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[Accepted] Annelis Barnes; A character for a thing.
Topic Started: Sep 21 2016, 01:03 AM (867 Views)
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Given Name: Annelis Barnes
Nicknames: (to be earned) Anne, Annie
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Height: 175 cm (5 feet, 9 inches)
Weight: 64.9 kg (143 pounds)
Blood Type: O+
Western Astrology: Pisces
Chinese Astrology: Ox
Lucky Number: 3
Lucky Color: Green (of course!)
Guild: n/a
Class: D
Affiliation: Neutral

Theme Song:




"People keep telling me that the pen is mightier than the sword, but when your sword works as a pen too what do you do then?"


Trivial Details
Physical Description
Wardrobe



”My story is too short for me to act my age; being a kid is so much more fun!”


Personality
Talents & Skills



"If my life is one giant story, then where's my hero?"


History
Equipment



"Why must I be plagued by the burdens of eating and sleeping when I could be using that time for adventures?"


55 – 55
PowerAccuracyEndurance ToughnessSpeedMagic
812771110
Stat Points EarnedArc Points EarnedTotal Jewels Earned
0/00/0100,000/100,000

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"So many things to draw, and so little paper."



Sketch-Make
Magic TypeMagic TierMagic RankTechniques
Make (Ink)123/3

Annelis has the ability to create and work with ink in a variety of ways. If she has a sketchbook handy she can take her drawings straight off the page as temporary items for usage - this can be weapons, a shield, or even just a toy to play with. Annelis can also store magic within her weapons, turning her variety of bladed weapons into a larger set of artist’s tools. From there she can blast foes with ink, create shields and eventually work her way up to more complex attack methods.





Creation - 1
Type: Supportive (Make)
Range: The only limit here is the length of the tool being used. Therefore, the longest tool, her longsword, currently rests as the range limit. (90 cm (arm length) + 175 cm (sword length) = 265 cm...or about 8.7 ft...or about 165 inches.
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 2 post
Effect: For one post, Annelis can sketch down an item that she would like to use, then take the object straight out of the paper, bringing it into real life for her to use. These objects will have blurred lines and muted colors, similar to that of a drawing. Annelis can then use this object for the duration of the post she Created it in before it dissolves into ink upon the start of the next post.
Restrictions


Ink Blast - 1
Type: Offensive
Range: 10m
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Effect: Annelis can channel some of her magic through her sword and store it in the hilt of her sword. She can then point the tip of her sword at the target she wishes to blast and shoot a blast of magic in the form of ink at her opponent. This ink can serve to blind the opponent, unbalance them or simply as a distraction/something funny. Said ink will dissipate after two posts, though any stains it has left on clothing will remain.
Any opponent with 10 Accuracy or less will be blinded when splashed with ink.

Barrier - 1
Type: Defensive
Range: 2m
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 2 posts
Effect: Annelis can channel some of her magic through her sword and store it in the hilt of her sword. She can then draw a circle around herself on the ground around her with a 2 meter diameter. Once the circle is complete, Annelis can lift her sword. The magic will cut itself off and the barrier will separate Annelis from the outside world for one post - unless her Barrier is broken. After five superficial attacks hit the barrier and/or another post starts, it will dissolve, leaving a black ring on the ground where the barrier once stood.
Edited by AnimaIgnis, Oct 12 2016, 01:36 PM.
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Noticed I forgot to delete something - just deleting the template stuff out from a line or two in the equipment section. Also ported in Annelis' abilties outside of her magic, as I had forgotten to add those in as well.
Edited by AnimaIgnis, Sep 22 2016, 07:46 PM.
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Edited the magic, rewrote the techniques and rewrote some of the history - going for a "storybook hero" theme for her magic and character arc. Also added some items and did a bit of formatting.
Edited by AnimaIgnis, Sep 27 2016, 01:23 PM.
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Final edits done. Awaiting staff reply! (pardon the number of posts here, but my school wifi was strange about posts and separated them out)
Edited by AnimaIgnis, Sep 27 2016, 03:29 AM.
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Hullo there Anima!

Starting from the top.

You need the Account Name: and Me tag at the very top of your profile.
Copy and paste the below at the very very top:

[b]Account Name:[/b] [me][hr]

Accessories
You say the pendant is magical, however, if you want this to be so, you need to make said magic dormant for the time being.
--Items cannot be innately magical until at least B rank (C rank if non-combative)

History
--You still make frequent mention of her being an exquip mage. Might wanna fix that.

Weapons Etc.
--Since you're not actually exquip anymore, your initial amount of items for free is 5 total.

--Again, things are usually considered magical only at the ranks mentioned above.

--Your sketch pad won't be innately magical, but it can be used as a conduit for your magic to some extent (at least until you buy an upgrade.)

Sources
--You seem to be missing this tab altogether.
Please copy and paste the below under your stats and monies.

[spoiler=Sources][url=http://s1.zetaboards.com/Fairy_Tail_Guild/topic/2510350/1]Character Creation[/url] 100,000 Jewels[/spoiler]


Magic
--Just going to offer up here that, your magic is described as "ink make," and not "paper make". While it is perfectly acceptable to use paper as the conduit, that would make it holder instead of make magic, as an additional item would be required.

--You can just as easily say that for now, ink is all that is necessary. A perfectly mundane item in and of itself, to be manipulated at the user's will. (and who is to say you can't sketch on the air, or the ground?)

With that in mind, please edit as you see fit.

Post again in this thread when edits are done. If you have questions feel free to PM or PC me when I'm around.

As a bonus, I really love your physical description and personality. Made me giggle. ^.^

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Edited as necessary! History and other things changed to reflect the change from Exquip to Ink Make, and items reduced. Other missing things have also been added (edited in another tab, pardon the missing things, they must have not transferred or something).

Edit: as of 28/09/2016, complete reformat has happened. All the same information plus a few extra things.
Edited by AnimaIgnis, Sep 29 2016, 04:12 AM.
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What's The Point

-You shouldn't be blocking any and all attacks from inside and out at Rank 1, or any Rank for that matter. Here are the guidelines for shields and barriers, it'll give you an idea of how to format your technique.

-As a heads-up, your image coding is broken. There should be an "http:\\" before the link. Also, the image spoilers in your physical description section are empty.

-Ink Blast's duration should be 2, as the effect last for 2 posts.

Creation
-I'd call this a Supportive (Make) effect.

-Range refers to the distance of the technique effect, which in this case would just be Self.

-There should be some sort of scaling - for example, "can only copy items lesser than or equal to 10kg in weight" or some such thing.

-Things you cannot copy (e.g. living organisms, magical effects on items, etc) also need to be specified, perhaps spoiler'd under the technique itself.

-I'm also gonna say that for equipment, you can only create D-Class items at R1. The limit will go up with technique Rank; this is just so that you're not waving around a copied S-Class sword at Rank 1.

-What are the parameters for copying an item? Does she need to see the object x amount of times, or have it in front of her to be able to copy it?

-What about items that require ammunition, like bows or firearms?
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Done and done! Magic edited and picture fixed. (Thanks to Fairchild for doing the rainbow hair!)
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Magic
The fact that she can use her magic with completely different kinds of item would make this magic a Tier 1

If you want to keep it Tier 2:
She should only be able to create magic from ink, ink in general by doodling or writing a character. So instead of saying that she can store magic in her weapons, like her actual sword, it should be phrase as she can grant powers upon her weapons using ink, like writing a charm so that her sword does more damage or something. And refraining from supportive spells such as heals, buffs, debuffs, and movement techniques such as dashes, flight, teleportation should keep you in Tier 2.

Creation
-If you can create practically anything with this technique, the duration will be reduced to 1 post for both the technique and how long the item lasts, for now. The cooldown will be increased to 2 post.

-If you want to have a longer duration, you'll have to create a specific technique for the item being created.

Ink Blast
-Cooldown to 3 posts
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And done. Added some pictures and other things to make it a little prettier.
Edited by AnimaIgnis, Oct 3 2016, 02:55 PM.
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