Second Try At Vector; PLEASE GIVE CnC!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Topic Started: Jul 3 2010, 06:16 AM (115 Views)
RapidFire
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Here:
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36 Layers

I WANT CnC SO I CAN IMPROVE. PLEASE GIVE IT!!!
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CraZyWolf
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Nice i like it :D
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RapidFire
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Tanks. I would like some CnC on what mistakes I possibly made.
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MyOwnWay
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I think the text stands out too much and it is too big.It takes the attention of the focal,try lowering the opacity slightly and make it smaller.

Also I think it is a little plain,try adding some vector or splatter brushes
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Chronologik
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I like men.

It looks fine to me, my only complaint is that there's not enough going on. So just do what you're doing, but add more.


R.I.P. RosaSecta
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Elec
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It's not really vector. It has some vector elements in it, but not enough for me to actually call it vector.

The boxes with the scan-lines in them contradict the flow of the render (bottom right>top left).

The random lines don't help also. They are distracting as they are the only things in all of the negative space.

If your going to smudge like that, you either need it to be the general idea behind the tag, or make it have minimal effect. You have it really big, bright, and no fade to it.

Vector art usually has really vivid colors, and yours is desaturated.


This whole critique was so you could improve. Don't take it the wrong way. ;)
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Dyablo's win. ^
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+Landon
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Looks good but needs some more stuff :) !
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