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[Accepted] Adore E. Fleurette
Topic Started: Sep 10 2016, 07:16 AM (374 Views)
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Adore E. Fleurette

Age: 19
Gender: Female
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 50 kg
Guild: N/A
Class: D
Affiliation: Neutral Good

Physical Description: Adore's sizing labels her as a petite woman, with emerald coloured hair that forms into a semi messy bang on her forehead. Accompanying her hair is also her eyes that radiate the same colour but with more detail, closer resembling the deep green gemstone. Fair complexion with no scars, runs along the surface of her body. Additionally coats of pale green nail polish are on the fingers and toes, complimenting back to her eyes and hair.

She is a lover of exercise, rewarding her body to be nicely toned on the slim slide, and naturally smooth all around the right places. Perky chest, narrow body with hips that move outwards. Short arms and small hands plus feet. In the summer her body always becomes a light tone olive colour, usually fading back when the summer is over.

During winter her ears go very red due to the cold, the same thing happens with her nose. Whenever its summer, Adore likes to style her hair in a twin tail format with ribbons tied to either end.

Clothing: Her short pale brown overalls are her go to outfit, with multiple floral patterns on the side. The piece showcases alot of her exposed bare skin. Her usually choices of gear are shorts cause she finds them comfortable, (she hates long jeans) skirts, scarves. Whenever its winter she usually still wears some kind of shorts or skirt, refusing to where winter clothes for her legs. However she decks herself out in beanies, gloves, long knee socks, scarves, cardigans and even ear muffs.

Ribbons, hair clips, bobby pins are always on Adore, and not necessary in her hair. She has a love for all things bow, in which she tries to incorporate in her outfits, whether it be bow socks, hair ties, bikinis etc

Accessories: Music player for the tunes, headphones for private listening & sun glasses for them sunny rays.



Personality
Description: Adore is soft-spoken and polite, always thinking of others' feelings and well-being. Her overwhelming kindness has on many occasions, rendered herself unable to respond or act in fear of offending somebody. Confidence is an obstacle in her life, making her even more bashful because she has placed so little faith in her own thoughts and opinions. Her admiration towards people who speak their mind and don't care what others think, become role models in her books.

Fighting is frowned upon as violence doesn't mesh well with her, as she struggles with the idea to hurt another person. Though she is open towards those who choose to fight, and at times she'll take a step forward and raise her fists. Hesitation is the only thing stopping her from inflicting another with pain. Persistence is a virtue she lives by, even if its in tiny steps.

When it comes to men, Adore has not a single clue about them. She's rather clueless if there's a man hitting on her or vice versa. What can be mistaken as flirting, may just be Adore attempting to be kind and approachable.

She has no sense of awkwardness due to the fact she didn't have a social upbringing as a child.

Day dreaming is her past time, shifting from reality to her imagination, she tends to zone out with her mouth open and lose track of time to what she was thinking or dreaming about. At times her attention span can be quite poor, especially with things that do not interest her or she doesn't understand.

She seeks to become strong enough to change herself, if even a little at a time. Striving to stand among others as an equal, not afraid, not envious, a goal that she'll hope to achieve one day.

Likes

  • Music
  • Biting others (sign of affection)
  • Children
  • Reading
  • Confidence
  • Rain
Dislikes

  • Bad breath
  • Running
  • Heat
  • Selfish people
  • Flat asses
  • Bullies
  • Creeps


Relationships
Has none
What a loner :C



History
Adore's mother passed away shortly after she was born, it was just her and her father living together at the edge of a cliff over looking the vast beautiful ocean. Her father was a good man, though he worked alot to support them, so Adore never got to see her father as much as she hoped. Her favorite pastime was going down to the beach and exploring the area. On Saturday's her father would take her down and go fishing on his boat. He would catch alot while she barely got any, but it didn't matter cause she'll get to eat her father's catches anyway. One day while she was exploring by her lonesome, she discovered a cove. There she meet Llŷr, a mermaid. She could not believe it but that fateful day made a huge impact on her lonely tiny world.

Llŷr told her stories about her kingdom under the sea, she was a princess however the pressure got too much that she had to get away, that's how she ended in the cove. Llŷr made adore promise not to tell anyone about her, a secret just between the two of them. Their friendship blossomed, Llŷr and Adore would meet a few times during the week, telling each other stories from their two different lives, both curious of the other. Once Adore found out that her mermaid friend knew magic, she begged to learn some of it, even if just a little, something so fascinating so beautiful, so in intriguing. It was difficult at the beginning, no matter how hard she tried, the tasks set by Llŷr were always a failure. She spent hours, concentrating on a cup of water, hoping she can move the water, just like Llŷr. But no matter how hard she tried, nothing happened.

One day at school in the afternoon, Adore spent some time reading under stairs on a bench. She realized she lost track and began heading back home, her father would be home soon. But dark clouds appeared and a heavy shower started to rain on her. Now this wasn't some light shower, it was heavy and thick, the droplets of rain felt like tiny bullets. The amount of it was overwhelming for a little girl like her, she had trouble breathing, it was like she was underwater. Her vision was blurred, she didn't know if she was going the right way. She wished and wished the rain would go away as she kept stumbling forward, after awhile it began to stop, no more tiny stings on her back. But that's when she took a look around, it was still raining, heavier than before, all around her the rain pelted down. Looking up the rain moved away from her, and fell beside her. Like she had some glass umbrella over her stopping the rain. Its then when she realized it was magic, her magic. The rain was avoiding her because of magic, she moved her hands along the path infront of her, pushing puddles away.

She made it to the house with her father staring at her, he witnessed what she did and was afraid she'll get in trouble. But his reaction was of joy, seeing his daughter being able to use magic, just like his wife. The fishing trips were in favor of Adore now, she used her magic powers to catch them one after the other, pushing them out of the water into a tiny bubble floating back to her. Fish was the main diet of the family for many weeks.

When she told Llŷr they were both ecstatic and began using magic whenever they met. On a Saturday her father took her out for their regular fishing trip into the ocean. When her father noticed dark clouds approaching they both began to pack and and begin to head back, the boat started rocking with more roughness by the angry waves, rain started pouring down but luckily Adore could keep them dry with her new found powers. When they began making their trek back home, the boat was pushed roughly, definitely not by a wave but something else.

Out from the water came a gigantic long dark serpent with dead eyes staring at the boat. It began to wrap itself around the boat and slowly squeezing it, the boat began to creep and crumble beneath Adore's feet.

She hugged her father and wished Llŷr would come and save them, her prayer seemed to be answered as Llŷr leaped over the boat and began slicing the beast with her sword. The sword that Adore was very familiar with as Llŷr taught her how to wield one during their time together. Saying a girl she always know how to protect herself. The creature looked like it was slowly being weakened, that is until it managed to wrap its tail around Llŷr and took a bite until her. With a terrifying scream she landed on the boat, clutching her rib where she was bitten. Apparently the bite was poison so there was nothing Adore or her father could do.

Llŷr began chanting words that neither father or daughter could understand, she touched Adore as her spirit began evaporating. But the magic energies were going into Adore, she could feel this surge of power growing within it. The energy was too much that a burst of water came out and sliced part of the boat and the serpent, ending its terror.

This all happened so many years ago, her father told her that he thinks Llŷr transferred her magic energy into Adore. Now all grown up Adore can feel a part of Llŷr inside of her, a source of magic deep inside, ready to be let out.
Edited by Effect, Sep 16 2016, 04:14 PM.
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Skills & Disciplines
Chef: A lover of food, Adore has studied and learned to cook various things to feed the bottomless stomach. The best feeling is when others have eaten her cooking and rave about how good it tastes. Her favorite dishes to make are pho (beef noodle soup), pumpkin soup, seafood combination stir fry, sushi, her own recipe of fried chicken, brownies, macaroons & eclairs.
Bartender: What do you want? A margarita, maybe a pina colada? Oh how about sex on the beach? What you want I can make, I'll get you good and drunk. Let's have a fun time shall we?
Sword Fighting Adore excels in single sword combat, her battle style resembles the flow of water, gentle and timid to rough and unexpected.


Weaponry & Equipment
N/A

Stats - 55
Power: 5
Endurance: 8
Toughness: 7
Speed: 10
Accuracy: 5
Magic: 20


Earned
Stat Points Earned: 0/0
Arc Points Earned: 0/0
Jewels Earned: 100,000/100,000

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Magic

Magic Name: Llŷr (Mermaid Heart)
Magic Type: Take Over | Water Magic
Tier of Magic: 1
Rank: 3
Magic Description: This magic type allows Adore to create, generate, increase, shape and manipulate water. Becoming the embodiment of the element granting her complete control. Toying with the characteristics of water in her favor allowing her to reach deadly feats, associated with floods, storms, shipwrecks, tsunamis and drowning by the power of water. While the magic can reach destructive highs, it also allows Adore to purify water from corruption and use the element as a healing property. Full potential of the magic transforms Adore into the mythical being, Llŷr, Goddess Of The Sea. A powerful mermaid that was responsible for Adore's affiliation with water magic. Bestowing her the control of the element for the entirety of her life.


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Techniques: 3/3

Llŷr - 2
Type: Take Over
Range: Personal
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Effect: Adore transforms into Llŷr, gaining an additional stat increase of:

  • +5 Power
  • +5 Endurance
  • +5 Toughness
  • +5 Speed
  • +6 Accuracy
  • +26 Overall

    Note: Hybrid form at ranks 1-4, gains additional full mermaid form at rank 5 onwards


Water Purity - 1
Type: Purification | Creation
Range: 2m
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 2 posts
Effect: Adore can permanently clean/purify water (small amount), cleansing it of any pollution and toxins that may exist in it and rendering it safe for consumption and habitation or generate (small amount) clean/purified water. Adore can remove corruption at rank 1 or less.[/tab][tab=Llŷr]
Mermaid Form

Hybrid Form: Adore's physical appearance takes on an icier exterior, with faded blue hair, sapphire coloured eyes and paler skin tone. Gills appear alongside her neck while blue-ish and white scales form around her ribs, breasts and crotch. Four small fins form, one on each ankle and each wrist.


Weaponry & Equipment
Name: Scales
Class: D
Description: A tough set of hard scales along her ribs that provides a shielding of armour body.
Name: Sharp Teeth
Class: D
Description: Adore's teeth are naturally sharper than the average human, very useful when it comes to devouring live fishes.
Name: Nails
Class: D
Description: Naturally sharp nails that can cause minor injuries when used to scratch.


Stats- 81 (55+26)
Power: 10
Endurance: 13
Toughness: 12
Speed: 15
Accuracy: 11
Magic: 20



Techniques: 3/4


Aquamarine - 1
Type: Passive
Range: Self
Depth: 5m
Effect: Adore is a natural born swimmer, Being a mermaid allows Adore to naturally breath underwater (seawater/freshwater/cleanwater) below 5 meters in depth.

Ocean Sphere - 2
Type: Offensive | Water
Range: 10m
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Effect: Adore creates two small dense compacted spheres of water that circles the her, within the duration she is able to launch the sphere/s at a targeted area, each sphere deals minimal damage. Upon impact the spheres bursts into small amounts of water. During the spheres duration, if any kind of force is placed upon it, the sphere will be destroyed. (size of sphere is like two tennis balls put together) [/tab][/tabs]


Edited by Effect, Sep 16 2016, 06:50 PM.
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Hello there and welcome to FTG.

Mostly a nice profile. But lets run into some of the magic here shall we?

Water Purification:
- Duration here is asking how long you can do the technique, not how long the purification of the water can last.

-I'd say somewhere between 1 and 2 posts

-You may say that your purification permanently purifies the water this technique is performed on within the tech itself.
-As this effect is permanent, please make the range slightly smaller. Around 2-3 meters instead of 5 at this rank.

TakeOver Form
In your TO form, a sword would not qualify as "Natural Equipment." Your natural equipment is something inherent to the form more usually. If you want a weapon, you're welcome to have up to 5 D rank items as listed under the initial items section.

As for your levitation technique, I am rather iffy on that. While you make a good case, in the way you describe it to some extent, it still doesnt make sense for me ICly for a mermaid. Either make it make sense, or find an alternate means of transport please.

Thats it for this moment. Please post again in this thread once you have edited.
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Thank you! I've made the necessary changes and added in a hybrid take over form, didn't even notice that in the rules until someone pointed it out to me rip

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Despite only having one Take Over technique, instead of only turning into one thing, they may have up to three forms, two combative, and one non-combative. To note now, ALL of these forms must still be related to the creature you turn in to. The two combative forms represent a ‘hybrid’ of a human and your creature of choice, and a ‘beast’ or ‘complete’ transformation, where you turn into the thing totally. You gain the hybrid form over ranks 1-4, your transformation limited as normal for low rank Take Over, gaining the complete transformation at rank 5. From rank 5 onwards, you can pick either the rank 4 hybrid form, or the rank 5 complete form, and still gain the full stats and techniques you would normally gain. Note that the difference between the two forms is ONLY aesthetic; each form must have identical stat gained, natural equipment and techniques granted
Edited by Effect, Sep 16 2016, 04:39 PM.
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Okay going over your Take over form . Yes-- hybrid and full form is doable and works as described to what you said.

Btw, your passive of swimming and gills-- in the interest to save your TP, you can make the two one and the same. The limit however is-- is the depth at which you can swim. Please state a meter depth of how much can she travel and still be able to breathe under water. As a passive technique it is just fine.

Ocean Sphere --- is this to describe a type of 'salvo' of stored attacks? If so you need to make the damage of each sphere to be less than the stated rank. Basically, for 2 spheres at rank 2-- each sphere alone must do 'minimal' damage.

Your purifying water is good-- though in the interest of rank, you may wanna state the 'rank of corruption' in the water. Basically while sure to your concept you only can purify a poisoned source, if compared to another player's 'corruption' spell or poison, perhaps state what magic rank you can purify please.

Finally in your magic description, it is ideal if you also state you could purify and use water as a healing element. For your magic theme and type of manipulation of one element, you could heal with this type of magic if you put that in there. It is coming off as you can use the water as a healing power as well as a destructive force.
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Edited! + using on 3 technique points out of the 4 for my take over form.
Edited by Effect, Sep 16 2016, 05:34 PM.
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" is unable to purify it if the magic rank is higher than the technique's rank."

That is not what i mean. YOu have to refer to the ACTUAL technique rank. Basically a Rank 1. So your spell can remove 'corruption' of Rank 1 or less... Rank 2 or less... and so on.
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Edited! <3
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Okay I gave your character a proper look. It looks really good in written detail and the magic is now solid and makes sense.

I am giving this my 1/2 approval rating. I can't see anything else wrong with it. It looks good :-)
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