second try C&C
Topic Started: Jul 6 2010, 04:53 AM (154 Views)
DonkeyProject
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better than my last one??
mabey some text tips?
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Edited by DonkeyProject, Jul 6 2010, 06:42 AM.
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wth?

The render shouldn't be over the border.
Next time you add a border, make sure it's the classic black/white. Usually, in most cases, the colored/lowered transparency ones do not work well.

It is indeed better than your first one. Try to cut back on using multiple renders, cause I can see one behind your main focal, and it doesn't look good. Lighting would be kinda good if some of it went on your focal. The depth is good.
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yeah some light will be good and in the first one it should have been hopless but forgot the e
Edited by DonkeyProject, Jul 6 2010, 06:31 AM.
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