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[Accepted] Kaizo's new generation; FTG's Wolf
Topic Started: Feb 11 2015, 07:29 AM (1,666 Views)
Inara Serra
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Honesty without tact is cruelty.

Spoiler your Nocode (THE AREA OF YOUR APP THAT SAYS STAFF ONLY)

You have (2) two TP to spend within TO. You've spent 3.
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LunarCataphract
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In addition to what Owly has pointed out I wish to mention that your techniques can't have a "passive" cool down. You can have "passive" techs that are always active but something like your "demon fox fire" can't have a passive cool down; in fact I don't think it would even work as a passive tech in its current form.

Still on the subject of passive techs is your "Nine tail shield." This technique could be a passive but not in its current form. The way you have it worded implies it is an active technique. Now if you did want it to be a passive technique it..would need to be a higher rank as well as have a cool down. A passive shield technique would need a cool down period to reflect how long it takes to "recharge."

Also for me the image at the bottom of your history doesn't display.
Edited by LunarCataphract, Mar 4 2015, 12:39 PM.
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Resolved... Character app has been updated.
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Kaizo I assume yo want your techniques to be passives correct? If yes you need to reword them as currently they are written like active techniques.

An active technique is only active for a limited period of time which both of your techniques are as you've given them a one post duration. If you wanted your shield to be a passive shield tech, which I'm not even sure would be possible at this rank without a longer than average cool down, then you'd need to word it like this:

"Kaizo is always surrounded by a shield which protects him from damage. After blocking one superficial wound it deactivates and has a two post cool down before it can be reactivates"

On that note we don't call attacks by names such as "rank one" so change "rank one attacks" to "superficial wound"

Now for your "Demon Fox Fire" technique my question of "do you want it to be a passive or not?" comes up again.

With the way it has been written currently it is an active technique not a passive technique and I doubt you can have the ability to passively shoot fireballs at people without a cool down especially at rank one. If you did want to make "Demon Fox Fire" a passive then I would suggest giving it a secondary effect. This secondary effect would need to be something that is constantly active and relates to your ability to launch fireballs; maybe increases resistance to heat? Do remember at this rank it will be incredibly weak. Basically in its current form Demon Fox Fire is an active spell. You could change the effect to a passive one or give it a secondary passive effect.
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Sorry for the intrusion, but I have a few things that I would like to point out.

First and more importantly, Kaizo only has one tech (the TO) but the magic TP is listed as 2/2. Dunno if you plan to add another tech after the TO, but that needs to be fixed as it is. Either change it to 1/2, add another tech, or simply rank up the TO tech to 2.

About the techs of the TO:
- the way I see it, you want to have those always active, then going on cooldown when used. In this case, I would advice you to move away from passive like techs, as there is no point to it and will just make it harder to get approved.

-- for first tech, I suggest you add a duration for how long Kaizo can keep the flame up on his hand (cause that is what you seem to want to do with it considering the cooking and the lighting references), but in that case, bare in mind that max duration would be 5 posts with a 2 post cooldown after that duration was up and the flame dissipated, or it was thrown for damage. As it is, all I see is a tech that you can thrown infinite number of times in a single post (and if that is your idea, you should make this a multiple projectile tech, just bare in mind the damage you can inflict is superficial in total, not per projectile). And thrust me, 5 post duration is more than long enough for what you seem to want to do (its a full page on a 2 man thread), unless you want to make a full thread about exploring a dark cave and nothing else, in which case just use a torch, no one will think less of your char for that.

-- the shield tech feels like you wanted to do the same as above, have a shield that is always active and has a low cooldown. But that won't work, even less with the current word 'passive' on it. I suggest you read this thread and see how a basic shield works, as that is the bare minimum for approval.

- bare in mind that passives are very hard techs to approve, and usually they are either non combat oriented passives (like cosmetic effects, enhanced hearing, etc), or give just a very small edge in battle. The most common 'combat' usable passives are buffs, and those are reduced en effect by 4 ranks, meaning a rank 4 passive buffs is only as strong as a rank 1 normal buff, with the only difference that it lasts forever. Take that into consideration when you want to make passive, as it will cost you a fair amount of rank power.

As an example, going back to the shield. A passive shield, as in always active and no cooldown, would only protect you against rank 6 offensive techs at rank 10. Yes it would make you op against low sp characters, but it would be useless against anyone of your level. That said, it would still not get approved as rofl stomping new characters is not a thing here :P
Edited by LibertyGear, Mar 4 2015, 03:18 PM.
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Changed it...
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LunarCataphract
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Reduce the duration of demon fox fire to two posts. A five post duration on a rank one tech is far too long.

Nine Tail Shield: We don't measure attacks in "rank one rank two" we measure them in the amount of damage they deal. Basically change where it says "rank one attack" to "superficial damage."
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Changed and accounted for.
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You've still not changed the amount of damage your shield protects against. It still says "Rank one damage" where it should say "superficial damage"
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LibertyGear
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You asked for this on the cbox, so blame yourself :P

You still haven't fixed the technique amount. Again, either add a tech outside the TO, increase the TO rank, or change it to (1)/2... also why do you have the TP number as a pic? Do you even realize how much work you are giving yourself in the future? Cause I'm pretty sure you are going to forget changing this every time you update your char XD

Demon Fox Fire still has a duration, and although I know what the duration is about you don't explain it clearly. Clarify what is duration for, cause right now is sounds like the fire ball can fly during 2 posts.

Finally, like Moon said:
"While beong limited to only defend against rank one attacks, and not being able to support defensive capabilities against higher rank attacks."
V should be V
"While beong limited to only defend against superficial damage, and not being able to support defensive capabilities against stronger attacks."

But in the end there isnt a direct correlation between damage and physical strikes, so to be even more clear you should add the following spoiler to your shield
Progression of Physical Protection
Edited by LibertyGear, Mar 10 2015, 08:40 PM.
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