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The Chronicles of Jamszy[Old]; Part 16: The truth has been told
Topic Started: Jun 3 2010, 07:40 PM (595 Views)
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Sasuke2 squinted to open his eyes. His body was in tremendous pain, he looked over beside him to notice Sanosuke. He sat up in the bed. "Hey he's awake!" yelled Jaret. Suddenly Hyuuga Cauis, Haruno Riles and Liomli came running inside the room. They all crowded around his bed. "What the hell we're you thinking going out there?" Riles asked. "I was helping my friend" replied Sasuke2. "Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke this is just like you" said Cauis. "I owe him it, he would have done the same for me" Sasuke2 replied. The room suddenly went quiet, "What do you mean you owe him? What happened?" asked Liomli. Sasuke2 didn't answer, he just looked down at the ground. Sanosuke suddenly started grunting. "Digging up graves eh Sasuke2?" asked Sanosuke. Everyone was surprised to see he was awake, the medics said that he would be out for about 2 weeks. "If you really want to hear the story, then listen up" said Sanosuke.

"Phew good i thought we were going to be trapped in here" said Amarante. "Trapped here? Under my leadership? Ha!" Trunks chuckled. "Yeah sure" replied Amarante. "They got this place tight, Might be tricky escaping" Arkangel explained. Arkangel expected the area and looked into every inch. "OK I've got a plan but this is going to be very risky, if anything goes wrong we'll be trapped here" Arkangel explained. He pulled out a map of Konoha and took out a pencil he then circled three areas. "There we go" said Arkangel. Amarante and Trunks starred at Arkangel with a weird look on their faces."OK i trust you all of tags right?" asked Arkangel. They both nodded in acknowledgment. "I want you two too set all of them in one of these areas, I will do this area, Trunks you go here, and Amarante you go here" Arkangel explained. "As soon as you reach there and have set all of the tags you will set off these" he further explained. Arkangel gave them both two capsules and smiled. "Explosive capsules?" asked Trunks. "Yep, never leave home without them." Arkangel replied. "Now back to what i was saying, after you set all your tags set off the explosive capsules, you must wait for 2 more of them to go off: One from me and One from Amarante, once you see both of them set off your bombs and then quickly run to the gates" explained Arkangel. "Looks like you weren't joking when you said risky, but wont it look suspicious if they see one of use running away?" asked Amarante. "Yes that;s why its so risky, duh!" replied Arkangel. For a moment they were all silent they started at each other with a serious look in their faces. "So are you two down with the plan or what?" Arkangel finally asked. "Well desperate times call for desperate measures, I'm in" Trunks replied. They both then started at Amarante, he had a nervous look on his face. He looked up from the ground and noticed the two looking at them. He then clenched the capsule hard in this hand and his expression changed, "I'm in!" yelled Amarante.

Hatashi had Farkon thrown over his shoulder. He was jumping from tree to tree but Farkon's weight was slowing him down. "Just drop me, get away yourself" Farkon said weakly. "OK if you insist" replied Hatashi. Just as he was about to drop him Farkon noticed he was actually going to do it "I DON'T MEAN IT LITERALLY YOU IDIOT!!" yelled Farkon. "Sorry! Well maybe you shouldn't say things you don't mean" replied Hatashi. Just as he was talking one of the Blitz members threw a kunai at them. It skinned Hatashi's face, the impact caused him to lose his footings and suddenly they were now falling from the trees. They hit the ground hard, Blitz then stopped and surrounded them. "Even if we can't get all of you, two of you should do for now" Nara Sai said. "Well looks like the end of the road" Hatashi said. "Since we are probably going to die, Farkon I....I....." Farkon turned to look at him he thought he knew what he was going to say. "have always hated you" Hatashi confessed. Farkon then had a weird look to this face he was about to say something back but he couldn't be bothered. "Enough chit-chat off to the base with the lot of ya" Zelko said. As Blitz was about to pick them up, Heinrich quickly came and with him he had a giant sword. He swung it with all his might, Zelko was able to quickly dodge. The impact of the sword on the ground made a giant crack in the earth. "I knew this was going to happen." Heinrich chuckled. Behind him two more Kiri ninjas appeared, Kaguya Evil and Crow. "We should be able to stall them for a while" said Crow. "Well?! What are you still doing here! Get Lost!" Heinrich yelled. Hatashi picked up Farkon and then ran, Nara Sai attempted to stop then but Kaguya Evil kicked her away. "Eh Eh Eh, your opponent is now me, he he he" snickered Evil.

"Before i say anything else, Sasuke are you alright with me telling the story" said Sanosuke. Just then Jaret said "Sanosuke, Roi said no one can know about this story." Sanosuke turned to face Jaret, as did Sasuke. "Well by the looks of me i can tell Roi don't give a shit about me" said Sanosuke. "I'm OK with you telling the story, people deserve to know the truth." Sasuke replied. Sanosuke turned to face Jaret "I'm stunned Why haven't you gone and tell Roi?" Sanosuke said. "I know why, He doesn't know the real story either so he is interested to know" Sasuke said. "You know what i think so too so listen up:


Back at the Great Shinobi War when it was Konoha vs. Kiri vs. Suna
someone leaked our attack plans on one f Kiri's captured locations:
Cha no Kuni. Someone had said Sasuke told them so Roi decided
to take care of Sasuke so none of our other plans were leaked to the enemy
"Roi it wasn't me!" yelled Sasuke. "Don't lie! I know you told Kiri our battle
plans.
yelled Roi. "Get him!" he added. Suddenly Konoha guards grabbed him. "Finish
him off" Roi said. Suddenly one of the Konoha ninjas stabbed him in the stom-
ach. "But Roi I.... He was suddenly stabbed again. The Konoha ninjas let go
of him and Sasuke dropped to his knees. He struggled to reach his feet but wh-
en he did he was stabbed in the stomach and in the back and in both of his arms
Just as they were about to end him, Uchiha Sanosuke jumped in and stopped them.
"I know Sasuke! He wouldn't have done this!" yelled Sanosuke. "Stay out of this!"
yelled Roi. "No! If you are going to kill him then you will have to kill me too I know he
didn't do it!" Sanosuke replied yelling. "Then I guess you are going to die here then"
Roi said. --


Suddenly Roi barged in. "Whats going on here!" yelled Roi. Sanosuke suddenly stopped telling the story. "Well! Whats going on!?" Roi asked again angrily. "Nothing" replied Sasuke. Roi looked at Sasuke sourly "Everyone get out, no more visitors as long as they're in here." Roi said, he then left and everyone else followed him out.



Trunks set the all the tags in the location. He then set off the capsule and it flew into the air and a bright light shinned. A few seconds later another one went off, and another few seconds the last one went off. "Well here goes" said Trunks nervously. He set fire to the tags and ran as fast as he could. When he made distance he heard the explosion go off, the loud explosion caused some of the buildings around him to shake. He kept running and he could here the other two go off, he know knew he need to speed up. "I don't know if I will make it!" yelled Amarante. He was running out in the open, there was no where else to run. He could see the Konoha gates in the distance he then pushed his body to the maximum. He was almost there but suddenly two Ninjas jumped on him and grounded him. He was now laying in the ground. He looked into the distance to see Trunks and Arkangel coming from two different directions. "That's Amarante!" yelled Trunks. "We have to go help him!" he added. Arkangel grabbed his hand "Forget him! He's on his own now" said Arkangel. Trunks couldn't believe what he was hearing. He pulled his hand away and said "What happened to you?" He then darted to Amarante's aide.


What will happen to Amarante! Will Sanosuke ever get to finish the story! Will Kiri be able to escape Blitz?! Stay tuned to find out!

Edited by PupJamszy, Jul 24 2010, 11:26 PM.
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Charlie
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The happened to me fighting Sanosuke? Wow these don't even go together at all.
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PupJamszy
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Lmfao you were never fighting Sanosuke >_> fail.
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Charlie
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Also Amarante can't speak english/type it.
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Charlie
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readback even if not the ing shit never explains what happens to alot of characters shitty plot
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im agrippec

Avatars kiri story is wayyy better than this shit.
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Charlie the reason it is like that is because i don't want to make the stories so long and if i was to explain everyone it would take me making so much more stories. And agripec sorry to here this thought you were one of my best fans.
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Charlie
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This isn't realistic at all Amarante is a BR or a mexican
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im agrippec

Jamszy I love your storys just not this one why:spelling mistakes and some parts dont make sense.For rest of your stories love them. ^-^ o.o

- :'( WERE THE RESPEC
Edited by im agrippec, Jun 3 2010, 09:15 PM.
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PupJamszy
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Where is the spelling mistakes and what doesn't make sense.
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Jun 3 2010, 08:04 PM
Jamszy I love your storys just not this one why:spelling mistakes and some parts dont make sense and one of them are BR or whatever but for rest of your stories love them. ^-^ o.o

- :'( WERE THE RESPEC
If you're going to be a critic find your own mistakes instead of repeating what Charlie already pointed out.
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im agrippec

Royal stfu slut and mind your business ing hoe ass bitch go ride a cock.

-WERE THE RESPEC :'(
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Jun 3 2010, 09:11 PM
Royal stfu slut and mind your business ing hoe ass bitch go ride a cock.

-WERE THE RESPEC :'(
Rageragerageragerageragerage :) RAGE!
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http://www.elandroidelibre.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/04/ffuuuu.jpg
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im agrippec

charlie wtf was that lol.o.o charlie bit my finger haha.
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Charlie...Ten bucks says Agrippec posts that either tomorrow on this topic, or somewhere on a topic that you've posted on. LOL.
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Jun 3 2010, 07:40 PM
"Get him!" he added. Suddenly Konoha guards grabbed him. "Finish
him off" Roi said. Suddenly one of the Konoha ninjas stabbed him in the stom-
ach. "But Roi I.... He was suddenly stabbed again.

Suddenly Roi barged in. "Whats going on here!" yelled Roi. Sanosuke suddenly stopped telling the story.


Anyone wanna guess the word of the day?
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im agrippec

o.o roi am I right? tell me im right and btw royal I posted in this topic before charlie did so stfu.

-BITCH WERE THE RESPEC :'(
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Roi is a name but if you would learn to count properly you would find that Roi is used 4 times and Suddenly happens to be used 5. 1,2,3,5,4 Amirite?
Edited by Royal, Jun 3 2010, 09:43 PM.
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im agrippec

stfu slut
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Attention: A new number system has been devised. It goes like this

1,2,3,5,4,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,15,14 Etc...
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im agrippec

You just now knowing that royal? sad you fail
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u can do better jamszy this story wasnt ur best and guys u cant compare Avatar story with Jamszy cause avatar just started posting them w8 till u have a better view of both Stories.
Edited by Leaf_power, Jun 4 2010, 01:22 PM.
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Kaimana
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Who the fack are you Leaf_Power,as in main/alt.
I liked it Jerumy but it could be longer.
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i am Yondaime_sama and this is an alt i dont want to name my main u know me i am sure of it
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