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| [Accepted] Serafina Alfel | |
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| Topic Started: Nov 4 2016, 02:31 AM (1,091 Views) | |
| SilverRush | Nov 4 2016, 02:31 AM Post #1 |
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Account Name: SilverRush Profile Name: Serafina Alfel Nickname: "Fina." Age: 18 Gender: Female Height: 4'8 Weight: 82lbs Guild: N/A Class: D Affiliation: Neutral Appearance Physical Description: In due to the drain on her body from her family seal, Fina's body grew at a slower rate than most, leaving her with a petite, lithe, highly youthful appearance, even at age eighteen. Other than her small stature, other points that stand out about Fina are her light ruby colored eyes, supple posture, soft skin, and unique hair style, which fluidly transitions from a "cool blue" to a pale, silver-like white at certain points. Additionally, her hair has a notable, large cow-lick which forms at the top of her hair, near the center, rising in a curved fashion with a springy nature. Lastly, due to her more serious sided nature, Fina's expressions are usually indifferent in nature, though her indifference could easily be confused as a scowl by others who don't know her well. Clothing: Due to her age and small stature, Fina has trouble finding clothes in her size that fit her tastes. Despite this, she found an attire she likes, which consists of a one piece, shoulder-less dress which ends mid thigh level. Unfortunately, the sleeves are notably just abit longer than her arms, giving abit of an oversized appearance to the dress. The dress itself is blue with white streaks going across it, and fuzzy, warm patches of cloth near the shoulders. Through the chest of the dress are multiple woven stitches, giving it a tighter bond and structure. Lastly, the dress has two ornamental sections similar to an arrow in design in different locations. While the light blue clothes running down the dress at opposite sides are adorned with a bright red, shiny lacryma, the black and red cloth adornments around her waist cross together, pinned together with a button with an X-shaped mark. Accessories: One notable accessory Fina wears is the blue and white ribbon loosely tied around her neck, adorned with a gold buckler and a smooth, rounded, pure amethyst gem upon it's center. Extra: On her left hand, Fina holds the seal of her family, the vertical line of the symbol extending to the edges in between her index and middle finger. Alfel Family Seal Picture: Fina Alfel Personality Serious. That's probably the best way to describe Fina in a single word. She's blunt, to the point, and at times, abit rude unintentionally, or even cold. In truth, she hates large crowds and constant noise, preferring to be alone much of the time. Unfortunately, her bond with Ueru has made this near an impossible feat. While in a sense her "responsibility," Fina somewhat despises she was forced to deal with the burden Ueru provides, finding their antics annoying and stressful. Due to this in part, she's also not afraid to use Ueru's powers in ways that benefit herself within certain limits, even if abit questionable. Her way of making the best of the situation, per say. Though she is normally very calm and serious, this is partially caused by shyness in a sense, finding it hard to deal with people. In fact, her size doesn't quite help, and finds any comments regarding it highly aggravating. As a result, she "hates" being carried, which frustrates her especially. Due to her serious nature, Fina's expressions, both facially and verbally are usually indifferent, but can be taken as scowling or annoyed pouting by those who do not know her. In terms of personal interests, Fina specifically has a liking to mystery novels, reading, and exotic foods, specifically onigiri and herbal tea. (Though she has a special liking to ume onigiri.) She especially likes games of the mind which test wit and creativity, including chess, sudoku, and crossword puzzles. Despite her calculating, cold behavior, she has a secret liking to reading romance novels, though she would never admit it. Oddly, she addresses herself as "Fina" instead of by her full name, though this presumably would be for the sense of familiarity, as Fina is generally down to earth in most regards. While she seems cold and distant, this is actually her own form of shyness, as she finds dealing with people and socializing difficult as it is exhausting. If someone manages to get her trust however, Fina can show a softer side with those she trusts, showing a deeper personality than she initially lets on. History Genesis Fina's Backround And so it begins... Weaponry/Equipment Name: Ofuda Lined Dress. Class: D Description: A basic attire, but one that fits the purposes of traveling, made from a durable, yet soft magic woven threads. Throughout the white streaks starting at her shoulders that run down her sleeves, various, kanji and symbols are written in precise fashion, reinforcing the clothing's fibers beyond what regular cloth could normally achieve. Effect/Function: Functions as D-rank armor. Name: Silver Dagger Class: D-Rank Description: A small dagger with a sheathe, which Fina keeps concealed behind her belt, near the right thigh. The blade itself shines brightly with a clean, metallic look, made of high purity silver, a must have for any super natural slayer. At the base of the blade lays two, extending hand guards, which curve off into a shaped, triangular pattern, allowing for skillful parries and deflections if used properly. Effect/Function: Functions as a D-rank weapon, capable of dealing cutting/piercing damage with the blade, or blunt damage with the bottom on the handle. Name: Ofuda Tag: "Down Ueru!" Class: C Description: A specialized, durable paper tag adorned with many various seals and kanji, that Fina created shortly after Ueru manifested themselves. Though she dislikes using it, it ensures Ueru is kept in check if he attempts to do something she doesn't necessarily wish for. Effect/Function: This item works as a re-usable sealing tag, specifically to keep Ueru in control. When Fina presses this seal against Ueru, they immediately are forced into the ground with great force, causing no harm, but momentarily stunning them and leaving them unable to act or cast spells for the post, while leaving them disorientated on the following post. Due to the intricate, detailed nature of the seals however, this tag only functions on Ueru, and has zero effect when applied to other targets. Cooldown between applications is 2 posts. Stats - 65 Power: 5 Endurance: 9 Toughness: 6 Speed: 9 Accuracy: 6 Magic: 30 Earned Stat Points Earned: 0/10 Arc Points Earned: 0/0 Jewels Earned: 1,800,000/5,100,000 (5,100,000) [Current/Earned (Total)] Sources Sources Skills & Disciplines Ofuda Maker: By tradition, the Alfel family passes down a language of seals and symbols from one generation to the next, the style of which is unique to their family. As such, Fina is well versed in the tradition of crafting "Ofuda," paper seals which normally serve protective or warding purposes, though the potential uses for Ofuda are near unlimited depending on how the language is used. Keen Intellect: Due to Fina's intensive studies and interest in games of wit, along with natural observational skills, she possesses a sharp intellect, allowing her to grasp a variety of fields with ease. She's very quick to learn new fields of study or practice, and possesses a very sharp memory. Unfortunately, her ability to dissect and assimilate new knowledge doesn't extend into all fields, such as one's which are more intuitive in nature rather than logical. Gamer: From chess, checkers, puzzles, and even the classical Rubik's Cube, Fina loves games that test one's wit, creativity, and strategic ability. In fact, games are one of the few things that can elicit a more motivated side of Fina, if the game itself interests her anyway. When she is properly motivated, she's not only capable of quickly memorizing the rules of a game, but capable of grasping a deeper level of strategy and making them work in her favor. Magic Magic Name: Ue Ue Ueru! Magic Type: Hungry Ghost Summoning Tier of Magic: T1 Rank: 4 Magic Description: Being born with her family's seal on her hand, Fina holds the responsibility of keeping Ueru sealed, and more over, re-applying the seal which has kept them contained when the time comes. This is done through the "Primary Seal," which is located at the spot Ueru was originally binded to the family, which functions simultaneously as the chain that bonds the two, and it's very own power source. Through this, a form of symbiosis is achieved. Ueru, who is normally "asleep" at the primary seal is allowed some limited freedom, while Fina can manifest Ueru on a whim to fight for her. As Fina's mastery over the seal grows, she later on can even learn to forcefully draw energy from the primary seal, giving her limited access to strange, ghostly powers similar to Ueru's. Techniques: 4/6 (4 Earned + 2 Bought) Lunch Time! - (4) Type: Single Summoning Range: Self Effect: Bound to Fina through the mark on her left hand, Ueru is given minor freedom as long as she is alive. As such, Ueru is constantly accompanying Fina, functioning as a body guard when neccesary. Due to their magical connection, if Ueru is defeated, Fina suffers from an intense magical and mental backlash, leaving her disorientated, confused, and uncoordinated for a single post. Additionally, Ueru when defeated is left unconscious, in a fully intangible form, unable to be truly "killed," but unable to act. After three posts in the KOed state pass, Ueru will awake and "materalize," capable of fighting once again at full strength. Ueru-Sama! (4)
Edited by Mango, Apr 2 2017, 02:06 AM.
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| 博 Tenken | Nov 23 2016, 11:22 PM Post #2 |
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Hoennese and proud!
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Stat points should be 0/10, since it's "remaining/total" not "used/total"
Gonna point out almost all energy-based magic should be able to interact with his intangibility and actually "kill" him off. Just saiyan. How far can the "Ghastly Arms" extend from Ueru? Phase: Gonna make this like the shield rules: higher ranks break and deal full damage, lower ranks just pass through, equal ranks break and take half damage. Nom: Please give an actual size indicator for the bite since the "average" person has massively fluctuating arm dimensions. |
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| SilverRush | Nov 24 2016, 01:49 AM Post #3 |
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Thanks for the feedback man. So, in order, listing all changes I made... -Slightly adjusted height and weight. -Fixed sp earned. -Gave more solid measurements with the arms, and added details for later on when Ueru gets a growth spell. -Phase rules changed, they take half damage and are forced out of form from phase by equal rank spells, while lower ranked spells pass through. I am not sure if you wished for me to remove the physical intangibility, but to keep with the ghost theme, and seeing as how it's a personal effect that only lasts a single post, I am hoping it can defend against both magic and physical skills. Though, if other changes are required, let me know.~ -Gave a more definite area that "Nom" can bite, three inches diameter maximum for now, roughly the size of a soup can in diameter. I can reduce this if needed though. As for the summoning and defeat, I was under the assumption, rather, I swear I read somewhere that if a T1 summon would "die," it would merely be unsummoned, and allowed to be resummoned after cooldown has passed. The intangibility I basically was hoping to have as an aesthetic replacement for having the summon simply disappear from sight after defeat, the concept being that Ueru's form of being "unsummoned" prevents them from manifesting or "existing," in that sense until they can be revived. If this is not acceptable, however, I am more than willing to change that part or remove it entirely to have Ueru "poof" more akin to other summons when defeated. Edit: Also added in a duration/cooldown for the ghost blade form just now, as I forgot that previously. Edited by SilverRush, Nov 24 2016, 02:03 AM.
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| 司 Mango | Nov 24 2016, 07:41 PM Post #4 |
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-Blade Form's class should be based off the rank of the technique itself, not the class of his natural armor. -I'm gonna ask that you remove the damage from Power stat on Nom. -Range on your Single Summoning technique should be "Self". -Boo! can probably have a 2-post duration at this rank. Edited by Mango, Nov 24 2016, 07:43 PM.
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| SilverRush | Nov 25 2016, 02:13 AM Post #5 |
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Thanks for the help Ramen.~ Listing things in order of changes... -Changed summon range to self. -Made blade form's rank determined by spell rank, not natural armor. -Due to a talk with an admin, "Blade Form" was adjusted to where if they use any spell which changes their body, it forcibly ends the sword. (So they can't ignore armor/go invisible/bite things in sword form without changing out of form.) -"Boo" given a duration of 2 posts. (Thank you for bringing that to my attention.) -Changed phase abit, as it implied an offensive use previously which was denied due to the defensive application the technique possesses. -Added Cooldown to phase. (How the hell did I forget to add that...?) -Renamed Ofuda Tag, didn't change the effects -Slight additions to Ueru's personality and appearance. Hope that fixes the previous issues with the application, though if others are found I will gladly edit them.~ Edit: Slightly edited the description of the Silver Dagger, and fixed afew typos in history and Ueru's personality. Somanytypos. Typoseerywhere. Edit 2: I have a question actually, regarding the "Power Transfer" technique for summoners. If I do not get it now, do I have the option to get it later on, or does power transfer need to be included with the magic at it's creation? If it must be added first and cannot be added later on, I may wish to add that before approval. Edited by SilverRush, Nov 25 2016, 03:28 AM.
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| 梟 Inara Serra | Nov 27 2016, 07:25 PM Post #6 |
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Honesty without tact is cruelty.
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Ofuda Tag I'm sorry to bother you, but D rank items can't have magical effects at all. not even non-combat or summon specific ones. So the tag will have to go, or you'll have to buy a C rank version. It is not required that you have the stat sharing tech at the beginning. Otherwise, I see little to no issues. Please let us know what you'd like to do about the item though. |
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| SilverRush | Nov 27 2016, 10:06 PM Post #7 |
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Ayyee, thanks Ina for the help.~ I removed the tag, and made an application for it in item creation as a C-rank item. I also changed the name of the dress, but the name only. Anyway, good to hear the stat sharing tech isn't required, as I'm unsure if I want to get that later, but may. That said, I'll simply wait for the item to be approved separately and add it later if that's alright, as I'm rather eager to get this application approved. Edit: The item was approved rather quickly thanks to Ina. As such, I've added the tag into my items list once more, and reduced 2,100,000 Jewels from my current jewel counts. If I missed anything, please let me know so that I can change it as necessary.~ Edited by SilverRush, Nov 28 2016, 05:43 AM.
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| 司 Mango | Nov 28 2016, 08:26 PM Post #8 |
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What's The Point
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You're missing a 0 in your Birthday Appreciation source. 1/2~ assuming nothing else requires major editing. |
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| SilverRush | Nov 28 2016, 08:41 PM Post #9 |
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Thanks Ramen.~ Much appreciated.~ As a side note, I just edited in the last 0 into the Birthday Appreciation source, but otherwise made no changes to the profile elsewhere. Edit: Adjusted a typo I made in "Blade form." It previously stated that it would end if a spell "effects" Ueru's body, when I meant to state changes to the body's shape or nature. (Such as Nom, Phase, or Boo.) This is primarily adjusted so that they can still use "Float" in blade form. It now states that spells which change the shape or form of their body will end the spell, and that "Float" is not counted.) If this warrants resetting the application at 0/2 approvals, I understand entirely, but I wished to adjust that so it does not raise issues later. Edited by SilverRush, Dec 3 2016, 07:39 AM.
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| 司 Potato | Dec 4 2016, 08:55 PM Post #10 |
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Crème de la Kremlin
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spoopy 2/2 Your character application is now accepted and will be placed in the archived forum. This topic has now been resolved, so therefore its closed. This is an automatic message. |
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