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Topic Started: Apr 9 2010, 07:30 AM (156 Views)
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Raven
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^.^

:P he's cool.
I like the overall look. But... hm. It's very empty. You should really add more, and there are some other parts i don't really like.

Now the flow is kind of missing him. The c4d's are not going to him, they're going alongside him. If i were you i should try to create more flow in these directions:
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I pretty sure that would look better.

Second, i don't like the placing of the light source. I'd like it better if it was to the bottom, his head looks much too bright at the moment.
Third, i really like thes mudging in your luigi sig, i would really like it if you used some in this sig too. Try to blend him more.
Last of all, you should really add text. Without text a sig always looks empty imo. And i know your good at text, have a look at your luigi sig.

Very good job, keep it up!
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Check the shizzle here biash

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GGoodie
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Hiyah *Karate Chops*

light source at bottom = contradictory shadows on the rest of his body. It has to be somewhere at the top.
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Mr 005
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i dont like the render because of the weird lighting. 9/10 i would just suggest a render
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thanks royal
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