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| [Accepted] Calcifer Jones; The Wolf Of Icendar | |
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| Topic Started: Dec 19 2015, 06:48 AM (797 Views) | |
| GlitchCode | Jan 13 2016, 08:06 AM Post #11 |
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Updated, and if not approved, please move to WIP after the reply. Also the Hellfire magic has been changed so while it can basically be called a combination magic, and in the transformation Cypher undergoes in the technique Rhoi Efi, it is essentially flames of darkness, not just flames and darkness. Thank you Ina and Lunar for the help |
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| LunarCataphract | Jan 13 2016, 10:25 AM Post #12 |
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Okay again you still don't have a take over technique. TO magic MUST have a TO technique. http://s1.zetaboards.com/Fairy_Tail_Guild/single/?p=469816&t=4024561 < all the information upon TO magic. |
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| 梟 Inara Serra | Jan 13 2016, 04:26 PM Post #13 |
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Honesty without tact is cruelty.
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Moving to wip as requested. |
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| GlitchCode | Jan 14 2016, 01:53 AM Post #14 |
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Hopefully, the final Edit. lol Thanks for the critiques although I hope this is the last update |
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| LunarCataphract | Jan 14 2016, 09:59 AM Post #15 |
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Are you sure you don't want him to have any additional techniques in TO form? |
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| 梟 Inara Serra | Jan 15 2016, 01:59 AM Post #16 |
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Much better. The teleport tech though... You need a speed cap. Firstly. Secondly, if this is meant to be a short range teleport your range is 2m (max by increase of CD which you have done). If its long range (out of combat only) its meant to be 5km. Also, and probably the bigger issue. Your magic description doesn't currently facilitate shadow teleport. Hellfire=/= shadows and teleportation. Might wanna fix that. (This Is precisely why we like expanded magic descriptions.) Edited by Inara Serra, Jan 15 2016, 02:01 AM.
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| GlitchCode | Jan 15 2016, 03:37 AM Post #17 |
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Hellfire magic is technically darkness magic which can create flames of darkness among other uses. I will update the Technique and the Magic description I will update shortly |
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| GlitchCode | Jan 17 2016, 07:20 AM Post #18 |
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Editted the magic, and Technique. Just to clarify, "Hellfire" magic is just a name. It is not actual fire magic, just creates flames made of darkness. |
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| LunarCataphract | Jan 17 2016, 10:11 AM Post #19 |
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Move Rhofi Efi to the TO technique's general appearance spoiler ad you'll get a 1/2 |
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| 栄 AuraLex | Jan 17 2016, 10:58 PM Post #20 |
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Neidio Cysgod -The range should be 5km, not 10m -You can't travel inter-dimensionally since that's not within your Magic. -Long range teleportation techs don't conserve momentum -It can't change orientation -A weight limit of 400lb is too much for Rank 1. Calcifer can bring 2 people, and each person (including Calcifer) can carry up to 20kg each. -The duration should be instant. |
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