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| INN0CENT_CHILD | Oct 28 2008, 05:35 PM Post #1 |
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-Walks out slowly from her hiding place- I was bored so.. Here's what I got... -Hands out a piece of paper- [A Day to Remember] ©® by INNOCENT_CHILD Oliver woke up with a shock; he had a vision of his past, Julia, the Battle; The Meepers and Angarlings. Meepers, it's shaped are a bat's body with its furry skins and wings, but its head was a fanged nightmare; a scaly mixture of piranha and serpent, with rows of gleaming sharp teeth's sticking out of its bloody mouth and the Angarlings are a mixture of gargoyles and dragons. Looking around, he saw the objects in his room. With a sigh of relief, he lies on the bed and closes his eyes for a while to calm himself down. After several minutes, he finally woke up, walking towards the window side. He blinked hard and looked out from the window to the north and without thinking, staring out looking at the flat blue sea, but it seems that it still doesn't help calming him down from his dreams. He looked at the letter Julia had meant to give it to him. "I know Julia...I know..." he said to himself. [Letter from Julia] ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [Just So You Know] ©® Just so you know, No matter how sad you are, How painful you felt inside, Remember that I'm always here; To cheer you up. Just so you know, No matter how long you suffered, How many tears you're dropped, Remember that I'm always here; To make you smile. Just so you know, No matter how scare you are, How cold you are, Remember that I'm always here; To give you a tender hug and protect you. (It's actually a poem...) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- He remembered that day clearly, so crystal clear... Julia lies there on the ground with Oliver beside her, with her hands clutched onto the druid sapphire stone. Years ago at the age of ten, she found it not far away from Castle Radiant where there's a small hill, buried in red dirts and burned ashes. She had meant to show it to the others but instead she kept it to herself. It was once said that the druid sapphire stone she found near the small hill once belonged to a magical and powerful Witch which holds a truly magnificent strength and power. She clutched onto it tightly and felt the warm of the druid sapphire stone inside her palm. Closing her eyes as she thought of him. After the Enemies of castle everlasting had fled, The Meepers and Angarlings. There are nothing left but dead bodies and injured humans. Dead smells were everywhere scattered but nowhere. Several of the humans were badly wounded, some were injured and some were found dead. Dead bodies lied everywhere, remaining parts lay twisted on the dirt floor, some headless and some were covered with fresh blood over their dead bodies. Garments, spears and swords were everywhere. Julia's eyelids slowly fluttered open, as she turned her head to her left, trying to focus in on the scene before her. She saw a figure lying down before her eyes, its Oliver. The one she secretly adored for so long, the one she admired so. He's hurt, lying beside her. She whispers softly for that is all she had left in her strength after the war. "Oliver...You're hurt..." She felt a tugging sensation at the back of her head, wanting her to fall back into her state of restless sleep once more. She tried to move from her spot on the ground but simply couldn't find the strength to. After several moments, she had the strength to turn herself facing him, she forced herself to. Her hand twitched slightly as she tried to reach out to Oliver, She touched his cheek while tears start rolling down her cheek like little pearls saying "you mean everything to me...don't leave me now..."I'm Fine. I won't leave you..." said Oliver's calm voice; it amazed her how he always seemed to be in control of everything, even at times like this. She believed in him though. He wouldn't let anything happen to them. All they had to do was look after each other, which is what they always did. She stares into his deep bluish eyes while he stares back into her teary violet-greenish eyes and smiled back. Julia said nothing in return. She watches him struggle with the onslaught of never-ending pain. With her last breath, she said "Is this... the end of..." before she could finish it, she passed away. Leaving Oliver with the thoughtless minds of not knowing what she wanted to tell him next. He hugged her close to him, just to keep her save with no harm. He kissed her lightly on her cheek and whispers "I won't leave you. I promise". He turns to his left to face the other side, looking hard far away while tears start rolling down from his eyes knowing he could not fulfill his promise to her. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- -Waits till finish- So...what do you think?o.o -Before you could answer her she sticks a note on your forehead- :::NOTE::: Reply Back... -Runs back to her hiding place- |
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| AAngel-Chan | Oct 30 2008, 11:21 AM Post #2 |
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Death Angel
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I rate it...5/5
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| AAngel-Chan | Nov 4 2008, 08:34 AM Post #3 |
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Death Angel
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The Chomby Genie By AAngel-Chan Within the confines of the lamp, He simmers, calm, sedate. Beyond the brassy, lucid sheen, Doth Chomby lie in wait. One swipe to dust an ancient lamp, Seems the required call. A wisp of smoke, a twist of fate, He's standing, proud and tall. "Three wishes!" comes the bellowed cry, "I am at your command!" The Chomby formed of emerald wisps, Awaits your every demand. His magic strength doth know no bound, As spells he'll weave and spin. Yet the lamp is Chomby's cage, For he must dwell within. One wipe to dust that brassy lamp, And in a haze comes he. Elongated, rearing neck, He stretches, quickly free. "The Chomby Genie doth await!" Like thunder sounds his voice. And yet your wishes are just three, Be wary, make your choice. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This is just a Short Poem
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| INN0CENT_CHILD | Nov 4 2008, 02:30 PM Post #4 |
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Adventurer, lvl 10 Class
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@.@ I LOVE IT AANGEL-CHAN! I GIVE 100+++++! @.@... seriously,i love it!. |
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| INN0CENT_CHILD | Nov 4 2008, 02:31 PM Post #5 |
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Adventurer, lvl 10 Class
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>.< i keep re-read this part. Within the confines of the lamp, He simmers, calm, sedate. Beyond the brassy, lucid sheen, Doth Chomby lie in wait. One swipe to dust an ancient lamp, Seems the required call. A wisp of smoke, a twist of fate, He's standing, proud and tall. xD me likey! |
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| AAngel-Chan | Nov 6 2008, 06:10 PM Post #6 |
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Death Angel
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tnx >_> ^^ |
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| AAngel-Chan | Nov 8 2008, 11:02 AM Post #7 |
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umm another poem >_<".....weeee.. ![]() Wings of Metal By AAngel-Chan Flawless is the timing set, As quickly shall he lurch. Back and forth in perfect sync, Claws coiled 'round his perch. Precision timing, no mistake, He does not miss a beat. Beat with grinding gears doth part, Releasing programmed 'Tweet!' Whirring wheels, the wings do span, Like clockwork does head turn. Perch swings, timing does not shift, Back, forth, back, return. Flickered light on metal wings, Provides unearthly sheen. Gaze takes in surroundings quick, It's scanning, vibrant green. Data formed, the lights do drop, The gaze dims soft once more. Then with the click of grinding gears, Toward the sky he'll soar. No rustling of soft feathers here, It's wind and metal sheath. Robot Pteri, soaring high, Observing those beneath. Perching, sunlight lights his form, The metal, red and brown. Having seen what must be done, Eyes close, he powers down. I hope you guys liked it |
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| Redemption101 | Nov 14 2008, 05:14 PM Post #8 |
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(-_-") These are not DREAMS...-sighs- |
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| AAngel-Chan | Nov 15 2008, 06:55 PM Post #9 |
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Death Angel
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oh yeah 4got about it :P.... |
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| AAngel-Chan | Dec 5 2008, 09:00 PM Post #10 |
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Death Angel
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Angel Or Demon? My Results: ![]() You Are An Angel You Are A Beautiful Angel - Loving And Caring |
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