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| Gabriel | Apr 3 2010, 11:43 AM Post #1 |
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CnC please
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| +Landon | Apr 3 2010, 11:55 AM Post #2 |
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Elite
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No text makes it too open. 6/10 |
* Newest Work *
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| iGimp | Apr 3 2010, 11:56 AM Post #3 |
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its great apart from one part - - its man u |
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Quiting GFX.... ...Soon | |
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| +Landon | Apr 3 2010, 11:59 AM Post #4 |
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Elite
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Man U ???? |
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| iGimp | Apr 3 2010, 12:00 PM Post #5 |
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manchester united fc |
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Quiting GFX.... ...Soon | |
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| Gabriel | Apr 3 2010, 12:09 PM Post #6 |
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Man u is the best |
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| GGoodie | Apr 3 2010, 12:12 PM Post #7 |
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Hiyah *Karate Chops*
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The render doesn't really blend into the signature... Its like you made the rest of it (which is sweet) then just pasted him on |
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I'm over here Y http://ggoodie.freehostia.com >:u
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| sdort | Apr 3 2010, 07:16 PM Post #8 |
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Looks like you made a really messy red bg and pasted the render on it. edit: And you're not supposed to post it, it's supposed to be anonymous, and now a few people from G-Force know which one is yours. Edited by sdort, Apr 3 2010, 07:17 PM.
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| Synchronicity | Apr 4 2010, 04:08 AM Post #9 |
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Your conscience
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Sorry, but I have to agree with Sdort. Also, there's purple scattered throughout |
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| Seamus | Apr 4 2010, 04:40 AM Post #10 |
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man, you should have blurred and darkened the edges of the c4d, woulda made great depth :/ |
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| Raven | Apr 4 2010, 06:21 AM Post #11 |
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hm, it's just a plain render on a kinda messed up background. the backround looks quite good, but it doesn't really fit the render ( it looks kinda 'spacy', and the render is a man uni player :/ ) you should blend the render much more with the bg and try to add more depth. also i would suggest that you duplicated the render and set it to soft light, to make the shadows more vivid. the last thing i am missing is a proper light source, that would help too create more depth too. Edited by Raven, Apr 4 2010, 06:22 AM.
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A: Yes. > Q: Are you sure? > > A: Because it reverses the logical flow of conversation. > > > Q: Why is top posting annoying in email? Check the shizzle here biash
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| Gabriel | Apr 10 2010, 05:56 AM Post #12 |
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thanks for feedback. i wasn't thinking about depth/blending when making it, idk why but i wasn't lol |
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