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Viewing Single Post From: Annabella Watson
antisocialist87	Aug 28 2008, 01:48 AM
Administrator Posts: 14 Group: Admins Member #1 Joined: Aug 16, 2008	While this is a pretty good app, I'll need you to fix a few things - 1. You should probably utilize proper capitalization and proper punctuation. That matters quite a bit here, actually. 2. The Sample Post, Indepth Description, Personality and Character History will need to be a bit more fleshed out. Why does her mother want to marry Annabella off to her cousin? Why did her father pass away? What was her life like prior to her dad's passing? Did she have a relatively happy childhood before her father's passing? When did her father pass away? 3. You also posted this in a section where the accepted applications are kept. I'll move your application to where the pending apps are kept. This is partially my fault because I didn't specify that very well. 4. Also, your playby is dressed in clothing from the Regency Era, which was 100 years before this RP. Edited by antisocialist87, Aug 28 2008, 10:18 AM.


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