Azazel Cresil

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Azazel Cresil
Topic Started: May 7 2009, 08:50 PM (43 Views)
Azazel	May 7 2009, 08:50 PM Post #1
Posts: 2 Group: Members Member #76 Joined: May 7, 2009	1890 It's a dark night, the cloud's are moving in a accelerated speed as the moon is glowing blood red. A village known for it's supernatural activity has been known for it's oddly strange people. Many live isolated and many fear the unknown. However there hasn't been any death's or sighting's of any creature. Many here carry a dark secret, some of the villager's have been seen entering a strange looking cave as they afterwards disappear in it. Those are not seen after that anymore, many call it the cave of the lost and some call it a demonic pit. The truth is that after a certain age some demon's won't age no more. After that they have no choice, but to leave. However generation after generation they human's grew suspicions as they noticed it only happened to certain families. Maria Cresil is one of these people, she's a fairly normal person. her husband also left the village like there ancestor's. The villager's where keeping an eye on her as she got pregnant, this day is the day the baby is suppose to be born. The villager's think that the birth of this baby may be the cause of the weather. So they decided to be there as she gave birth. Not long after the baby was born they noticed he wasn't like everyone els, this baby had something special. As they grew tired of the strange event's they blamed her for witchcraft. The baby, named Azazel was also put to charge. They believed that Azazel was the son of the devil, however one man found it unbelievable what people feared in this boy. As Maria was being prepared for her death, she saw that the man was trying to save the baby. Maria drew the attention to herself to help the man go undetected. Azazel was brought to safety by the man. He himself couldn't take care of him so he left him at the orphanage close to the city. The man himself was worried as well, what would become of this baby. Would he once again come to his birthplace to take revenge on the villager's or would his mind stay clear and forget about this day. 1900 Azazel Cresil, Today is his 10th birthday as he celebrate's it in his new home. Today he got adopted by some nice people, He has already been adopted many time's. However each one bring's him back, every family who take's him home experiences' strange event's. They all fear the fact that this baby may be haunted by ghost's. This however doesn't concern his new family, they have big plan's for this boy. As they take him on his birthday trip they enter a strange compound. The outside looks normal, however once you enter this compound you spawn at a whole other place. This place looks evil, The wall's shaded with blood and the decoration are no more then human bone's. They Parent's explain that Azazel will stay here for a very long time, they intend on training him. As they leave a dark figure enters the room, Azazel feel's the man affront of him is strange familiar. As the man reaches out for Azazel he smiled ''Don't worry I'll take good care of you''. Azazel find's him strange, they never met and still he's being nice. As the man grab's Azazel by the arms he take's him to a yard. As he look's at the man his face begin's to change, he looks like a monster. In disbelieve Azazel run's towards the exit, the same way he got in. As he opens the door it reveal's only to be a wall. How was is this possible, Azazel think's. They came from this way, then there should be a way out. As Azazel hear's heavy footsteps behind him, he turns around and pray's to god as his first family taught him. ''God, Doesn't help our kind Azazel.'' Present Year As Azazel walks around in town, he witnesses a robbery. A old lady is being mugged and heavily beaten. As he looks down upon the them he realizes that the human race is nothing more then trash. Once they get something they desire they forget about the rest, and if they have nothing they don't try achieve it by working, they try to take it by force. Azazel is now a full grown man. He has discovered allot in his time. In his childhood he was taken to a strange man, where he learned that he himself is a demon. However there are those who wish to do harm and those who wish to keep balance. Azazel is neither, Azazel work's for the man who trained him into what he is now. His work is not a hard one. Track down your target, Kill him, leave no witnesses. He got recruited by the man when his training was complete. He trained all his life, there where no emotion left in Azazel. Only a man who obey's his superiors. Azazel has been summoned, a new mission has been made. And the man who recruited Azazel is personally going to brief him about it. Azazel appeared before the man ''Azazel, You proved yourself worthy. I have a big job for you, There is a village not far from here. They have acted out of greed and chaos, there isn't much I can do for you expect that this town....Should be burned to ashes. No one must survive, And I mean no one. '' As Azazel reacts suprised about this job, he didn't show any sign's of hesitation ''Ofcourse, I'll be right on it.'' Azazel shimmered to the location the man gave him, he found it strange. Almost familiar, like he has been here before. Azazel glared around him as he saw two young boy's looking at him. ''How did you do that !'' The young boy asked while taking a step backward's. Azazel hid his hand behind him creating a mass of energy in his hand. As he took a step forward he shot the energy ball toward the boy's as they made an attemps to run. It was however too late, The whole night was a night of terror in this town. Man after man, Women after women all being killed. Azazel was sure to leave no one behind. As he noticed a man standing behind a window he entered the house, as he created yet another energyball in his demonic hand's the man sat down and glared at Azazel. ''I knew the time would come, We are being punished for our sin's. We are not all reponsible for the loss of your mother.'' The man stood up and took a picture from his wall ''Your mother was a good women. It's a shame.....'' The energy ball in his hand began growing ''How do you know my name.'' Azazel took the man by his neck and forced him against the ceiling. Azazel hesitated for a split seconde, but then realized that the past did not mather. He closed his eye's and moved his hand to the man's stomach. As Azazel opened his eye's the man was gone, only a splater of blood remained. Azazel shimmered back to the boss, as his mind remained focused on what the old man said. Azazel reported his mission to the boss as he shimmered away, The man reached for his pocket and took out a small picture. It shows the man he just killed, the mother of Azazel and the boss himself standing next to a large tree ''Good, We finally had our revenge.'' Edited by Azazel, May 7 2009, 09:35 PM.
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James	May 7 2009, 09:01 PM Post #2
Admin Posts: 23 Group: Moderators Member #7 Joined: Sep 11, 2008	That story was really great for a first. You could have added more background about your parents, the strange man that took you. Also, I don't think a normal demon could change the weather. Add more info about the man turning you evil. Fix the paragraph that says, present year. You wrote in it that you were now old when it has only been a year.. Some spelling mistakes and grammer that could be fix. Really good attempt



Azazel	May 7 2009, 09:12 PM Post #3
Posts: 2 Group: Members Member #76 Joined: May 7, 2009	XD, Did my best. Anyway there will be more about the man who took me in, however I didn't want to spoil anything. and about the present year, I have no clue in what year the rp take's place. I presumed it was long after 1900 meaning that the present day would be like a long time after. Edit : ow nvm, I now see what you mean. Thanks for the comment, I'll try and change some stuff. Edited by Azazel, May 7 2009, 09:13 PM.
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