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| PupJamszy | May 7 2010, 07:02 PM Post #1 |
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With Sanosuke, he was fighting and escaping. He was now in the forest fighting with the ninjas. He then jumped back. "Now that we're far from Kiri i can dispose of you too" said Sanosuke. "Oh is that right? We'll see about that!" yelled one of the ninjas. "Sharingan!" yelled Sanosuke. The ninja jumped high in the air and came flying down with s Ctr he tried to hit Sanosuke but he quickly dodged. The move made a deep deep crater in the ground. "Water Vortex" yelled the other ninja. Sanosuke quickly looked up but as it approached instead of hitting Sanosuke the water filled the crater with water. There was now a crater filled with water, almost the same size as 3 pools. Little islands floated on it. "Bone Sword!" He charged at Sanosuke who quickly evaded the move but got a little cut. "Water Dragon!" yelled the other ninja. Sanosuke quickly turned around and faced it, his Sharingan quickly turned into Mangekyo form, but the water dragon still made full contact. Sanosuke was weakened but before the move hit he managed to copy it. "Now that i got what i need i will end this" said Sanosuke. He used darkness which consumed the two of them after we quickly followed it up with Fear Genjutsu. While they were both unable to fight Sanosuke used the Water Dragon move to knock out one of the ninjas. He looked at the other ninja but he was surprised the other ninja wasn't even affected by the move. He was caught so off guard that the ninja managed to pull off his sword dance move. Sanosuke was now on the ground bleeding heavily. "Bone Sword" Sanosuke looked up to see the ninja with the move aimed for him. "Well ninja, end of the road" he said. He lunged with the move right at Sanosuke's face. "AHHHHHHHHHHHH" and then there was silence.... Sanosuke was still on the ground, his eyes were glaring. Blood was splattered all over the floor. The mist ninja stood still, Sanosuke slowly fell to the ground. He was now flat on the ground starring into the air. His eyes slowly closed then he was silent on the ground and his body stopped moving. Jamszy was huffing and puffing. The body of the man named Kuri was very heavy. Jamszy dropped him on the ground and rested on a tree. He was now extremely tired, Jamszy had not yet mastered Rebirth and a con of using it when not mastered was extreme drowsiness. The only thing that kept him up when he used it before was because there was so much adrenaline. But now both of the rebirths piled on him. "No! I cant afford to fall asleep what if Kuri wakes up!" said Jamszy. He tried his best to fight it but it was too overpowering. His eyes felt heavy they were half closed he was about to drift away but he heard Kuri grunt. He was waking up. Quickly Jamszy shook himself out of it then he pulled out a Soldier pill and ate it now he was filled with energy. But now when he felt like sleeping it would over power him too much to fight it. Jamszy tried to tie him up before he could do anything but Kuri quickly pushed him back into the tree. He grabbed Jamszy by the throat and started choking him. "You fool! You've ruined my plans to get back at Suna! You will die for this!" said an enraged Kuri. Jamszy grabbed the arm he was being choked with in a desperate attempt to stay alive but it didn't work. The grip got even tighter, Jamszy was slowly slipping away. Suddenly it all came back, Unknown had taught them what to do if this happened. Jamszy grabbed his arm again but this time he jumped and crossed his legs around the arm. Just as Jamszy had thought he weighed too much for Kuri to take with one hand Kuri's hand came crashing down to the ground, while is arm was dropping he lost grip of Jamszy. Jamszy sprang back to his feet and began unleashing a flurry of punches, kicks and combo attacks on Kuri. Jamszy then got the rope and tied up Kuri. "Your a tricky one" said Jamszy. "Now while we're resting why don't you tell me the exact story with you and the death of those two families?" he added. The meeting of the Kiri ninjas was still going on. Ourico was still trying to convince them to take part of his plan. But they didn't agree. "Come on! are you peopl-- he was cut off. Something caught his attention. It was EvilZ, he slowly walked into the room. The reason they were surprised because since EvilZ joined Kiri he had only been seen once. "What the hell?" said Sipher. "Well EvilZ I've got to say you've also surprised me" said Ourico. "I heard there was a really big meeting so i decided I'd show up for once" said EvilZ. "Don't lie EvilZ you've always came you've just well hidden yourself i saw you at all of our meetings i just didn't say anything" said Sipher. "Well then there's no need to pretend then right?" asked EvilZ. "Correct" said Joez. "OK, then i agree with Ourico i want to go through with the plan" said EvilZ. "I do too" said LightJR. Everyone else was still in disagreement. Ourico kept trying to persuade them he made everything sound better and better. Soon everyone agreement. Then they all headed out immediately. Lucky for them the Blitz hideout was across the great shusi Kiri Sea. Ourico had already had boats ready for all of them. While they were approaching Ourico signaled for them to stop. "OK we're all here" said Ourico. Out from the boats came Dough Boy. "Everyone get on the boats" said Dough Boy. "Wait whats going on what about Ourico your not coming" said Kaguya End. "No of course not" said Ourico. "Just get on the boat, this is wasting time" said EvilZ. Kaguya End got on the boat. "EvilZ well, well, well isn't this a surprise" said Dough Boy. "Don't get use to it i won't be doing this all the time" said EvilZ. He then went down to the lower deck with the rest. "Hm, EvilZ, interesting character ain't he Ourico" asked Dough Boy. But Ourico was already gone. Dough Boy went inside the captains deck and signaled all the other captains to set sail, then they were off and the boats disappeared in the mist. In Konoha the interrogation sessions were beginning. Trunks and Amarante were tied up. Leading the interrogation was Uchiha Knives and Nara Sjgenuis. "OK so lets talk, and lets start of with what are Blitz's plan" said Knives. "I ain't telling y'all nothing" said Trunks. Sjgenuis was eating a apple he chewed then swallowed, he then threw the apple out. "OK if you don't respond to force how about we do the whole bad cop, good cop thing" said Sjgenuis. Trunks suddenly busted out in laughter. "If you think that's gunna make me fess up then please, please revise your thinking" said Trunks."Fine, have it your way" said Knives. "Sharingan!" yelled Knives. "You really think that's going to work on me?" asked Trunks. "No but it isn't for you" said Knives. His attention then turned to Amarante. Knvies came down deep in his face, his sharingan was now directly in aramante's eyes. "Close your eyes!"yelled Trunks. Suddenly Sjgenuis used his shadow to choke Trunks. "No more talking OK" said Sjgenuis. Aramante tried to close his eyes but he couldn't. Suddenly he was unconscious. When he awoke it was all red. When he looked at his surroundings and tried to move he felt pain, he looked down and there was swords through him. "AHHHHHHHHH!!!" he screamed. In reality he was screaming too he was going crazy, he was tied in his chair, he was rocking and swaying and screaming. Trunks was witnessing the whole thing. He could not talk or anything. He then thought quick and activated sharingan and tried his luck at putting Sjgenuis in a genjutsu. Knives was too distracted trying to keep his genjutsu going with Amarante to notice. The genjutsu was a success! Sjgenuis was now in a fear genjutsu himself and he was screaming too. When Knives stopped the genjutu to see Trunks had untied himself. He quickly slammed Knives into the door and ran. He untied Amarante, put him over his shoulder and escaped out the window. "Damnit! They got away" said Knvies. He ran too the phone and said "Trunks and Amarante escaped, tell all Konoha guards inside to find them!" He then ran to Sjgenuis to see if he was alright. -Huff- -Huff- -Huff- Sanosuke awakened. He looked around and saw blue hair. It was Sasuke2. "Ugh What happened" said Sanosuke. "You got stabbed right in the gut by a kiri ninja, lucky thing i came looking for you" said Sasuke2. "But he had it aimed for my face" said Sanosuke. "I managed to throw off his shot a little" said Sasuke2. "Oh" said Sanosuke. "You shouldn't talk your bleeding heavily" said Sasuke2. He was now exiting the Konoha forest and he could see the gates in the distance. "Don't worry we're almost there" said Sasuke2. But Sanosuke was already unconscious again. "Damn it! I have to hurry!" said Sasuke2. He then ran the fastest he could. His leg muscles were burning but he ignored them. His heart was beating rapidly. His lungs felt like they were about to burst. But his will to save his friends life was too much. "Almost there!" said Sasuke2. "Hey! Are we almost there!" said Dough Boy. "Yes sir, we are almost there" said The Captain. Just then EvilZ came up the stairs. "Hey EvilZ, i need to talk to you" said Dough Boy. "Listen, I don't want to talk about why I'm here, OK?" said EvilZ. "Fine, now can we talk?" said Dough Boy. "Fine" said EvilZ. "OK your going to play a vital role in our invasion of Blitz" said Dough Boy. "Now your talking, OK so what do i have to do?" asked EvilZ. "Well first come over here, I can risk anyone else hearing" said Dough Boy. They were now at the railings of the boat. Dough Boy looked ahead. "Hm giant rocks, one second i need to tell the captains to be careful" said Dough Boy. "OK" said EvilZ. EvilZ turned away. Suddenly Dough Boy came running at him, EvilZ quickly turned around and threw him back. "What the hell are you doing!" said EvilZ. Fine Ill be honest, I don't want you here! So I'm just going to take care of you now" said Dough Boy. He then walked towards Evilz. "Heh, game over EvilZ" said Dough Boy. Will Sanosuke Die!! What will happen with EvilZ!!!!! And will Trunks and Amarante Escape!!! Edited by PupJamszy, May 15 2010, 08:56 AM.
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| Mugga | May 7 2010, 07:36 PM Post #2 |
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I swear these get better and better everytime. I hope I own someone when me and Amarante escape Leaf >_<. |
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| The Liberater | May 7 2010, 11:25 PM Post #3 |
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Jamszy you know you have to put me in it dude this is some sick stuff man jamszy supported all the way |
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| Royal | May 8 2010, 12:15 AM Post #4 |
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Amnamanm
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Good but Omfg I cant read another unless you find some new ways to say someone said something other than Said [Inpute name here]
Edited by Royal, May 8 2010, 12:16 AM.
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| Jerrumie | May 8 2010, 12:21 AM Post #5 |
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dont read it then, soft -1 fan. |
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| Hermit | May 8 2010, 04:55 AM Post #6 |
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Administrator
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I've to agree with Royal. |
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| Gatlocke | May 9 2010, 09:31 AM Post #7 |
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Gatlocke
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these episodes r sick as boi keep up the good work jamszy |
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| Ikaraz | May 9 2010, 09:40 AM Post #8 |
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Xahoida
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Royal has a point. Absorb what he said into your brain. |
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| PupJamszy | May 9 2010, 11:12 AM Post #9 |
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Ok I will try |
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| PupJamszy | May 10 2010, 03:42 PM Post #10 |
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Next issue out May 14th so if you have anymore suggestions to make the series more likable, do tell. |
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| Hachi | May 11 2010, 11:43 AM Post #11 |
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sand kagey got experions
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Make Trunks and Amarante own roi on the way out and make sure Roi doesnt die but suffers from poison for 2 days then they heal him
Edited by Hachi, May 13 2010, 03:23 PM.
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| Pboy07 | May 11 2010, 11:47 AM Post #12 |
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Pardon The Swag
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Talk like this: Damn, this is gonna be harder than I think, thought Jamzy. And Then it happened. It was so quick, Jamzy took about 3 seconds to realize what had happened. "Watch out!" cried Peji. "I'm doing my best!" yelled Jamzy. The arrow shot past his head, taking about 3 inches of hair off, and leaving a scar. Jamzy would have to live with that scar for the rest of his life- if his life didn't end here. It's the way I plan on writing my stories. Anthony Horowitz ftw! |
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| Hachi | May 11 2010, 11:48 AM Post #13 |
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sand kagey got experions
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S0undz pr0 |
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| 50 wounds Sano | May 12 2010, 07:33 PM Post #14 |
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Shadow of Cha
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I'm not escaping... Trunks and Amarante are... |
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| Hachi | May 13 2010, 03:22 PM Post #15 |
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sand kagey got experions
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Yeah,Mistakes I'm not perfect (____( |
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| Jerrumie | May 13 2010, 03:27 PM Post #16 |
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That story sounds interesting. |
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| 50 wounds Sano | May 14 2010, 03:58 PM Post #17 |
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Shadow of Cha
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I AM WAIT |
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| PGRaziel | May 15 2010, 12:58 AM Post #18 |
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Hyuuga Raz
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There is no way they will escape with elite tracker hyuuga raz on the scene! |
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