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| Mrs. Brown | Jan 20 2010, 09:44 PM Post #1 |
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![]() "Kebi, It will happen when it can." Hasani said starring in the greenish orbs of his wife of seven years. They where in an arrange marriage. His parents Kleoptra the XXI and Ialu where the previous leaders of Egypt they prayed to the gods for a boy so that he could carry the genes of his father and last name remained. And now that it was his turn his dear wife was having complications getting pregnant. They had tried through the whole seven years that they where married and still no luck. At first Kebi was calm about the situation she prayed to Amaunet the god of fertility at night. Hoping one day she would get pregnant but still had not seen that day. "But when Hasani." She whined agitated the whole thought her not being able to carry the next Pharaoh made her sick to her stomach. It was embarrassing to her because she was picked to bare the next child to be on the throne because her family had a great fertility history. She loved her dear husband and her heart broke each time she found out she wasn't pregnant. " When the time is right Kebi." He responded calmly He ran his hand through her long locks that reached to her bottom. He ran his hands through her hair which felt as soft as silk yet the color of sand. She was perfection to him her lips which her plump and pink to her exotic green eyes. The fact that she wasn't getting pregnant bothered him but he wouldn't let it show. For he is the man in the relationship he can not show weakness. As the head of the house hold he should remain strong.. a warrior ... he had no time to grunt and moan about his feelings . On top of that he has a whole country to rule. A country measured 1,000,450 squares per km in land only. He had so much on his mind.. and as a leader he knew that there was never time to sit around and cry when things didn't go well he just came up with another option. This situation was no different. He had spoken to a spiritual adviser who told him that in order for him to get his pharaoh son.. he would have to sleep with a virgin, and although he loved his dear wife.. this was the only option there for him.. for her.. for them all.. --------- "Sir your bath water is running." The servant said looking down at all times. She was trained that it was disobedient and in a way rude to stare royalty in the eyes. " Is the virgin in there waiting." "Yes sir." she replied briefly before quickly opening the door way for him. Hasani nodded his head in approval and signal her to leave. "That'll be all." Walking up to the bathtub he saw a girl sitting near it with a only a towel shielding her nakedness. She looked shaky about the whole situation as if she didn't want to do this. "Relaxed." he whispered as he walked over to her. Her trembling limbs came to a complete hault. " Stand up..." He ordered. Doing as she was told she rose to her feet. "disrobe." Slowly the gold towel fell of her petite frame and on to the well decorated tile. " Your in shape ."he said admiring her hour glass figure. She had about a 42 C cup a slim waist and small back to complement it her stomach was toned not as toned as his wife's though.... n fact he'd never seen a person build like his wife she was built to perfection almost surreal. As he thought about it he ran his hand through her long straight hair. "What's your name servant?" "Nafrit." she said just above a whisper. A smirk made it's way across his face. " Your name mean's Virgin...are you really one?" " Yes." " Well you won't be after tonight." -------------- Visuals* Hasani Kebi Nafrit Edited by Mrs. Brown, Jan 23 2010, 09:13 PM.
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| urbancouture | Jan 21 2010, 03:27 AM Post #2 |
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OMG Liz your writing style has improved, i love it I still caught little grammar and spelling mistakes but thats w/e thats the English teacher in me coming out you've come so far im so proud of you i love the plot and how you intertwined history into it you've definitely got a hit with this one babes i can't wait for the next add Breezy gives this two thumbs waaaaaay up!!! |
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| Mrs. Brown | Jan 21 2010, 03:36 AM Post #3 |
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aww thanks love yea you know im always gonna have the errors but its the concept lmaoo yea hopefully im really putting alot in this one im stil adding and there will be alot of history you will know alot about egypt once im done |
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| urbancouture | Jan 21 2010, 03:37 AM Post #4 |
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i look forward to it
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| Mrs. Brown | Jan 21 2010, 03:38 AM Post #5 |
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oh you should your baby boo comes in soon |
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| urbancouture | Jan 21 2010, 03:39 AM Post #6 |
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WOOT WOOT all that sexiness yesssssssssssss
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| Mrs. Brown | Jan 21 2010, 03:40 AM Post #7 |
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ewwwwwwwwwww u probably got his theme up |
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| urbancouture | Jan 21 2010, 03:53 AM Post #8 |
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no its lady gaga |
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| Mrs. Brown | Jan 21 2010, 03:54 AM Post #9 |
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ooooh cuteeeee red wine, kONvict! GAGA aaaaaa yea yeaaa i had a little bit to much O O O OOOOO |
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| urbancouture | Jan 21 2010, 03:55 AM Post #10 |
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smdh |
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