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The Chronicles of Jamszy[Old]; Part 14: The plan comes together
Topic Started: May 15 2010, 09:19 AM (622 Views)
PupJamszy
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Sorry this is late, I was busy yesterday

"Hey! Are we almost there!" said Dough Boy. "Yes sir, we are almost there" said Dough Boy. Just then EvilZ came up the stairs. "Hey EvilZ, i need to talk to you" said Dough Boy. "Listen, I don't want to talk about why I'm here, OK?" said EvilZ. "Fine, now can we talk?" said Dough Boy. "Fine" said EvilZ. "OK your going to play a vital role in our invasion of Blitz" said Dough Boy. "Now your talking, OK so what do i have to do?" asked EvilZ. "Well first come over here, I can risk anyone else hearing" said Dough Boy. They were now at the railings of the boat. Dough Boy looked ahead. "Hm giant rocks, one second i need to tell the captains to be careful" said Dough Boy. "OK" said EvilZ. EvilZ turned away. Suddenly Dough Boy came running at him, EvilZ quickly turned around and threw him back. "What the hell are you doing!" said EvilZ. Fine Ill be honest, I don't want you here! So I'm just going to take care of you now" said Dough Boy. He then walked towards Evilz. "Heh, game over EvilZ" said Dough Boy.

"I'm not telling you nothing" growled Kuri. "Fine have it your way" snickered Jamszy. "Guess I'm just going to have to force it out of you right? asked Jamszy. "Kid if you think you can force anything out of me you have another thing coming!" yelled Kuri. Jamszy didn't respond. He started performing hand seals. "Genjutsu: Fear!" Jamszy announced. Kuri braced himself for the terror ahead of him. In front of him stood a burning building. He glared at it and suddenly he saw children in their screaming for their lives. Then suddenly the fire had surrounded him in a circle and trapped him, it closed in and now he was on fire! He screamed in pain he looked at his hands and they were slowly melting. He then was pulled back and thrown into water. He sunk to the bottom where a ferocious monster came. "Time for the real fear to come" snickered the monster. Jamszy stood and watched the man toss and turn and the ground screaming. "Please stop! Please I beg of you" begged Kuri. But Jamszy ignored he decided to leave him there for a few more minutes. After those minutes passed he canceled the Genjutsu. "Come on you big baby it wasn't that bad was it?" asked Jamszy. "So now are you going to tell me the story or not?" asked Jamszy. Kuri was sweating he was taking deep breathes. "Fine" he finally said. Just as he was going to say what happened Meada Yami and the rest of Falcon came. "Jamszy are you alright!" yelled Yami. "Yeah I'm fine!" Jamszy yelled back. "Looks like we're going to have to finish this date later right?" whispered Jamszy. Kuri didn't respond he looked away in anger. "Kuri! So we've finally got you again, this time your going to be locked up real good" said Yami. "Yeah and then maybe I'll come to visit you some time Kuri, what do you think?" asked Jamszy. Kuri still did not respond. "Hahahahaha" laughed Jamszy.

"Damn it! How the hell am i suppose to escape Konoha!" yelled Trunks. Amarante was still knocked out. "And to make this worse i have to lug this kid with me" complained Trunks. "Hey i heard some talking over here! Lets go check it out" yelled a deep voice. "Damn it! I have to hide somewhere!" thought Trunks. He picked up Amarante and quickly jumped into some bushes. Just as he hid, two Konoha ninjas came. "No ones here" one of them said. Quickly Trunks jumped out and knocked them both out. He dragged them into the bushes, when he emerged he was now in a Konoha guard suit. "Hm I look real good in this" said Trunks. Suddenly a guard ran out from the corner. "Hey what happened over here!" he yelled. "Oh nothing i was just checking these bushes for those two runaways." replied Trunks. "Oh OK" replied the guard. The disguise worked perfectly. "Time to wake up Amarante, I just hope he isn't too badly shaken up from the Genjutsu. Trunks knelt before his body, he activated his Sharingan and then he closed his eyes and started to concentrate. It had been a few minutes and Trunks was still trying to wake him up. Out of nowhere Amarante suddenly jumped up and sprang to his feet. "Finally" Trunks said relieved. "What happened?" asked Amarante. "I'll fill you in later but for now we have to escape Konoha." said Trunks. He threw the other Konoha guard suit to Amarante. "Put it on" he Instructed. Amarante quickly put on the suit then asked "Now What?" "Well we have to be logical because I can bet you they've dispatched some Hyuuga's to track us down so we have to be extra careful" he explained. "Wait" said Amarante. "Byakugan" he announced. He began to look in all directions. "This way" he instructed. "Trunks obeyed him without any questions. "Stop" Amarante suddenly said. "Out of the corner walked Hyuuga Raz. "Did you check this area yet" said Raz "Yes" replied Trunks. "OK come with me you two i need some back up." commanded Raz. Things then toke a turn for the worst. They then began walking with Raz, Trunks signaled Amarante that this was a terrible idea. But they had no choice they would have been discovered if they had not followed Raz.

On the boat to Blitz's hide out EvilZ and Dough Boy were doing battle on the ships deck. It was clear that EvilZ was the superior fighter. Dough Boy finally caught him off guard but when he tried to strike him EvilZ quickly ducked the move and threw Dough Boy into a wall. "Game over? Please Dough Boy your pathetic" EvilZ mocked. Dough Boy did not respond, he couldn't because he knew EvilZ was right. But he arose to his feet and began fighting again. "Pathetic! I'll show you pathetic!" yelled Dough Boy. As they fought they were being spied on. It was Hyuuga Peji. "Now that i know their plan maybe i can get into Blitz if i can tell them ahead of time" thought Peji. He was perfectly hidden. He remembered this trick from Hyuuga Cauis. He held a giant leaf over his head and swam. No one would ever suspect that it was someone hiding under it. Suddenly EvilZ grabbed Dough Boy by the throat and pinned him against the railing of the boat he was trying to throw him over board and he was succeeding. Dough Boy thought quick he kicked EvilZ in his leg then tripped him up. Dough Boy then quickly used a move that messed up EvilZ walking. "So you know the move eh" snickered EvilZ. "Yep" replied Dough Boy. He then began to barrage EvilZ with a mix of strikes and jutsu's. He then jumped back. Suddenly a fierce wave washed some water onto the deck. Dough Boy jumped on it and used a move. The move enclosed EvilZ in what would appear to be a water dungeon. He was able to control it. He then used his powers to control it and threw EvilZ off the boat. The move was going right in Peji's direction. "Shit!" yelled Peji. He quickly dove under water and swam away from EvilZ. When he arose he was right in front of the island. The boat stopped and all the passengers were coming off. Quickly Peji got onto the island and ran to the blitz hide out. "I need to hurry!" thought Peji.

Sasuke2 suddenly stopped running. He couldn't anymore. He was just to tried, he dropped to his knees and laid Sanosuke on the ground. "I'm sorry Sanosuke I just can't run anymore" uttered Sasuke2. Sanosuke was still unconscious so he couldn't respond. "I couldn't get you there in time" he continued. "I'm sorry" said Sasuke2. It was then all silence. "It's OK" said Sanosuke. "You were a great friend even coming to my rescue." Sanosuke added. "Hey who is that!" yelled a Konoha Guard. Sasuke2 suddenly heard foot steeps but he was too exhausted to look to see who it was. His body suddenly rose as did Sanosuke's. A heavenly light had just shinned on them and it might have saved Sanosuke's life, Sasuke2 blacked out.

"OK line up!" commanded Dough Boy. "This is how It's going down" he added. I am going to brake you up into groups of 15 and in total there will be 5 groups" he added. He then broke all the groups up, he was careful to make sure each group had at least 2 of Kiri's strongest ninjas. "OK this is group one, group two, three, four, five" explained Dough Boy. He pulled out 5 maps and handed them to each group leader. The green area is where you will be and the yellow area is where we are now." explained Dough Boy. "When and if i blow this horn you are all to report to the front of the hide out" said Dough Boy. "If I don't blow it you are to remain where you are" he added. "Attached to the map is the instructions" he added. "OK now disperse!" yelled Dough Boy.

Will Blitz's Plan work! Will Peji tell Blitz before its too late?! Stay tuned to find out!
Edited by PupJamszy, May 22 2010, 11:54 AM.
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Pboy07
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Can some1 summaries the story up on to now, I haven't had time to read it lately ._.
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im agrippec

These action stories you make are awesome!!!
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Wow dough boy is beast lol
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Pboy07
May 15 2010, 09:33 AM
Can some1 summaries the story up on to now, I haven't had time to read it lately ._.
Just read them >_> Look them up and read...


Blitz along with some missing ninjas launched secret attacks on suna and kiri and konoha, during war with suna trunks and amarante were captured and every1 else escaped in kiri they got wrecked because while all of kiri was in konoha trying to figure out who was attacking them blitz attacked kiri so some of konoha and all of kiri went to go back to kiri to help but it was too late so thats how kiri got wrecked so boateng felt guilty and quit as kage then Ourico was appointed Kage and then he revealed a plan to force blitz to join kiri so kiri can be strongest village. Then dough boy and all the kiri ninja went on a boat to blitz hide out to force them to join kiri. Trunks and amarante were brought to interrogation and during interrogation they escaped and now are trying to escape Leaf. Roi didnt trust Ourico as a kage so he told sanosuke to stay behind and spy on them to see if they are planinng anything so after sanosuke got the information he was about to leave but some kiri ninjas caught him he quickly escaped and tried to run back to konoha but he couldnt shake them so he had to fight them he got wrecked then sasuke2 came to save his life and then sasuke2 was trying to get back to konoha so sanosuke wouldnt die. with Jamszy him and JOkaa were fighting Unknown and Kyoshi who turned out to be apart of blitz so after they tried to use a very risky and deadly plan, JOkaa got wrecked so they had to run and while running rogue ninjas attacked them, JOkaa was too injured to fight so Jamszy and to stay behind and fight so JOkaa could escape. JOkaa made it back suna and told them about Jamszys situation so Falcon went to save Jamszy.
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Dont associate Kyoshi with us...
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Nvm.
Edited by Jerrumie, May 15 2010, 10:09 AM.
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NeverBulet Dilan
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THA BEAST!
awesome jamszy.
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Woot some face time. Hope I don't get exiled for consorting with missings =(
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RedSceptile
May 15 2010, 10:00 AM
Dont associate Kyoshi with us...
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King

stfu its a story, we dont give a shit if kyoshi is in bltiz or not.
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Just because you're Kyoshi.
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May 16 2010, 05:07 AM
Just because you're Kyoshi.
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May 16 2010, 04:51 AM
stfu its a story, we dont give a shit if kyoshi is in bltiz or not.
Did you think we didn't know you were Kyoshi or do you just like saying Kyoshi?
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Pboy07
May 16 2010, 07:55 AM
King
May 16 2010, 04:51 AM
stfu its a story, we dont give a shit if kyoshi is in bltiz or not.
Did you think we didn't know you were Kyoshi or do you just like saying Kyoshi?
Peji isnt obvious by the way he somehiw tries to insert himself in any topic?

Guy:Hakus Ice Needles suck!
Kyoshi:It doesnt matter cause Im still OP LOL GG HAHAHA IM THE BEST.

Now I await his inevitable auto-fellation.
Edited by RedSceptile, May 16 2010, 08:07 AM.
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May 15 2010, 09:56 AM
Pboy07
May 15 2010, 09:33 AM
Can some1 summaries the story up on to now, I haven't had time to read it lately ._.
Just read them >_> Look them up and read...


Blitz along with some missing ninjas launched secret attacks on suna and kiri and konoha, during war with suna trunks and amarante were captured and every1 else escaped in kiri they got wrecked because while all of kiri was in konoha trying to figure out who was attacking them blitz attacked kiri so some of konoha and all of kiri went to go back to kiri to help but it was too late so thats how kiri got wrecked so boateng felt guilty and quit as kage then Ourico was appointed Kage and then he revealed a plan to force blitz to join kiri so kiri can be strongest village. Then dough boy and all the kiri ninja went on a boat to blitz hide out to force them to join kiri. Trunks and amarante were brought to interrogation and during interrogation they escaped and now are trying to escape Leaf. Roi didnt trust Ourico as a kage so he told sanosuke to stay behind and spy on them to see if they are planinng anything so after sanosuke got the information he was about to leave but some kiri ninjas caught him he quickly escaped and tried to run back to konoha but he couldnt shake them so he had to fight them he got wrecked then sasuke2 came to save his life and then sasuke2 was trying to get back to konoha so sanosuke wouldnt die. with Jamszy him and JOkaa were fighting Unknown and Kyoshi who turned out to be apart of blitz so after they tried to use a very risky and deadly plan, JOkaa got wrecked so they had to run and while running rogue ninjas attacked them, JOkaa was too injured to fight so Jamszy and to stay behind and fight so JOkaa could escape. JOkaa made it back suna and told them about Jamszys situation so Falcon went to save Jamszy.
I see, thanks for catching me up. So right now, my character just happened to be strolling by when he saw this stuff happening?
Edited by Pboy07, May 16 2010, 08:22 AM.
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Next Issue out May 22th
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Make me fall in love next chapter.
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I be going ham
When will Light JR get in on the Jamzy action.
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King

ofc i am Kyoshi, i made this account for the lulz, LOL
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My name is spelt Jamszy, J-A-M-S-Z-Y
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May 18 2010, 06:36 PM
ofc i am Kyoshi, i made this account for the lulz, LOL
You made that account because the other one is blocked from the forum.
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jamszy keep those episodes coming
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i made it becos my account is blocked? are u ing stupid look when this account was make before u open ur mouth
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Idiot, you're using it because the other one is blocked...
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