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| ComicBookMan | Jan 8 2016, 07:20 PM Post #1 | ||||||||||||||||
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![]() ""Space is warping....oh no, are we being sealed in?!" Magic Name: Kūkan Mahō [Spatial Magic] Magic Type: Support Specialist Magic Tier of Magic: 1 Rank: 2 Magic Description: A magic that incorporates the essence of space itself in a variety of supportive ways; such as teleporting the Caster and others over vast distances and even swapping places with someone in an effort to save their life. Proficient Casters manipulate dimension space to slow down others in a aura around the user, speed up the user and/or others in order to increase ones celerity, etc. Through this magic it's Caster can also create a portal in order to house and retrieve objects in a pocket of space. Lastly the Magic is known to also grant the user with enhanced spatial awareness. While powerful and a great support magic, Spatial magic offers very little in the way of offensive attacks only having one main offensive attack. Through the use of this Magic the Caster creates a portal to warp a STRIKE through. Techniques: 2/2 Kūkan Mahō: Fowādingu Bijon [Spatial Magic: Forwarding Vision] - (1) Type: Supportive Range: Personal Effect: A self only spell the user manipulates space to increase their speed which and their perception so they may see while moving at enhanced speed. Progression Kūkan ninshiki [Spatial Awarness] - (1) Type: Supportive Range: Personal Effect: This allows for an advanced organization of knowledge of objects in relation to oneself in that given space around them. Spatial awareness involves understanding the relationship of these objects when there is a change of position by using ones enhanced sensory system. Progression
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| ComicBookMan | Jan 8 2016, 07:32 PM Post #2 | ||||||||||||||||
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Friend/Roommate told me about this site. His account is Magicite. He's no longer into RP but I am, so here I am. I'm sure I messed up on a few things so bare with me please /hug. I used his RPC Sky d'Thane wyvern sense as the base for my spatial sense. I wager it'll need the most work. Thank you for having me. Edited by ComicBookMan, Jan 8 2016, 07:34 PM.
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| 梟 Inara Serra | Jan 9 2016, 12:17 AM Post #3 | ||||||||||||||||
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Hi and welcome to FTG. From the top. Physical description Could use a bit more. Not a ton but you're at least one line shy of actually meeting the minimum requirement. Magic Spacial magic is always Tier 1 This magic description is waaay too short. Needs elaboration. Work on that. Include things like what you'd like it to do in the first place, what you'd like to see it doing at later ranks. High Speed -You're nor support specialist. You're general at best. Spatial Sense - There's no viable reason for a spatial mage to have heightened passive senses, especially not at rank one. -Give it duration and cool down for now, (3,2 respectively) -At much higher ranks passive might be possible. |
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| ComicBookMan | Jan 9 2016, 01:28 AM Post #4 | ||||||||||||||||
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Thank you very much. I'm glad to be here.
Added a little more (Tattoo and earnings) and noted them in the accessory/extra section.
Made it Tier 1
Expanded and reworded it.
If I understood you right in the PM i didn't have it listed as a Support Specialist Magic. I listed it under the Magic Type. Also clarified in the magic description as to having only one offensive spell later.
Expanded on what Spatial Awareness is so it's more clear for later ranks and added a duration/cool down to the rank 1 ability for now. |
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| LunarCataphract | Jan 9 2016, 01:08 PM Post #5 | ||||||||||||||||
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Going from the bottom "He has a good sense of smell and can identify people/creatures and track them by by their scent." that will need a range. You can't track people to an infinite distance. " Echolocation (sonar imaging)" Again range. Echo location to an unlimited distance is a bit too potent even for this rank. Okay I need some clarification for this spell: "High Speed - (1)" Do you actually alter a specific area of space, aka a location in the physical realm, that increases the speed of those in it? Sort of like a "buff field" centered on the ground which affect anybody in it? If so this technique will need a range and a size for the field. |
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| ComicBookMan | Jan 9 2016, 01:18 PM Post #6 | ||||||||||||||||
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What range would be acceptable here?
What range would be acceptable here?
Just alter myself in space at the moment. Thank you for the comments btw. I'm excited to get him approved. I do have one more question. I had a thought last night of having a spell that creates a portable hole in space of sorts that allows me to pull mundane items out of it, such as a tea set but didn't know if that infringed on ExEquip to much or not. |
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| LunarCataphract | Jan 9 2016, 03:04 PM Post #7 | ||||||||||||||||
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While that is something which would be associated with exquip magic...I'm personally more than fine with letting you have that. Provided it is items only. Not people. http://s1.zetaboards.com/Fairy_Tail_Guild/single/?p=666365&t=4812080 Range guide. I am aware it was originally for offensive techs but alas it is the only thing we really have. And lastly as that speed buff thing can only affect himself...add that into the tech write up. Edited by LunarCataphract, Jan 9 2016, 03:05 PM.
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| ComicBookMan | Jan 9 2016, 06:18 PM Post #8 | ||||||||||||||||
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Added a blurb about the portable space hole creation. Added area ranges. Clarified it's self only. |
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| LunarCataphract | Jan 9 2016, 08:59 PM Post #9 | ||||||||||||||||
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It's dangerous to go alone! Take this! 1/2 |
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| 栄 Snow | Jan 12 2016, 06:49 AM Post #10 | ||||||||||||||||
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Knight's Sword - This needs an actual description, what does it look like? We don't know that, we just have measurements. You'll need to keep those measurements though, you just need to actually describe the sword. Spatial Awareness - For your Support Specialist Rank Progression, please place them in a spoiler, thank you. |
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