicia and Keisha where catching up while Kelly was getting to know Keisha.

"So what did you get from the will?" Alicia asked Keisha.

"She gave me her diary. And school note books. You?"

Alicia pulled out the black box she practically held in her hand all day and took the top off of it.

"She got me this."

The three women looked inside the box to see a wooden wigi board.

"You gonna use it? " Kelly asked looking at Alicia.

She shrugged her shoulders.

"Not today though."

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Edited by Mrs. Brown, Sep 7 2010, 02:31 AM.
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Three more minutes. Keisha thought to herself starring at her laptop screen. Her boy friend would be coming home soon. It had been two weeks now since Shauna's funeral and the whole college was talking. The stories they told her freaked her out so much she hadn't even touch the notebook and diary she had left her. Just the thought of it gave her goose bumps. Keisha bit her bottom lip and looked at the laptop time again. Mondays where the hardest days for her...every one she knew had a class in the morning. That left her alone in her dorm. Keisha had a phobia of being alone. When she signed up for Chelsea College her main concern was for her to be in a dorm with some one else. They placed her in the pair up program. They paired up different students who where coming to the school with people there age and sex. Freshmen never got paired up with the opposite sex in their school. Once she met Shauna they instantly became friends. Even though they both grew up in different parts of the world they had so much in common. That all changed in the summer though.
Both girls wanted to move out of the freshman's dorm because they where no longer newbies. The only problem was Keisha wanted her boyfriend of a year to move in the new place with her. Her boyfriend would be coming from VA to London and after being away from his so long she wanted him as close to her as possible. Shauna on the other hand didn't feel comfortable staying with Keisha and her boyfriend. So in the beginning of this semester they had gone there separate ways. Keisha had got a new bigger dorm with her boyfriend. While Shauna got a new dorm and a new roommate. The two grew apart.

A gust of wind blew into the room causing the note books to fall on the floor. Startled Keisha leaned over and picked them up, placing them back on the desk.Once she took her seat in the chair the note book flew against the tiled floor.Keisha got up looking around to find the window open. She didn't remember opening it.Shrugging her shoulder she decided to pick the note book up.Looking down she realized the note book was open, oddly to one page. While the other note book pages continued to flip this note book stayed steady. She felt like it was a sign. Being that Keisha was very superstitious. She picked the book up started reading.




Dear Diary,


Today in English class the teacher told us to write and essay. Each person got the chance to dig in a hat to retrieve a tiny paper with there subject on it. The topic I got stuck with was Urban legend. As you may know diary I'm a scary cat. I won't even fall asleep unless there is some form of light in the room. smile.gif Maybe ....just maybe.. i got subject this is for a reason...maybe its time to be brave... well ill try.



Sighing Keisha leaned back. She indeed missed Shauna. Just reading this brought back memories. Now she regretted picking her boyfriend over her friend.She wished she could have hung out with her a bit more. Maybe she would spend less time with her boyfriend and go shopping with her. Before he had moved out there Shauna was always there for her.They would spend most there days doing what they both loved to do the most. Shop. Keisha loved showing Shauna all the mall's around London... they could never do that again.


Wanting to know more Keisha flipped the page. Some how this was making her feel closer to Shauna.



Dear Diary,

I decided to go with the Urban Legend around school. The infamous Christophe Benou. I had always been to scared to actually do it. But something inside of me is brave this week. Later today I'm going to the library to do some research on him. Everything that I do , I will incorporate into the essay that I'm writing. Well gotta go now.




A little smile crept across Keisha's face. Her personality was so strong she could hear Shauna reading the words in her head.



Dear Diary,

I'm going to start the experiment now. Every single thing I do will be in my school Note books. So diary let me tell you what I heard about this Benou dude. I interviewed a kid in the library asking him what he heard. He told me. Christophe Benou went to this school back in the 60's. Rumor is he was a lady's man. He slept with several girls around campus. Each time he did it he would lead them on saying they would be together. That never happened. Some even said he got some girl pregnant.He'd go as far as dating some until they gave in then after he would leave. But one day he messed with the wrong one. They said she wasn't all there in the brain to begin with. He dated her for a year before she gave in to him. Then after that just like the others he left her. They said she was in love with him and vowed to steal his heart the way he stole hers. Before the week was over Benou was found dead.. she had shot him three times. The bullets damaged his cardio. .... No one completely knows how but she died before she got to prison. Every since then people say if you stand in front of a mirror in the dark and say Christophe Benou three times..he would come and take your heart... in the hopes of it replacing his. My goal here was to find out how is his spirit still roaming this earth? And is this legend even true... Hmmph we will soon find out diary.



Another gust of wind came through the window, this one sent chills down her spine. For some odd reason she felt like something or some one was in the room with her. The goose bumps which where one hidden made them selves known. As this eerie feeling remained in the room. Tiny strands of hair moved out of place as the wind blew so hard all the papers in the note book scattered recklessly on the tiled floor.

She got up and went to the window which was on the opposite side of the room. With her back facing the door she had fell to realize a dark figure was approaching her. What she did feel though was the room becoming cooler. So cool that every time she took another breath the heat of her mouth appeared in the air. Slam! She knew something was going on.Her grandmother use to tell her when she was younger that when spirits where in the room, the climate would change. Slowly she turned her head in the direction of where the loud sound came from.

"Bae I'm home,"

Keisha exhaled turning her head towards the voice. The room had gotten warmer. The shadow which was watching her had now ran off the wall and out of the window that she had thought she closed.


"Maurice?"

"Yes."

Maurice walked to Keisha pulling her into a hug. He had been thinking about her the whole time he was in class. The last few days she was acting funny and he didn't like leaving her alone. He understood that she was mourning her friends death so he made sure he did everything in his abilities to keep her calm.

But unfortunately today he had to go to class. It was the last day of class the semester. Finals.It was bitter sweet because even though he had to leave Keisha alone for the morning , he knew that he would be with her for 3 months as they went on there winter break. They planned to spend half of it with her family and half of it with his family.

Yes the winter break, they both where going to meet each others families.
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I know what some of you have realized yep they look alike and there is a reason for that... you guys will soon find out :)
Edited by Mrs. Brown, Sep 7 2010, 02:56 AM.
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" Alicia I swear that thing moved." Kelly said in a shaky voice.

Alicia looked down at the wooden wigi board.The wigi board stayed at the word yes. The same word it had been on since the moment she took it out that box she received it in.

"It's on the same word Kelly."

Nervously Kelly shook her head.She was tired of trying to explain to Alicia. She knew what she saw.

A light knock came from the front of the door.Relieved Alicia walked away from the living room. Looking through the peep hole she saw Keisha standing there with some books in her hands. She unlocked the door and stepped aside letting her in. She knew something was up. Keisha never came over. The day that she asked to come with them from the funeral was actually her first visit to Alicia's dorm. Like Shauna, Keisha ignored Alicia too after her boyfriend moved in with her. There was no real reason for there friendship to die down..it just did.

"Hey how you holding up?" Keisha asked looking at Alicia.

"Still coping," Alicia was starting to get used to having her around again. This was just like old times.

Keisha's eyes scanned the dorm until it fell upon the wooden object.

"Have you use it yet?" She asked with a raise brow.

"Used what?"

"The wigi board?"

"Nahh.. I don't even know how too... Kelly said she thinks it's moving."

" I don't think, I SAW." Kelly interjected

" Well I read Shauna's diary." Keisha blurted out.

She had to share with some one what she discovered.

"Really?" Alicia asked her eye brows raised in curiosity.

"Yea."

"So what you find in it."

Keisha chewed on her bottom lip taking a seat next to Alicia on the couch.

" Well , Before she died she was writing this essay."

" Yea."

"It wasn't just any essay .. it was about the urban legend of Christophe Benou."

Silence swept the room. That subject always brought that kind of reaction to students who attended Chelsea.

"So what in the bloody hell are you trying to say?" Alicia shouted hoping out her seat.

Keisha looked down at the tiles feeling even sillier then she did before she said it.

"Are you tryna to say that the explanation of our friends death is a duppy!"

" Don't yell at me ALICIA.. And yea I think that we should find out more about him."

Alicia shook her head. All of this was angering her. First Kelly and that bloody wigi board now Keisha was standing here telling her a ghost killed Shauna. Alicia didn't even believe in this type stuff. In her world ghost where just a fable. They where in the same category with Santa clause and the Easter bunny.

" Keisha you've gone mad and I will not tolerate it ... you haven't even spoken to Shauna in a year. You didn't even say hi to either of us for a year. Now your here every day and trying to pretend that everything is the same."

" I was busy."

"Rubbish! Get out."

"what?" Keisha asked furrowing her brows.

"OUT NOOOOW!

A tiny scratching sound could be heard inside of the dorm. Both girls including Kelly looked around the room trying to find out where the mysterious sound was coming from. Then the lights flickered turning on and off. The wigi board started spelling something out.


I A M H E R E

"Bloody rose" Alicia whispered in fear.

"Now do you believe me."Kelly mumbled

Edited by Mrs. Brown, Sep 9 2010, 04:01 AM.
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The three girls say on the ground with the wigi board in the middle. Keisha had the note books in her lap as her hand was stretched out forward to touch the wigi board. Alicia and Kelly where in a similar position.


"So whose going to ask the questions here."

"I think you should since she left it to you."

Sighing Alicia placed her hand on the wigi board and exhaled slowly.

Alicia eyes scanned the wooden board.

"Where do I start?'

She asked still shocked about what just occurred. Minutes ago she did not believe in ghost or anything like them.. but now she doubting herself. There had to be an explanation for what just happen here. She had a feeling the board would have the answers.

"Well maybe you should start off by asking it's name." Kelly commented

Alicia nodded her head.

"Maybe we should close our eyes to it'll help us be focus."

Raising a brow Keisha looked at Kelly.

"How do you know all of this

"Because , my grandmother use to communicate with the dead."

Kelly had experience in the paranormal activity department. That's why when the board was shaking she knew
a spirit was trying to make it's self known. From what she grew up seeing there is no doubt in her mind that the
unexplainable existed.

" Well okay let's close our eyes then." Keisha whispered

All three girls closed there eyes.

"Now every body focus on something.And will you feel like it Alicia asked the questions.. let it come naturally."

The room was quiet as each girl was focus on what ever there minds would wander on.

"What's your name." Alicia asked.

The room grew cold as the girls felt there hands shake. Alicia eyes popped open to see the wigi board shaking as if something was moving it. The only problem was there was nothing there. When she looked around the room she saw that Keisha and kelly both had pulled there hands off of it. Keisha had her hand covering her mouth in shock. While Kelly sat there shook. The girls her the sound of wood being scratch and looked down to see the board spelling out something.


S H A U N A

"Sh.. sha?" Kelly said with a puzzled face.

"NO it's Shauna guys!"

Edited by Mrs. Brown, Sep 15 2010, 06:35 PM.
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Keisha licked her lips they where becoming extremely dry. Between the unbelievably cold temperature of the room to the unexpected contact of there dead friend. She was parched. The only problem was she was stuck in the Kris cross position she had placed her self in on the floor. Her honey colored orbs moved around the room just to fall on the wigi board again. She was trying to pretend it wasn't moving but every one in the room including her knew that it was.

Kelly had her eyes clamped shut ; she was trying to keep the connection strong. Alicia just kept right on asking the wigi questions. So far she had found out Shauna was murdered, that her killer was a male and that he killed her so fast she didn't get the chance to make a sound. Keisha felt tiny knots slowly form in her stomach. She didn't want to hear any more.

"Okay guys I think we asked enough."

"One more question.. And I'll be done for the day."
Edited by Mrs. Brown, Oct 5 2010, 06:36 AM.
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