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| the puppy | Jun 4 2009, 09:16 PM |
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Note on using my characters: -Please try to avoid using my characters in your posts. If you are unable to do so, please make sure you fully understand the character's personality and assess if what you are going to write for that character's speech would actually come out of that character's mouth. -Cait's post brought this recurring problem to my attention. Every time someone other than me uses one of my characters, I have to edit the post to make it sound like it's actually the character speaking. I will use her post as my example for this problem: Cait said: "Soldier2: --- First a fox tail and now wolf ears..." My edit: "Soldier1: --- First a fox tail and now wolf ears. What's next? Bat wings?" 1. I assumed that Cait was trying to use the arrogant, smart mouthed character, so I changed the soldier number. 2. The character I assumed Cait was trying to use (assuming is bad, but necessary at times) would have added a smart comment at the end, as apposed to making a strange, out of place comment. |
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