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[Accepted] Dante Gato
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Topic Started: Aug 19 2015, 02:12 AM (890 Views)
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栄 THE Cat
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Aug 19 2015, 02:12 AM
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Account Name: 栄 THE Cat
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Height: 6'0''
Weight: 155Ibs
Class: B
Affiliation : Neutral Light
Guild : Raven Tail
Font Color: 9300C4, Colored text here |
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Physical Description: Dante is six feet tall, muscular, and fairly light skinned. He is 'well cut', which means that his muscles are well defined around his body. However, the muscles lack the 'bulge' that often comes with heavy workouts. This means that Dante is active enough to get muscles, but not into working out for long periods of time to get BIG muscles. Despite that he does have an eight pack and currently, no tattoos other then his guild mark. His body habitus can be called hyposthenic, meaning he doesn't have any qualities of a wide man like sthenic people, nor is he wide like hypersthenic people.
His hair is a slightly dirty blonde with hairs here and there that are completely blonde. His eyes are a nice shade of light blue, and his skin is, if 1 were white as hell and 10 being black as hell, is about a 3, with 5 being slightly tanned and 4 being the lightest caramel one could have as a skin tone. Other then that his nails are always clean, despite him going on adventures lots, because he cleans them regularly. His hair is the same. When wet his hair becomes flat and capable to be combed and straightened into a pony-tail, he never does this though because it sends the wrong signals of his personality (wild hair kinda describes him perfectly). He also occasionally dies his hair black, doesn't happen often though (usually when he goes to expensive looking areas).
| Clothing: Dante's clothing can be described as odd. He wears expensive jackets, expensive coats, and super hero shirts interchangeably throughout his week. He rarely wears suits, unless he's invited to a very expensive occasion, but can wear them with class. His favorite color is very obvious in the clothes he wears, they usually have blue somewhere on them. Dante's jackets are usually worn with a long sleeved shirt riht over them or just the jackets. Dante only wears normal t-shirts (blue) in the hot summer days or when he knows he'll need to feel a breeze to survive the day. His shirts, even as jackets, can have superhero symbols on the front.
His pants can be either jeans, shorts, dress pants, or those short pants with lots of pockets that some hikers wear because of convenience reasons. The pants, unlike the shirts, can be a variety of colors mostly stemming around cream colored or black. Jeans are no exception, since he usually wears black jeans or shorts when it's a hot day. On cold days he wears baggy black pants with an extra pair of pants underneath, usually shorts. Jeans sometimes have rips on them if it's on a hot day, but they're usually around the knee area. He tries to cover up the thighs, only so much ripping should be allowed.
Dante only wears certain types of shoes. Only the most expensive brands of sneakers ever get the luxury of covering his feet. Nordans are the more popular when he's about to play a sport, Mike's are the ones he wears to missions in cities, and combat boots of the most expensive variety sometimes accompany him in jungles and exploration missions (he usually wears Mike sandles when in a hot terrain and boots when it's cold as hell). The colors of the footwear is dependent on the color of his shirt, pants, and extc. The reason for the large quantity of shoes is because, well, he's rich, and he likes shoes. He has more shoes then people in his current hotel building. |
Accessories:Star-shaped earrings, smiley face earrings, black lined earrings, bracelets with super hero signs on them, and chains with super hero signs on them. A lot of hair ornaments including solid lines, faces, fruits, and even flowers when he wants to test his luck. |
Extra: Guild mark tattoo located on the bottom tip of the LLQ of the abdomen. |
Gallery Summer Batman Black Sweater Superman Pink Jacket City Clothes
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Dante is a clean and energetic individual that always smiles. He enjoys the outdoors, partying, 'going out', relaxing outside of his home, and even looking up at the sky, but showers and takes care of himself right afterwards. It's because he's so energetic that he hates to spend an entire day inside the house; the only exception to this is if he found an entertaining game to play OR if there was a very interesting movie on the screen. He can only watch the same movie once every year or so or he gets incredibly bored with the plot, since it feels like he JUST watched the movie not that long ago. Perhaps the oddest thing about him is his failure at dates; he seems almost gifted at doing the worst possible things that make girls run away from him.
Dante behaves like a teenager in some situations, such as calling someone a nerd because of the activities they are doing at that moment, dragging friends to places they don't want to go to (He can be VERY bossy when he puts his mind into something), and saying things that are on his mind without thinking about the conseuences. He also says the word 'funsies', among other slangs that only a hand full of people from these times know. He's also been known to 'get on people's nerves' to get reactions from them. It's not uncommon for him to throw giant rocks through a window if the person doesn't wake up after the first or second pebble thrown. He usually does these things with a smirk on his face. He also has an ego problem, or one that he outwardly shows to others to get reactions (he also actually has an ego problem). He believes that everything he says is gold, for example, and should be taken into consideration. Being painfully honest also makes him an unintentional 'douche'.
Dante's main philosophy is freedom. He believes that living like you want to is the best way to live. It's because of this that he has zero shame on things that he chose to do but others think is 'wrong'; such as, but not limited to, standing on top of poles to look at the sky, waiting in line for several hours because his favorite comic book hero is coming out, or even walking around in boxers (or naked). It goes without question that when in the house, if he is alone, he walks around without anything on. You may also find him going into areas that he is not supposed to go to because, well, he can.
When angry Dante does not get evil, like some characters, he gets mature. His voice becomes harsher, and he does everything in his power to try and make the person against him angry or on the verge of crying. Feeling no shame also means not caring about what you say to people; if his goal is to make that person cry he'll smile slightly when it happens. Debate wise, he'll lie without blinking an eye just to make the opponent think what he wants them to think. When angry and no enemy or opponent he'll behave maturely and handle the situation responsibly; such as lending a friend money if they need it.
Dante is rich but doesn't show it as outwardly as others would. He buys expensive brand shoes, and clothes, but they're so modern and odd compared to some towns of Fiore that he barely even looks like a middle-class citizen. He only really shows his money when there is an expensive item that he loves, such as a mint condition comic book with only a few copies in the world. He will buy it, even if it's an absurd price and with a smile on his face.
As a hero Dante tries to behave differently, but ultimately reverts back to being his honest self. When showing up to protect civilians from evil people he introduces himself, then he outwardly refers to them as 'useless', 'unneeded', and even 'dead weight'. He says this not to get bad reactions from the crowd but to try to be as heroic as possible by pointing out their flaws.. not that it's ever taken that way. He tries to be like the heroes in the books, but ends up showing his true colors mid speech. Being self centered also means that if he ends up failing a mission, like say stopping a flood but it ends up happening anyways and flooding a small town, he'll immediately think about the effects of running water and have to pee. He will pee, then come back, and depending on the damage he might save the people then fly away in the direction of the sun, despite it probably not being the way home. Also, he poses.
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"Sit down, person, I'll tell you things."
"It all started when I was.. born(?). My dad was a fortune teller that liked the zodiacs, he asked them for answers on shit, and my mom was just a normal garden variety rich ass noble. Both of them made money, and they were both gone for about 90% of the day and slept in the house 5% of the time. Maids became my friends, until I was like.. five, then the maids were fired cuz I insisted I was old enough to take care of myself. I was so right on that, because I learned how to climb tables to get canned foods and stuff. Food was rekt. That was also around the time I met my brother from another mother, the skittles to my skittle and starburst smoothie, the almonds to my chocolate, the brohan from the brohanian empire, Hashim. I don't have a nickname for him yet, considering one as we speak. I saw him playing with a batarang and was like 'I should give him my batman toy, he's too good with that thing to not get something', so I gave him my batman action figure, and we hit it off as friends. He even fixed my toys when I broke them, which was lots."
"High school life was F*ing amazing. My dad decided to do something productive and put me inside Vincent Academy, with his money he was able to secure a spot for me. I had magic in my blood from my father's side, and thanks to my bellow C average score in middle school they let me in! (my dad also gave them a donation of sorts, but they OBVIOUSLY saw the potential in me). In my high-school years, right after school, I practiced fighting every day with my home-school teachers, and they taught me how to kick ass with AND without swords. I was so rich, my allowance could make most working class men wheep too. It was gorgeous! Anyways, I was one of those people that talked to everyone in high-school. It helped that I had parties like every other day in my house, I'm probably the reason most of the students in the school were like... C average. My parties ended, usually, anywhere from 12-4am. School starts at 7am. Not that I cared much. I usually slept in class OR skipped class. The beach was a good place to go too, or the arcade. Lots of places were fun. Oh right, Hashim, my bud, and I went to the same highschool and everything. I was glad when I found out, he's been around to all my other schools so continuing to have him would have been epic! And he did. He got much better at inventing things in high school too, it was obvious that he was destined to be a great mechanic for things. Not that his grades showed for it. Other people also didn't like him, I never knew why. When they got hostile towards him outside of school is when he silenced them. They got back to school, 2 weeks later, in crutches; they got T-rekt. Between his laid back attitude with the guys, and my parties, we ruled the school. Up until graduation.. oh, and when the cops came in at my house cuz of 'disturbances' or some shit. Ironically during these four years I also learned about my devil magic, but decided not to tell anyone. All I could really do was talk to smodai anyways, who cared. If anything it'd leave an opening for people with cooler magic to show off; I can't let that happen."
"Then I graduated. My dad was like 'Son, you're old enough to do things without me being FORCED to be around. Cuz that's annoying you know. SO I'll help you unlock the gateway to hell and inherit a friend to follow you around for all eternity, like me. You can thank me la-, actually, I got better shit to do. Thank me now, peasant.' After I thanked my father I quickly learned to transform into the demon/devil Asmodai. It was then that I learned that this Take Over type turns the user into the mind of the creature, controlling its actions like a puppet but retaining its personality. I also learned that Asmodai was cool as fuck. Good times. My father then gave me a heart warming moment, where he told me he loved me even though I was a complete failure as a son, I punched him in the D.. for not showing up to my graduation. Then I hugged him for saying lame things."
"Anyways, after graduating I learned that I had magic too, go figure. I learned to throw a black orb at people that made things die sometimes, create objects with said energy, and much more. It was an awesome two years. I still kept in touch with Hashim. Didn't tell him about my magic though, didn't think it'd be a topic we could really talk about until I'm pro enough to rub it on his face. Hopefully future good times. Anyways, that about sums it up. Sorry my parents didn't die or anything, but unlike most super heroes, MINE ARE JUST NEVER AROUND! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *cries a little*"
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Aug 19 2015, 02:12 AM
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| D- Rank Name: Hero Mask Class: D Description: Dante's mask, he wears is when he goes out to do hero stuff. It's essentially a blue masquerade mask with the edges resembling wings on the sides of it, but they're more stuck tot he skin then anything else, and a cosmetic design, so more then anything the mask is just a D class piece of armor.. and an awesome accessory. Effect/Function: N/A
Name: Hero Suit Class: D Description: Dante's suit. It's a white suit made of a fancy type of silk that is normally found in the more expensive suits and only for the most special of occassions; however Dante thought it was comfortable and ordered one just like this. It includes a white jacket that does not reach the waist in length, a pair of shoes that are black, and some white comfortable and semi-baggy pants that look fancy. The pants are plain, but the white slim jacket has the design of a blue falcon flying down. Effect/Function: N/A
Name: Hero Scarf Class: D Description: Every horrible hero needs a scarf, and this one is no exception. The scarf looks ordinary, and it is. It's just a plain, comfortable, needlessly long scarf that is barely short enough to not interfere with the one walking (it reaches the back of the knee in length). On the edge of the scarf is the same falcon symbol as the back of the Hero Suit. Effect/Function: N/A
A- Rank Name: HexClass: A Description: A long black sword with its handle being ten inches long and the blade, with everything, is about 5 feet total (about 1.5m). The blade is roughly 2 inches wide and less then a centimeter thick. The blade is made out of carbon steel and the handle is made out of very hard wood, with a black string wrapped around a white handle. The part that separates the handle from the blade has a flat surface vertical to the blade on all sides. This portion is perfectly round and silver. The sheath of this weapon has a long dragon around it like vines surrounding an old house poll. This gives it an almost tranquil look with a black background. Picture Effect/Function: Platform - 7 Type: Support Range: 4 meters Effect: Creates a 'ground' for the user to walk, stand, or jump off. The ground looks like a blue sea-through like glass but it serves no purpose for defense or offense. The ground created is about a meter in diameter, and can be created in any which way 4 meters around the user; that means it can be bellow him, over him, or on his left, right, extc. Opponents that fall towards the shield fall right through it as if it weren't there, any attempt by someone else but the user to touch it will result in the same. Spells that are equal or lower rank cannot break or harm it, and it cannot be used to break or harm any other spells or people. The only 'solidity' it has is to the user touching it. Essentially, it's only used as a platform when flight isn't an option. The spell can be used 3 times in 5 posts, with the countdown beginning after the user uses it the first time, and it only lasts one post each. The cool-down, after using the last spell or after the 5 posts are up and the user hasn't used it three times, is 2 posts. Name: HaxClass: A Description: A long black sword with its handle being ten inches long and the blade, with everything, is about 5 feet total (about 1.5m). The blade is roughly 2 inches wide and less then a centimeter thick. The blade is made out of carbon steel and the handle is made out of very hard black wood, with a tiny winged dragon symbol on the middle of both sides of the handle. The part that separates the handle from the blade has a flat surface vertical to the blade on all sides. This portion is perfectly round and black. The sheath of this weapon is completely black, and a fancy type of polished black wood. Picture Effect/Function: Healing Pulse - 7 Type: Support Range: 25 meters Effect: Sends a small blue sphere bout half a meter in diameter towards one person, healing 1 severe injury on the target, 3 serious injuries, 5 moderate injuries, extc. The healing done takes 2 posts for it to fully take effect, after the item is used it goes on a 3 post cool down. |
Stats - 385 Strength: 30 Accuracy: 55 Stamina: 50 Speed: 70 Magic: 90 (180)
Stat Points Earned: 0/340 Arc Points Earned: 0/7 Jewels Earned: 34,674,000 /94,774,000
Sources
Sources 275sp, 73,304,000 JewelsHex: 21,000,000Hax: 20,500,000November Event: 10sp, 5,000,000J Questionaire 2015!: 11sp, 2,200,000J (3,300,000J) So you want to be a rockstar: 4sp, 900,000J (1,350,000J) A new hero emerges: 4sp, 800,000J (1,200,000J) Monster Mash: 2sp, 380,000J (570,000J) Halloween Party: 7sp, 1,260,000J (1,890,000J) [mission][1/2 for guild spell]Go Home!: 9sp, 1,800,000J (2,700,000J) [mission][1/2 for guild spell] These muscles have been passed down the Armstrong line for generations!: 9sp, 1,840,000J (2,760,000J) [mission][1/2 for guild spell]Belladonna Happy Family Club: 9sp, 1,800,000J (2,700,000J)
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Great with a Katana: Unlike most people Dante was taught how to handle a katana on each hand; he's a dual wielder, and a really good one. Without a shield he focuses more on dodging, cutting, and making people cry from the pain. He's learned how to calculate the sword's place of impact if he throws in the air (he knows where it will land after he throws it or makes some calculations after seeing it fall), impale bodies in area where they'll more then likely die, and knows how to spin with the swords. Really cool stuff.
A Superhero's Knowledge: One of the few classes he even showed a remote interest in had strategies inside of it, or rather the ones used in the past by generals and whatnot. This is mostly because superheroes come up with cool stuff and ideas to fight back all the time. When they're outnumbered, or in a disadvantage, it is usually their brains that win the battle. The other class he was interested in had medical stuff; he paid close attention to the location of certain organs, what they did, and even learned which organs were important and did what. Without him knowing it paying close attention to that gave him as much knowledge on the body as an assistant surgeon. It helped that he took the class 4 years in a row, and is the only class where he got an A. Through Vincent Academy he even cut open dead bodies and experienced first hand how a body looks like, and learned how each of them died. Heroes like Superman knew fractures when they saw it, and knew brain tumors, clots, ripped muscles, extc. It's important to know these things.
Martial Arts: Without his katana he can still fight, and well. He can flip people, kick people, and use his fist for the occasional kung fu punch to the face while jumping (the superman punch). He enjoys making people 'tap-out', and does not care about breaking bones when he is forced to use this fighting style. His kicks are stronger then his punches though, oddly enough. His punches are above average in the martial arts world, but his kicks and grappling are what really make him stand out above the others when fighting (his skills are obviously limited by his stats, just thought I'd add this in here).
Undying calmness: Whether on the battle field or on a REALLY awkward date with an ex Dante is always calm. He can looking at the barrel of a gun and still retain his smile, even if he knows he'd probably die; he'll be anxious, angry, and maybe scared but his calmness will be above all of those emotions. |
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"You look like someone that wants to get pwn'd, I'll go right ahead and do my good deed for the day."
Magic Name: Party Devil's Soul Magic Type: Take-over Tier of Magic: 1 Rank: 10 Magic Description: This magic focuses on the user controlling the non-elemental energy from the dimension Asmodai comes from. Asmodai's world is what he calls 'Dark', where flames don't exist but there is plenty of heat in the shade. The shade is actually a powerful form of non-elemental energy that can harden or liquefy depending on what the user wants it to do. Only a handful of demons have been able to control it, according to Asmodai, and he is one of them. Even in its solidified form the energy can 'destroy' objects and people, sometimes making entire people disperse when killed. Once someone learns this magic they are referred to as 'Devils'. The take-over portion of this magic has the devil previously mentioned as the take-over form, but the user only influences the actions of the devil; the personality remains intact.
Techniques: 67/67 TP Total (36 earned+ 31 bought)
Devil of the Dark: Asmodai - 10 Type: Take-Over Range: Personal Effect:
Asmodai "There are thousands of demons and devils in this world, but I am the ONLY one that knows how to PAAARRTAAYY!!" General Appearance: Dante turns into a Devil of the Dark named Asmodai. Dante grows two large horns (see equipment description) and a two meter long tail that's fifty centimeters thick that's there for cosmetic purposes. His nails turn into sharp black claws (see equipment description), and his teeth turn to fangs. The skin turns redish pinkish and his face creates a purple robin-esque mask tattoo that covers his nose and up his forehead. His clothes turn into a yellow jacket with several metal accessories around his body including a ring on each finger, a bracelet, and a chain necklace around his neck. He also has ankle guards for kicking purposes (see equipment description). He loves wearing sandals. Duration: 7 posts, Cooldown: 2 posts. Stat Changes Rank 1: +3 strength, +3 accuracy, +3 speed, +3 stamina Rank 2: +6 strength, +6 accuracy, +6 speed, +6 stamina Rank 3: +9 strength, +9 accuracy, +9 speed, +9 stamina Rank 4: +12 strength, +12 accuracy, +12 speed, +12 stamina Rank 5: +15 strength, +15 accuracy, +15 speed, +15 stamina Rank 6: +18 strength, +18 accuracy, +18 speed, +18 stamina Rank 7: +21 strength, +21 accuracy, +21 speed, +21 stamina Rank 8: +24 strength, +24 accuracy, +24 speed, +24 stamina Rank 9: +27 strength, +27 accuracy, +27 speed, +27 stamina Rank 10: +30 strength, +30 accuracy, +30 speed, +30 stamina
Natural Weaponry Name: Demon Claws Class: S Description: Asmodai has claws 7.5 cm long, and 2.5 cm thick on the end of his limbs. These claws have a slight hook in the end so they can grab things while leaving cuts to the thing they are grabbing. Effect/Function: N/A
Name: Ankle Guards Class: A Description: Asmodai has horns metallic ankle guards that stretch all the way up to the middle of his shin. The guard is thick, but doesn't hinder movement do to its convenient location. The metal is white-ish and bright in the sun. Effect/Function: N/A
Name: Horns Class: B Description: Asmodai has horns 35 cm long, and 4 cm thick on the sides of his head. These horns have a slight hook in the middle so they curve upwards. Effect/Function: N/A
Abilities Magic Name: Party Devil Magic Type: Energy Manipulation Tier of Magic: 1 Rank: 10 Magic Description: This magic focuses on the user controlling the non-elemental energy of the dimension Asmodai comes from. Asmodai's world is what he calls 'Dark', where flames don't exist but there is plenty of heat in the dark. The dark is actually a powerful form of energy that can harden or liquefy depending on what the user wants it to do. Only a handful of demons have been able to control it, according to Asmodai, and he is one of them. Even in its solidified or watery form the energy can 'destroy' objects and people, sometimes making entire people disperse when killed.
Absolute Devil Eater - 10 Type: Offensive Range: 100m Effect: Asmodai creates one sphere on his palm made up of the same black energy of his world, roughly two meters in diameter, and sends it flying towards one opponent. The sphere is pitch black and capable of doing rank ten damage to the average individual hit. Duration: Instantaneous/ Cooldown: 1 post.
Devil Wave - 10 Type: Offensive/ AOE Range: 50m radius Effect: Asmodai creates a wave made out of a black liquid capable of doing catastrophic damage to everyone hit. The wave goes outward 50 meters killing the average person (stamina of 10 or less) instantly while it crosses their bodies; this also causes those bodies killed to disappear (they turn to dust). Duration: Instantaneous/ Cooldown: 2 posts
Dark Staff - 10 Type: Offensive Range: 1m/10m Effect:The user creates a staff on one of their hands made out of the energy from Asmodai's world. This staff can be swung once per turn with it causing catastrophic damage to the average person, but disappears after three uses. A rank S weapon can clash with it but the spell can still be used (so it stops it as if it were another weapon). If a rank 10 spell clashes with the staff then it disappears completely and goes into cool-down. If the staff is not swung three times within five posts then it disappears. The staff is originally 1 meter long and 15 cm thick, but can grow to be 10 meters long while it's attempting to be swung or trying to pierce someone. People killed by this technique turn to dust and scatter in the wind as if they weren't there. Duration: 5 posts, CD: 4 posts.
Dark Swords - 10 Type: Supportive Range: Self Effect:The user create two 1.5 meter long black katana swords on both his left and right hand. The swords aren't magical in the sense that they do not do catastrophic damage upon a hit, instead they are the typical S class weapons in both durability and sharpness. They can be compared to being harder then diamonds (essentially rank S swords). Duration: 6 posts, CD: 2 posts
Dark Falcons - 10 Type: Offensive/ AOE Range: 50m (Radius) Effect:The user creates 'black birds' around him made out of his non-elemental energy and has them expand outwards destroying everything that can't resist catastrophic damage (such as the average person and the average homes). Anyone killed by these birds has their bodies turn to dust almost instantly. Duration: Instantaneous, Cool-down: 2 posts.
Dark Shield - 10 Type: Defensive Range: Self Effect: The user creates a sort of shield that is 1 meter in diameter from the ground and wears it like one would a normal shield; one can walk and run with this shield. The shield can stop one rank 10 attack, three rank 9 attacks, five rank 8 attacks, seven rank 7 attacks, extc. It can block many very strong strikes or a few overwhelming strikes before being exhausted. Duration: 5 posts; Cool-down: 2 post.
Dark Flight - 8 Type: Supportive/ Flight Range: Self Effect: The user creates two black wings on his back that stretch out three meters each and flies into the air. The wings are fluff. The user flies 250 meters high at this rank, and the user gains 20 in speed during the duration of this technique. Dante can also carry up to 100kg while flying. Duration: 5 posts, Cool-down: 2 posts.
FALCON PAWNCH! - 9 Type: Offensive (Barrier Breaking) Range: Personal Effect: The user concentrates some of his black magic around his fist and swings once at the nearest enemy while shouting 'FALCON PAWNCH!' simultaneously causing devastating damage to a building and/or to the average individual hit. Upon swinging a black bird aura appears around his fist momentarily, for about a second (cosmetic). This pawnch can penetrate weaker magic barriers without any damage reduction, and can penetrate equal rank barriers for the cost of -3 to the rank damage done to the person and one rank higher barriers at -5 to rank damage. Duration: Instantaneous, Cool-down: 2 posts.
Guild Spells
Tracking Mark - 2 Type: Utility Range: 10 m. Effect: The next physical contact the user performs inflicts a mark upon a target. For the next 3 posts, as long as the target remains in range, the user becomes fully aware of the target's whereabouts, and is capable of seeing from the target's point of view. If the target stays out of range for more than one post the mark ends prematurely.
Parlor Trick - 7 Type: Utility Range: 35 m. Effect: The user conjures a full 30 illusionary copies of him/herself within range. The copies are under control of the user and indistinguishable from the user save through usage of equal-rank magic or higher accuracy than the user (cap at 60 at this rank), but cannot deal damage and can be destroyed by physical/magical assaults of any rank. These copies last a maximum of 8 posts or until destroyed by external force or user whim. |
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栄 THE Cat
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Sep 16 2015, 12:26 AM
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Buying 29 TP and the A class weapons on the sheet. The total jewels spent is bellow
15,950,000J on TP (29 of them) + 21,000,000 Jewels + 20,500,000= 57,450,000J used = 15,854,000J remaining. I was told to buy TP on the highest tier (2) so I bought 29 TP with that.
Also, ready to be looked at.
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Sep 16 2015, 12:05 PM
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Am I the only one who gets a vibe of fabulous gayness off this guy? :P Anyway all serious business talk now!
"Venom Sting - 10"
From the rules rank ten all stat debuffs reduce the SP amount by 20 not 40.
Other than that everything seems alright.
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栄 THE Cat
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Sep 16 2015, 09:21 PM
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- The debuff I asked about. I just put all of the 'upgrades' that can go with a debuff technique into one, so instead of it being 20 debuff it's 40, increased duration by 1, and decreased cool-down by 1.
Edited by THE Cat, Sep 16 2015, 09:21 PM.
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Sep 17 2015, 01:11 AM
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・。゜. ヘ(゜Д、゜)ノ
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If you are using the technique option to increase the debuff's amount, it's not giving '20 more debuff for each stat'. It's, '20 more debuff total'. So, at the most, you would be debuffing 25 points for each stat (that's 20 points more as stated, split at 5 points per stat).
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Sep 17 2015, 01:24 AM
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Well then, I edited it to become 25.
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Sep 17 2015, 02:03 AM
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Hoennese and proud!
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You need to actually state your 0/275 SP because right now it just looks like a 0 meaning none earned at all.
Now, your TP amount - you had 31 purchased from your harvest, not 40! So lower that to 31 purchased.
None of your TO forms have magic descriptions, fix that.
Now, your techniques:
- Venom Sting - Vague about method - how long does the debuff last on the body of you before it hits someone without being used? Can you coat a limb and move it around indeterminately until someone is hit?
- Venom Shot - Sounds almost like a penetrative technique, also melting people into blood is kind of an acid thing, not venom so that shouldn't be a thing. Also cooldown is absolutely 2 posts.
- Infernal Avatar - What. Tempted to auto deny...
OK, benefit of the doubt for the moment, one what is this pre-determined pattern? How many times can it move around? Does it follow anyone? How fast does it move? Cooldown is gonna be at least 3 posts too.
- Winds of Damnation - Is this a 100m radius or diameter? Because either way no. Or is it an orb you throw? Also the whole "choosing who can/cannot be hurt" thing is kind of out.
- Shockwave Punch - How fast does it move? Is it visible? Cooldown up to 2.
- Horns of the Bull - Can this be held without being used? Cooldown up to 2.
- Virgo's Aura - Is the healing instantaneous or does it require the 2 full posts to be channeled to take effect? What happens if she's damaged during the channel?
- Wind Shuriken - That tracking system is abhorrently vague. Again, pre-determined route how? How many times does it move? Can it avoid things? Does it turn and if so how many times? Is it an explosion radius or diameter?
That's just to start.
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栄 THE Cat
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Oct 7 2015, 05:30 AM
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SSS+ Class Pet.
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Annd Edited, I changed the magic to something less complicated and boring.
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栄 Snow
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Oct 7 2015, 03:22 PM
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Part of me regrets getting you into BuddyFight now ...
Absolute Devil Eater - What is 'rank 9 damage'? Also are you saying it's this amount damage per sphere or in total? Each sphere would do reduced damage to a grand total of Rank 10. So 'rank 9' damage is still possibly a bit much if you hit 5 individual people.
Devil Wave - Little bit skeptical on this, might just be the wording though.
Dark Swords - 7 post duration may be pushing it, considering it's for two swords. I'd say a 6 post duration at most though see what others say.
You also have a [/center] tag at the very bottom after Dark Flight.
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