A poem I wrote today

A poem I wrote today
Topic Started: Apr 23 2008, 12:21 AM (24 Views)
Spider Pig	Apr 23 2008, 12:21 AM Post #1
Posts: 13 Group: Global Moderators Member #4 Joined: Apr 21, 2008 Gender Male Mood Horny What Browser are you using? IE	Stupid National Poem Month XD I did this for homework. I never noticed the red gate, Besides Ms. A’s brown door. It imprisons students and teachers, And maybe even more. Little did I know, It hung over me like regret. Little did I know, It hung over me like debt. If you try to leave, It will shut close, Leaving you waiting, Waiting on your toes. Until the bell rings, You are the edge of your seat. Even if you leave early, The gate cannot be beat. The big red gate is like a camera. There is one way out. This way can be very hard, It is learning, with no doubt. But maybe it cares for us. Maybe it has feelings too. It may fell sorrow or happiness. Maybe it cares for everyone,me,and you. At the end of the day, Through the hallways we soar. Through the hallways, And out the door. We don’t care, About the poor red gate, We cheer to get out, Just getting away is enough to be great. ~ By Zach Schmidt ~



J'Quan	Apr 23 2008, 12:23 AM Post #2
Administrator Posts: 59 Group: Admins Member #1 Joined: Apr 19, 2008 Gender Male Mood Happy What Browser are you using? IE	Thats a cool poem, i wish i could write poems like you



Spider Pig	Apr 23 2008, 12:24 AM Post #3
Posts: 13 Group: Global Moderators Member #4 Joined: Apr 21, 2008 Gender Male Mood Horny What Browser are you using? IE	Thanks



kaBrown	Apr 25 2008, 02:16 AM Post #4
Posts: 15 Group: Commited Member Member #6 Joined: Apr 24, 2008 Mood Apathetic What Browser are you using? Firefox	I like the poem a lot. It is very true too. I like the words you used in it. Good job! :)



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