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| Sipher | Dec 17 2010, 10:34 PM Post #1 |
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Like a lamb to the slaughter I was confronted by Demon eyes-kyo. He chased me to the ends of the earth for the chance to best me. Seconds felt like hours, and hours felt like weeks. I ran and I ran but it was futile. I am his prey, and he is the gray wolf. I was cornered, there was nowhere to go. I closed my eyes, drew my last breath, and I prayed that someone would come to the rescue. There was nobody nearby that could help me. It was me and the dreadful Demon eyes-kyo. His demon eyes were blood lust. He wanted nothing more than to seek me out and fulfill his ambition....his goal...his dream. I raised my arms in front of my head to protect myself. I knew that it wouldn't do me any good, but I wanted to feel some sense of security. I wanted to feel like this wasn't happening, how could this happen? When his hand was merely inches away from me time stood still. In an instant I had begun to ask myself so many questions. What will happen to Kiri if i'm gone? Has my village grown up enough to take care of itself? What is to become of the factions? What is the future of Kiri without my leadership? I couldn't answer any of these questions. All I knew was that Demon eyes-kyo was going to finally do what he had sworn to do. I braced myself for what was about to happen. Unaware of the consequences and so many unanswered questions. I knew that my time was up and there was nothing I could do about it. I decided to accept my fate and just as quickly as I had drawn my last breath, I yelled as loud as I could "DO IT KYO! I DARE YOU TO!". A massive burst of chakra began to seep through Kyo's body and then he did it. Demon eyes-kyo had done the unthinkable, he poked me on the chest and said "I touched you". That bastard. |
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| Kaipo | Dec 17 2010, 10:54 PM Post #2 |
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I liked the writing ![]() Edited by Kaipo, Dec 17 2010, 10:54 PM.
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| Kitaikai | Dec 17 2010, 11:09 PM Post #3 |
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Purple Scalpel
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lol sipher |
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| tomodachi | Dec 17 2010, 11:30 PM Post #4 |
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Jounin
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XD |
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| RedSceptile | Dec 17 2010, 11:45 PM Post #5 |
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Amazing. |
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| The Avatar | Dec 18 2010, 12:11 AM Post #6 |
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Jounin
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LMFAO, this was so great. |
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| Wrath | Dec 18 2010, 03:49 AM Post #7 |
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The Striker B of Kumogakure!
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Interesting... Too much suspense, and then the infamous joke to cut through like a katana and warm butter, lol. |
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| Senju_II | Dec 18 2010, 08:47 AM Post #8 |
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Sting ofthesand.
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Nicely done. -Sting ofthesand |
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| BigBoss | Dec 18 2010, 01:34 PM Post #9 |
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LOL nice
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| Betrayer | Dec 18 2010, 04:56 PM Post #10 |
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You should make a book (: Your style or writing is excellent. |
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| Undo | Dec 18 2010, 05:48 PM Post #11 |
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(A Kiri v. Konoha)
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and now you get to fight me sipher! <3 |
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| The Avatar | Dec 18 2010, 07:06 PM Post #12 |
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Jounin
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Then The Avatar protects him. |
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