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Thundra	May 11 2008, 12:13 AM
Posts: 2 Group: Newbie Member #11 Joined: May 10, 2008 Gender Female Mood Musical What Browser are you using? Firefox	Um... 6/10. Way too many errors. the first word of the story wasn't even supposed to be there, in my opinion. It didn't sound right. I think you should go over and revise the whole thing, checking for grammar and spelling mistakes. the plot is okay though.


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