• Join your Village's Group| The Chronicles of Jamszy [Old]; Part 11: The Battle is far from over | |
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| PupJamszy | Apr 24 2010, 10:45 PM Post #1 |
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"You did your best Boateng" Nara Roi said. "Apparently not good enough to stop this from happening" Boateng said sadly. "You know Konoha can help you re-build the gates" Roi said. "Thanks, i need to do some thinking" Boateng said. Boateng walk towards the gates. He jumped over all the crumbled pieces of the gates and entered the village. "Everyone! I think it would be best if we all went inside Kiri and evaluate the damage" Nara Roi suggested. "I think that would be best too" Ourico said. They all went inside and looked around near the gates. "Well things aren't too bad just some minor damages no biggie" Hyuga Ichigo said. "It would appear so" Mizume Hatashi. "Lets further inspect the village" Ourico said. 2 Hours later. "Guys! Boateng has called a emergency meeting for all kiri ninja" Ourico informed. "I wonder what it could be about" Light JR said. "Same here" Kaguya End said. After half an hour the meeting was over. The Konoha ninja awaited what it was about. All of the ninjas who attended the meeting came back. "We have some bad news" Mizume Hatashi said. "Well not essentially all bad news we have some good news too" Light JR said. "Lets start with bad" DemoN1 said. "Bad news is Boateng quit as kage and has left the village in shame" Ehn said. "What?! Didn't you guys at least try and stop him" Roi said. "We tried but he was too convinced that all of this was his fault. "So whats the good news?" BJisboss asked. "We're getting there" Zelos said. "The good news is, I'm the new kage!" Ourico said happily. All the konoha ninja we're stunned that a new kage was found under 1 hour. As acting kage my first order of duty is to get revenge on Blitzkrieg! "We're almost there" said Jamszy. "Thanks Jamszy I'm feeling better now" said JOkaa. They sat quietly and thought, re-playing what just happened just moments ago. "Wooo i can't believe we survived that" said Jamszy. "I know" said JOkaa. "But at least we can learn something from this" said Jamszy. -BOOM- "Ahhh!!" they both yelled. "What was that!" JOkaa yelled. -BOOM- "Damn it! Not now!" Jamszy said. Jamszy peered over the edge and saw rogue ninjas shooting bombs at them. "It's rogue ninjas" said Jamszy. "Oh no! I still can't even fight yet" said JOkaa. "There's no other choice" Jamszy said. "What do you mean" JOkaa said. -BOOM- "You have to stay and go to Suna just send help when you get there" said Jamszy. "No, that's too risky" said JOkaa. "I'll be fine i almost have enough strength to perform another Rebirth" said Jamszy. -BOOM- "Damn! I have to go now before they hit us" Jamszy said. Jamszy prepared to jump off but JOkaa stopped him. "Jamszy... be careful" JOkaa said. Jamszy nodded in acknowledgment. He then jumped off the bird. "Someones coming!" yelled one of the rogue ninjas. Jamszy landed in a tree then jumped down it and appeared right in front of the rogue ninja. "Bring it on!" yelled Jamszy. He threw a punch but the ninja blocked it and kicked Jamszy in the gut. He kicked winded Jamszy temporarily then the ninja followed up with a knee to the face and still in mid-air kicked Jamszy. "heh your pretty good" said Jamszy. "If that made me good then this should make me great!" yelled the Rogue ninja. "Multiple Shadow Clones!" yelled the ninja. There was now 30 of the ninja. "Is this all?" asked Jamszy. "Nope" suddenly another rogue ninja arrived. "Multiple Shadow Clones" said the rogue ninja. Now it was 60 against 1. "Man! now this is a problem" said Jamszy. "OK so its 2 against one" thought Cauis. "Amarante can barely move so he shouldn't be a problem but Trunks will be more of a problem" he added. "Well are you going to stand there all day or are you going to fight" said Trunks. "Ah forget it! I'll make the first move" said Trunks. He ran at Cauis and in return Cauis charged back. But as they neared Cauis quickly shushined away back to Amarante. "Sorry but you didn't think you'd get off did you?" said Cauis. He struck him with a Ctr directly down. The impact forced him to crash backwards into the ground which formed a giant crater in the ground. Amarante was knocked out in the ground. "Heh and you came to help him? Hahaha" chuckled Cauis. The comment angered Trunks. "That's it Cauis you called for it" said Trunks. "Well now that he's out of the way i can do this" said Cauis. "Rebirth!" yelled Cauis. His body began glowing golden and all of his wounds disappeared and his body was rejuvenated. "Damn it!" said Trunks. "What? You didn't think that you we're going to get me all wounded up?" said Cauis. "No matter your still going to die here" said Trunks. He moved his fastest and tried to hit him but Cauis' speed was way more faster then Trunks comprehended. "What the hell?" said Trunks. Cauis disappeared and before Trunks could re-act Cauis already has punched him in his gut. He then grabbed Trunks' arm and threw him. He then disappeared in the path of Trunks path. Kicked him which sent him flying in a different direction. Once again Cauis moved in his path. This time he raised his hand and loaded up at CTR and when Trunks was close enough Cauis used his CTR to slam Trunks into the ground which once again created a crater. Cauis was relentless. He stepped in Trunks' gut and kicked him like he was nothing more than trash. Cauis quickly followed up the kick with another CTR strike. But this time he used it in a uppercut motion which made contact with Trunks' jaw which sent him flying into the air. Cauis did nothing to follow it up. He let his body slam into the ground. Cauis walked to his body and knelt down and now he was directly in his face. "Silly boy fight me again when your stronger" said Cauis. "Cauis, the missing are retreating" said Liomli. Cauis picked up Trunks' body and Liomli took Amarantes body. "We can keep them for interrogation" said Cauis. "Are you sure you want to make this decision already?" asked Roi. "Positive" said Ourico. "Fine, if that's your choice" said Roi. Ourico and Roi stared at each other for a while. "I thinks its time you and the other leaf ninjas leave we need to begin re-construction as soon as possible" said Ourico. "Of course" Roi replied. "Leaf! Return to leaf" added Roi. On the way back Roi's mind was cluttered with thought. "Can we really trust Ourico" asked DemoN1. "I'm not sure" said Roi. "All we can do is keep our guards up i will hold a meeting when i know exactly what to do" said Roi. Ourico stood at the gates and watched. "All Kiri ninja! Return to the meeting hall we need to discuss a few things" said Ourico. All the ninjas followed orders and went to the meeting hall. "OK now that i have announced my plans we must begin planning" said Ourico. "First of all I'll need the recuperation division to work with the builders to re-build the gates" he added. "Kage Ourico we have fully evaluated the damages and we have predictions of completion of repairs to be done in 2-3 months" said the leader of the recuperation division. "That's too long is there anything you can do to speed up the process. "Well yes we'll need to in-list help from the Atatsuari they live in the land of thunder they can slim down the process to a matter of weeks with out help" the leader responded. "Good get they're help" said Ourico. "OK all non Kiri ninjas leave the room planning for revenge on Blitzkreig is starting and this plan is top secret" said Ourico. Ourico waited a moment for them all to leave. "Now here's the plan" said Ourico. What will happen to Jamszy! And what is Ourico's plan stay tuned to find out! Edited by PupJamszy, Apr 30 2010, 04:03 PM.
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| Kyoshi | Apr 24 2010, 10:47 PM Post #2 |
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man, what no Kyoshi parts *Rages* |
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| PupJamszy | Apr 24 2010, 10:54 PM Post #3 |
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Seriously you guys are getting annoying, i put you in story and when your not in next part your like "Uhh I'm not in this one" don't reply if that's all your going to say. |
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| Mugga | Apr 25 2010, 07:47 AM Post #4 |
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Cauis completly wrecked me.. I didn't even touch him, its all good tho i still like da story
Edited by Mugga, Apr 25 2010, 07:48 AM.
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| Ichiro | Apr 25 2010, 12:52 PM Post #5 |
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Lol ,that line you made there 'fight me when you get stronger boi' If my manga analisis is good enouth trunks will turn into emo-avenger now |
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| Raiton Shinobi, Uchiha Sanosuke | Apr 25 2010, 01:58 PM Post #6 |
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50 wounds Sano
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LOL ^ |
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| Mugga | Apr 25 2010, 09:12 PM Post #7 |
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Lol nice. |
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| Gatlocke | Apr 26 2010, 09:54 AM Post #8 |
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Gatlocke
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i luv these stories i cant wait for nxt one o btw where am i in this lol |
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| Pboy07 | Apr 26 2010, 11:19 AM Post #9 |
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Pardon The Swag
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| Da Motha Fucking JOkaa | Apr 27 2010, 12:56 PM Post #10 |
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pshhh i could take those rouge ninjas wit one finger XD |
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| Ripperthepuppet | Apr 27 2010, 01:12 PM Post #11 |
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yeah you would take them out to a restraunt and give them your finger as a peace offering lol. |
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| Mugga | Apr 27 2010, 01:51 PM Post #12 |
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LOL Edit: Don't forget about my sharingan, and btw I'm a genjutsu/rfx and con user. Edited by Mugga, Apr 27 2010, 01:55 PM.
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| Da Motha Fucking JOkaa | Apr 27 2010, 03:00 PM Post #13 |
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xD how did u kno rofl |
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| Synopsis | Apr 27 2010, 04:50 PM Post #14 |
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where am I naa jk good story bro
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| NeverBulet Dilan | Apr 27 2010, 06:55 PM Post #15 |
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THA BEAST!
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put me in "kyoshi2 or shadow 0" plzzzz kyoshi2 is from leaf and shadow 0 is missing |
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| The Kaimana | Apr 27 2010, 07:25 PM Post #16 |
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Swag surfin >:D
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Dawg where all my post going? |
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| Liomli | Apr 27 2010, 08:03 PM Post #17 |
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Lol awesome story. You probably should look to write in the future. |
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| PupJamszy | Apr 28 2010, 03:42 PM Post #18 |
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Part 12 coming out April 30th |
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| Mugga | Apr 28 2010, 05:15 PM Post #19 |
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I hope you make me own this time.. lol |
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| Liomli | Apr 28 2010, 06:13 PM Post #20 |
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Do you work on this in a few minutes or it takes you hell of a long time? |
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| PupJamszy | Apr 28 2010, 07:16 PM Post #21 |
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few minutes but i use the days i dont type to think of more ideas. |
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| Raiton Shinobi, Uchiha Sanosuke | Apr 29 2010, 11:56 AM Post #22 |
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50 wounds Sano
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This is that day before another chapter in this hit series is released! Stay tuned folks! |
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naa jk good story bro

3:48 AM Jul 11