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| Topic Started: Dec 22 2014, 08:10 PM (1,207 Views) | |
| Fairchild | Dec 22 2014, 08:10 PM Post #1 |
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Account Name: Fairchild Guild "Recruitment Profile" Independently Researched[combined reference][1] Name: Sylvia DuFresne Alias(es): N/A Guild: N/A Class: D Affiliation: Neutral Age: 27 Race: Human (Tiandore) Gender: Female Height: 5' 8" (172 cm) Weight: 134 lb. (61 kg)
Personality DuFresne has shown to be quite relentless when attempting to meet her goals. This may be cause for concern if her goals are contrary to the mission. Despite this seemingly brash nature, DuFresne had no problem meeting acquaintances who would later help her along, so it appears she is most likely to be an amicable personality. She, however, is known to be quite disapproving of humor during serious moments. And, providing she is agitated enough, has been known to respond violently. Temperament has been known to affect DuFresne's shooting She will normally have to focus herself before she can shoot straight again. Normally, in times of agitation, DuFresne has been known to smoke a cigarette, more as a nervous habit than anything else. DuFresne is also aware that she would not always have this option while on assignment. In times of stress when she does not have access to a cigarette, Ms. DuFresne often resorts to meditation, but interruptions may leave her more irritable than when she started. Furthermore, DuFresne has been shown to be a bit unruly with her weapon use. She has been known to discharge her weapon to show frustration. It is believed that habit is the reason she only carries one round in the chamber while she is at rest. In pure combat situations, however, she is normally very focused and centered. She does not appear to be fearful of direct attack, even with her frail body, but this may be because of her swiftness of foot. It is unclear how she would respond to a life-or-death situation, although based on data collected, it is believed she would be confident in the face of it. Despite this, it is unknown whether DuFresne would excel or decline in the presence of other wizards. There are no known records of DuFresne fighting alongside another wizard, so any information regarding strategic capabilities are moot. Compiled History Weapons/Equipment Name: "Lucky" Pistol [Upgradeable "Main Weapon"] Class: D (6-shot) Description: Made of bronze, from barrel to trigger guard, as well as several embellishments on the design. The ignition chamber of the weapon has been replaced by one cast in iron, to increase the number of shots that can be fired in quick succession. She was told, upon receipt of the weapon, that it had been specially calibrated to hit harder and more accurate than any gun of its class, but this is not entirely true. While, it has been calibrated, the real use of the weapon lies with the green “core” that had been welded into the embellishments of the weapon. While it is inert at this point, with sufficient amount of upgrading to the pistol and repair of this “core,” it is likely the weapon will be able to become compatible with the gem. "Lucky" Pistol Most of the weapon is made of bronze. From the barrel, to the trigger guard, and even for some decorative elements, bronze was the metal of choice; however, the ignition chamber has been cast in iron to absorb more impact from firing magic shells. Its physical measurements are 25 cm long, and it weighs approximately 1.8 kg. Its usefulness is hampered a bit by a slow reload speed. Inside a small bronze sphere, located near the firing mechanism, is a round, emerald-colored gem. The surface is marred by a series of deep cracks. Effect/Function: Holds no more than 6 shots. The bronze-work making up the barrel proves to be a design flaw. Because the metal is softer, it is prone to damage from excessive firing. This means that if any damage were to be present from this design flaw, it would cause shots to become less accurate [accuracy modifier penalty] and may actually cause the weapon to backfire. Furthermore, the cracked “core” in the weapon has been drained of all useful power and is nearly irreparably damaged. Weapon Degradation However, if furnished with skilled gunsmiths and powerful mages, it would be possible to unlock this weapon’s full potential. She normally carries the gun on her left hip. Name: "Lucky" Bullets Class: D Description: 6 high caliber rounds for the "Lucky' Pistol". Kept on a pouch on her waist. Name: Knight's Revolver Class: D (6-shot) Description: It's an older model, but the markings are clear. This weapon once belonged to a Knight, specifically, it was a custom job which had been commissioned by one of the Peacekeepers of Fiore. Markings on the weapon are revealed when the gun is taken apart, and even is initialed by, possibly, the original owner of the gun. At 27 cm long, and composed of a 2.2 kg steel body and impressive kickback, it is unclear whether this weapon can even be fired safely by Dufresne. Knights Revolver Effect/Function: holds no more than 6 shots at a time. Fires almost as fast as you can pull the trigger. She normally carries the "Knight's Revolver" in her "hammerspace" or strapped to her belt horizontally behind her back. Name: Revolver Rounds Class: D Description: 6 low caliber rounds for the "Knight's Revolver" weapon. Ex-Quip Inventory
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| 博 Tenken | Jan 3 2015, 01:21 PM Post #2 |
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Hello, let's get this show on the road! Frankly, since a large part of your physical description is filler-y you should probably include things like skin tone, general body shape, specifics around your face (size of your nose/ears/lips for example) and such since it's a touch small at the moment.
Ke? Your personality is a bit short, right now it only totals 8 lines and we need a minimum of 14 - maybe include things like goals and fears, likes and dislikes (food, habits, colours etc.) talents, further ways that she calms down or things that agitate her and the like. Just to note - you'll need to actually include your ammunition in your items/equipment. You swap between first- and third-person a little in some of your items, as an fyi. The accuracy modifier is something I'm hesitant to accept on the "Lucky" pistol, even as a negative, especially since the specific number it's reduced by isn't given and all D-Rank items are completely plain and ordinary elsewise but if you tighten up the details (how much damage is needed, what's the modifier etc.) it might work out. Your magic is currently lacking a tier, however since you've chosen Gravity as your ex-quip augment that means it is Tier 1. However your magic description mentions at once gravity abilities and then only details buffs so... is it gravity or buffing magic? Gravity magic is a lot more versatile so if it's that you'll need to include a larger list overall and if it's just buffs then the tier is 2. When you do your techniques you can remove the (Name of technique) thing at the start - that's where the actual technique name goes instead.
While this is an excellent flavour idea, normally skills/disciplines do not give any actual concrete abilities or additions - this would enter that territory and thus isn't allowed without further explanation. I hope that helps! |
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| Fairchild | Jan 31 2015, 01:06 PM Post #3 |
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[Updated] Did a whole lot of work to make things more clear and to make the whole thing a bit cleaner. |
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| 博 Tenken | Jan 31 2015, 03:31 PM Post #4 |
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You can actually[1] create notes to the bottom of your profile by using the [note][/note] tags around things you want noted at the bottom whilst writing. Here's how it looks when writing the post You still need ammunition in your items. Your magic tier is 1. As an ex-quip mage you require the basic "requip" technique. [1] for example like this |
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| Fairchild | Feb 13 2015, 07:33 AM Post #5 |
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LOOKING FOR REVIEWS -------------------------- Updtates:
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| 栄 AuraLex | Feb 22 2015, 01:43 AM Post #6 |
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Tiandoran Fighter -What kind of buffs are you talking about? As in statistics? And what do you mean at lower tier magics? -No to the last part, mostly cause you can't go beyond rank 10. Edited by AuraLex, Feb 22 2015, 01:44 AM.
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| Fairchild | Feb 22 2015, 03:51 AM Post #7 |
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that is detailed in the following section under the description, which is "Ranks". It details how much of the desired result is felt. EDIT: I will change the descriptions to include stat bonuses
Right, just making sure I'm clear here, the reason I put it like that was because it was the best way I had to explain it. I didn't want her to just be able to go to enchanting s-class weapons, but I didn't want to introduce the idea until later levels... But... meh. I just wanted the option to add that functionality without tanking the balance of the ability. Is there another way you could think of to do that? Anyways, I haven't changed anything in there yet, but I'll be goin' back here in a day or two. Edited by Fairchild, Feb 22 2015, 04:01 AM.
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| Fairchild | Feb 24 2015, 04:25 AM Post #8 |
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UPDATE: Added new system for buffs. Changed a few small items in the personality and weapons sections. |
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| 博 Tenken | Feb 25 2015, 12:03 AM Post #9 |
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Since weapons and armour don't have stats I don't see why you would buff them.
Does this mean can be applied to other mages? That's not an option available to ex-quip user buffs. |
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| Fairchild | Feb 25 2015, 12:29 AM Post #10 |
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Dammit... OK, I think that's it now... I think I've officially had my whole profile gone over 3 times now... I am ready for a re-re-re-review. ...re. |
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