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| DonkeyProject | Jul 6 2010, 04:53 AM Post #1 |
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v1 ![]() v2 ![]() v3 ![]() better than my last one?? mabey some text tips? http://gimpknowhow.com/topic/3531918/1/#new Edited by DonkeyProject, Jul 6 2010, 06:42 AM.
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| SheWah | Jul 6 2010, 06:09 AM Post #2 |
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wth?
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The render shouldn't be over the border. Next time you add a border, make sure it's the classic black/white. Usually, in most cases, the colored/lowered transparency ones do not work well. It is indeed better than your first one. Try to cut back on using multiple renders, cause I can see one behind your main focal, and it doesn't look good. Lighting would be kinda good if some of it went on your focal. The depth is good. |
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| DonkeyProject | Jul 6 2010, 06:15 AM Post #3 |
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yeah some light will be good and in the first one it should have been hopless but forgot the e
Edited by DonkeyProject, Jul 6 2010, 06:31 AM.
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