G-Force SOTW 6 Entry
Topic Started: Apr 3 2010, 11:43 AM (184 Views)
Gabriel
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CnC please
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+Landon
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Elite
No text makes it too open. 6/10
* Newest Work *
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iGimp
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its great apart from one part -


- its man u
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...Soon
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+Landon
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Elite
Man U ????
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iGimp
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manchester united fc
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Gabriel
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Man u is the best
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GGoodie
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Hiyah *Karate Chops*

The render doesn't really blend into the signature... Its like you made the rest of it (which is sweet) then just pasted him on
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sdort


Looks like you made a really messy red bg and pasted the render on it.

edit: And you're not supposed to post it, it's supposed to be anonymous, and now a few people from G-Force know which one is yours.
Edited by sdort, Apr 3 2010, 07:17 PM.
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Synchronicity
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Sorry, but I have to agree with Sdort. Also, there's purple scattered throughout
Why does everyone look for a sig on the left?
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Thanks Elec :)
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Seamus
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man, you should have blurred and darkened the edges of the c4d, woulda made great depth :/

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Raven
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^.^

hm, it's just a plain render on a kinda messed up background. the backround looks quite good, but it doesn't really fit the render ( it looks kinda 'spacy', and the render is a man uni player :/ )
you should blend the render much more with the bg and try to add more depth.
also i would suggest that you duplicated the render and set it to soft light, to make the shadows more vivid.
the last thing i am missing is a proper light source, that would help too create more depth too.
Edited by Raven, Apr 4 2010, 06:22 AM.
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Check the shizzle here biash

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Gabriel
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thanks for feedback. i wasn't thinking about depth/blending when making it, idk why but i wasn't lol
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