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Poetry Corner
Topic Started: Oct 24 2011, 10:19 AM (148 Views)
Andrul
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Ancient Wyrm
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Roses are cars
Violets are buckets
This poem makes no sense
Boobs
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Kishi
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Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
In Soviet Russia,
Poem writes you.
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Andrul
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Nyet! In Mother Russia you write the poem under carefully observed guidelines and submit it for approval by the Glorious State. If it is not approved you are picked up in the middle of the night and never heard from again. This is only right because anything that can be interpreted as slander against our Beloved Government is wrong!
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Kishi
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Oh, Andrul. You try,
I know. But as a poem?
That last post was crap.

/haiku'd
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Andrul
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Confessing I must do,
A poem it is not.
Would you like me to recite?
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lgm
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What the crap is that?
A Haiku? I know it's not.
Five Seven Five is Haiku
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Andrul
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Wrong today, you are again.
Your middle line has six not seven.
Try again would you please?



Five Seven Five your Haiku.
By this standard I am wrong.
But other forms do exist.
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lgm
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Count again good sir
A solid seven there is
Chicken and white rice
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Andrul
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Contractions are but one word.
Without contraction you would have been right.
Four Five Four also haiku?


Syllables not words.
Wrongfully I have erred.
Apologies I give.
Edited by Andrul, Oct 25 2011, 05:01 PM.
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