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| XIII | Apr 9 2010, 07:30 AM Post #1 |
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| Raven | Apr 9 2010, 11:17 AM Post #2 |
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he's cool. I like the overall look. But... hm. It's very empty. You should really add more, and there are some other parts i don't really like. Now the flow is kind of missing him. The c4d's are not going to him, they're going alongside him. If i were you i should try to create more flow in these directions: ![]() I pretty sure that would look better. Second, i don't like the placing of the light source. I'd like it better if it was to the bottom, his head looks much too bright at the moment. Third, i really like thes mudging in your luigi sig, i would really like it if you used some in this sig too. Try to blend him more. Last of all, you should really add text. Without text a sig always looks empty imo. And i know your good at text, have a look at your luigi sig. Very good job, keep it up! |
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| GGoodie | Apr 9 2010, 12:38 PM Post #3 |
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Hiyah *Karate Chops*
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light source at bottom = contradictory shadows on the rest of his body. It has to be somewhere at the top. |
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| Mr 005 | Apr 9 2010, 12:45 PM Post #4 |
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i dont like the render because of the weird lighting. 9/10 i would just suggest a render |
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he's cool. 












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