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Kirigakure, Chapter 1: The Intro; Kukuku
Topic Started: May 31 2010, 11:25 AM (850 Views)
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"What the hell are you doing Aurian!?" Heinrich screamed. Aurian chuckled a bit, cupping his hands over his mouth. "Opps." "You're damn fudgin' right opps! You killed the escort!" Himmler replied intensely, pulling his decap from his back he pointed it towards the escort's decapitated head, then pointing to the escort's body, he spoke again. "Aurian, sew em' together. I really don't have time for this." Aurian quickly saluted, picking up the head he ran over to the body, he attempted to sew them together; no luck. "Sorry boss." "Why do I even bother." Heinrich would now let off a earth-shattering facepalm, a huge gust of wind generated from the facepalm would level the trees in the area behind him. Aurian bit his lip in shame. "Wamme' to get another one bo-" He was stopped short in Heinrich's rage! "NEIN NEIN NEIN, just stand the body up, and don't move." Himmler contemplated, he then picked up the head, a green grinch grin manifested on his face. "Brain blast!" He grabbed the head from off the floor by the hair, now reaching into his pocket he would pull out a bottle labeled ^Shinobi Crazy Glue^, now resting the head in his arm, he would drizzle the glue on the decapitated neck of the escort. "Aurian, bring the body here!" He motioned with his hand for Aurian to come his way. "Yes sir, Heinrich sir!" Aurian replied, rushing over to Heinrich all the while doing the thriller dance with the corpse. "Here you go sir, Heinrich sir!" He held the body steadfast. Heinrich now thrusted the head onto the body. As Aurian held the body, Heinrich would motion back creating a square camera lense with his fingers, peeping through the hole with his left eye he said. "Hmm.." Walking back over to Aurian, he turned the head a bit with some signs of trouble. "Perf--Aurian, stop dancing." "This is thriller, thriller ni-- yes sir, Heinrich sir!" Aurian ceased his movements, but as Heinrich turned around he quickly continued!

Kawa no Kuni

"Here you are!" Heinrich handed over the body to Kotoko. Aurian chuckled, grabbing Aurian's cloak he would yank at it three times. Whispering to Heinrich he said. "I got a joke, I got a joke boss!" Heinrich shook his fudgin' head, then rolling his eyes he asked. "What is it?" Aurian walked over to Kotoko, chuckling once more, he put out his hand. -- http://www.mauchle.name/images/dr-evil.jpg -- Raising his pinky to his lip he said. "That'd be, 1 billion dollars!" Quickly he turned to Heinrich looking for approval with a glimmer in his eye. Heinrich returned with a callous expression of hate and truculence. "Aurian, get the hell over here." He motioned his head behind him. As Aurian began to walk over to Himmler he was stopped in his tracks, Kotoko had grabbed his shoulder. -- http://images.absoluteanime.com/reviews/tmnt_vol_5/index%5b03%5d.jpg -- Enraged Kotoko let his head linger motionless still holding on to Aurian's shoulder. -- http://th02.deviantart.net/fs49/300W/f/2009/163/3/3/naruto_angry_by_Crazyaction.jpg -- "What did you do to Natsuki..?" Kotoko asked in rhetoric. "Aurian let's go." Heinrich said showing no facial emotion once so ever. "He didn't give us the cash! Fork it over Kotokoko!" At the words, Kotoko tightened his grip on Aurian's shoulder. "AURIAN MOVE!" Heinrich ordered fiercely. Kotoko hopped away with amazing speed, still holding the corpse in hand. "WHAT WHAT!?" Aurian screamed in confusion. Turning round furiously it was apparent that a bomb tag had been left on his shoulder. "Good b-" Kotoko screamed evading the explosion, but he had miscalculated, it was infact a bunshin! "Bye." Aurian finished the sentence, piercing through the back of Kotoko with a chidori through the heart. "Bravo, bravo." Heinrich clapped at the marvelous display. "Let's head back to the HQ." Heinrich ordered. "100, 200, 230, 400, 700!" Aurian counted. "What in Lord Jashin's name are you blabbering about?" He asked turning around to look at Aurian. "Kotoko had money in his pocket! 700 dollars!" Heinrich smiled slightly, he began to stroke his chin, the smile growing wider with each stroke. "I can sell his body to Sniper 0, heard he's a necrophilliac. Alright, grab the body, the money, and let's get out of he-" Heinrich's words were stultified by Aurian, he began to shake Heinrich's shoulder calmly, yet urgently. "Heinrich.. Himmler.. Boss.." He annoyed. "WHAT NOW AURIAN, WHAT?!" Heinrich exploaded. "We're surrounded." The Sidekick waved his arm pointing to the seven Rock Shinobi grinning with savage intent. -- http://api.ning.com/files/j2ZYs1OgVRvDloH7u7m10fMCSEc7S3GAIfneblOkZLUFdTfpGHgoIJRIqOvCU6YcPjSZ4avyxSZWIwChlJ7xXfd7N3fq7y73/ninjas.jpg -- They spoke in unison! "What do we have here, kukuku." Aurian replied. "Well I'm Aurian and this is Hei--" They retaliated. "That's not what we meant idiot, hand over the corpse and the cash!" They demanded. "For fawk's sake!" Heinrich plead finally reaching his breaking point. Pulling his decap from his back he hurled it towards the Rock Shinobi in the middle of the gang. In unison once more the Rock Shinobi would perform a few hand seals then slamming their hands into the ground, a large barrier flew up a mile high. "Shatter." Heinrich said calmly as his decap exploaded. A hole in the shield appeared as the smoked cleared. Aurian let out a fierce battle cry. "We're not done yet!" As he now shot a fierce chidori senbon into the hole, piercing the vital spots of the Rock Shinobi positioned right of the middle RS, in succession Aurian would pull his decap from his back he would drag it through the right side of the barrier's hole while running sideways along the barrier's stable surface under. The barrier now lost support and would begin to crumble. Heinrich taking advantage of the terrain would begin to hop n' flip from falling rock to falling rock, now using the support of the huge boulder, he thrusted himself upwards, shoving his hand through a decent sized rock he screamed. "Chakra Medical Fist!" As he pummeled a Rock Shinobi in the gut, the rock placed on his fist shattered on impact. "THEY KILLED 74 AND 76!" Two of the five Rock Shinobi which were still alive began to preform handseals. "Chidori!" They screamed, running up towards Aurian they would attempt to pierce him, Aurian easily slapped both hands away with the flick of two wrists that slightly resembled Itachi rendering Sasuke's useless, now jumping into the air, spreading his legs he landed two precise kicks to both their faces, a simultaneous cracking sound rippled through the air, he had broken their necks. Now jumping again into the air he would land on them both with a different leg. "WUAHHH." He said shaking his head back and forth as if Bruce Lee. Meanwhile the 3 Rock Shinobi chanted. "Rasenshuriken!" One of them stuck their hand out, as the other two began to rotate their hands around the 1st's palm. A large Rasenshuriken formed. "THIS IS FOR MY BROTHERS!" He screamed running towards Heinrich as the other two watched from behind. It connected! Heinrich flew into a tree, then with the blink of an eye, water. "Water clone." He chuckled. "Where is he?!" They screamed looking around anxiously. "Doton: Headhunter No Jutsu" Heinrich's hand rocketed from under ground, grabbing the Rock Shinobi's leg he pulled him under ground, his head was all that was apparent. Now coming out of the ground himself, Heinrich held something unusual in his hand, it was a leg, as he continued to walk forward it would appear he dragged out a decapitated body. "Wh-who is that?" The other two Rock Shinobi asked in unison. "You tell me, I don't know his name." Heinrich pointed to the head still enlodged in the ground. "It's his body, kukuku." Heinrich tossed the body to them as their eyes quivered. Unrolling a supply scroll onto the ground, a puff of smoke engulfed the immediate area, as the smoke cleared a large Decapitator Sword stood in the ground. As if King Arthur he pulled it from the ground with great ease. "Excalibur.." He said to himself, now dragging the sword across the floor, he slowly ran it through the head enlodged in the floor, the blood on the blade glistened as he continued to step closer to them. "You monster.." They staggered back, after a few steps they bumped into Aurian. "Going somewhere?" He chuckled, slowing driving his kunai dagger through the abdomen of the one nearest to the blade. Slowly pulling it out he dropped the body. 87- The Last Rock Shinobi readied himself. "Hadou #33, Soukatsui" Heinrich almost whispered. At his words 87 rocketed into the air. Heinrich ran forward in pursuit. "Look out below!" A yellow haired man screamed as he landed on top of 87's shoulders with his feet, pushing him closer to the ground and in reach for Heinrich. The chidori connected. "That was fun Boss!" Aurian laughed. Heinrich looking oddly at the man asked. "Who are you?" The man replied. "The name's Sebi, Kawa No Kuni's resident badass." Heinrich smirked, then dusting himself off he signaled Aurian to pick up Kotoko's body as well as the money. "So why'd you interfere?" Sebi ran his hand through his chivalrous, yellow hair. "For this, I think you might find this quite interesting." He handed Heinrich a letter containing a leaf emblem.


WHY ARE THEY SO BADASS?! WHAT DOES THE LETTER CONTAIN!? AND WHAT ARE SEBI'S MOTIVES?!
Edited by The Avatar, Jun 3 2010, 10:17 PM.
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im agrippec

AWESOME jamszy has some competition and chapter 1 really? just like the show avatar was.
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Thanks ;}
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Good job btw Keep on
Edited by namikage_minato, May 31 2010, 01:26 PM.
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Thanks, much appreciated.
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i would aprecited if u add me too XD
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In due time my friend, in due time..
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lolwut is dis i dont even
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Needs more paragraphs.
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RedSceptile
May 31 2010, 03:09 PM
lolwut is dis i dont even
Huh?
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May 31 2010, 03:41 PM
Needs more paragraphs.
Ok I'll work on that.
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rofl wen he said yellow hair i thought it was gonna be namikage lol
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me too :S
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Sebi > Everything
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add meh too ^^
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In due time
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Jun 2 2010, 09:59 AM
rofl wen he said yellow hair i thought it was gonna be namikage lol
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Avatar's super novels!
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May 31 2010, 03:41 PM
Needs more paragraphs.
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im agrippec
May 31 2010, 11:36 AM
AWESOME jamszy has some competition and chapter 1 really? just like the show avatar was.
Competition all though this is good no one can match up to the genius of The Chronicles of Jamszy.
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Jamzy has good stories, but Avatar has better grammar and writing technique? I can't explain, his just look more like a real story.
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Boom?
And Avatar has a good choice of characters to use.
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Ikaraz
Jun 3 2010, 06:45 PM
Jamzy has good stories, but Avatar has better grammar and writing technique? I can't explain, his just look more like a real story.
Only 14, sue me.
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Jun 3 2010, 07:59 PM
Ikaraz
Jun 3 2010, 06:45 PM
Jamzy has good stories, but Avatar has better grammar and writing technique? I can't explain, his just look more like a real story.
Only 14, sue me.
Jealousy at its finest.
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Jun 3 2010, 06:25 PM
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May 31 2010, 03:41 PM
Needs more paragraphs.
It only requires one person to tell me this! -stratches Kaimana's name off the character list-

Just more room for Sced to fist pump!
Edited by The Avatar, Jun 3 2010, 10:10 PM.
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