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Basic Information Name: Valintein Willhelm Nickname: Vali Age: 25 Gender: M Height: 184 cm Weight: 85 Kg Guild: N/A Class: D Affiliation: neutral
Appearance
Physical Description
Vali is a tall Caucasian man standing at a height of 184 cm or 6 feet and weighs 85 KG. His weight is mainly muscle, he is in phenomenal shape with hardly any fat to be shown on him. His body is covered in muscle and while that is true he isn’t bulky at all and a lot more on the lean side. Vali is also regarded as a Remarkably handsome man with long black quirky hair with a lock of hair dangling in front of his face. It is described that the bold features of his face are the high p of his nose and his valiant eyebrow. His hard cut mouth marks him with a stoic air, but his eyes seem to hide a quiet grief. One feature that seems to be distinct about Vali is his eyes, Vali has a set of golden colored eyes.
Clothing
When it comes to his attire Vali has a very specific way he likes to dress. He can usually be wearing a suit of some sort. Typically he will wear an all Silvery Gray colored suit complete with a suit jacket, matching pants, and a vest that buttons up to the top of his abdomen revealing the white shirt that he usually has on while wearing this particular set of clothes. He also wears a nice pair of black dress shoes. He isn't limited to wearing just this, occasionally he will wear a different colored suit, as well as design. He will also wear a nice pair of Jeans with a dress shirt and a vest. While he does prefer the more sophisticated look when he dresses himself he does enjoy the occasional sweat shirt or Tee shirt with a jacket of some sort over top. However while Vali does enjoy his nice clothes he takes note to wear his battle attire underneath his casual wear. His Battle attire consists of an out fit that is a one piece that is skin tight similar to underarmor. The top is short sleeved on his left arm and is completely missing the sleeve on his right. The out fit is a greyish Green in color with various black lines that are found on his top that outline parts of his torso. The Bottom half of his battle wear only retains part of the top's color in the front of his hips, part of the front of his inner thigh and down around his hamstring. The outside of his leg and from the bottom part of thigh down to his feet was a black and gray in color with a flame like pattern separating the coloration. His feet have a special designed casing that is to mimic shoes.
Accessories
Vali has a cuisse like belt made out of leather that extends down midway down and straps around his thigh, and then goes upwards covering his hip and just reaching the bottom of his abdomen. His right forearm has a black sleeve that extends from his hands up past his bicep.
Vali has shown many different sides of him through out his life he lets himself come off as a good person and just per He doesn't abide anything that he deems evil and has personal goal of wiping evil off the face of the earth whenever he can. While he was a young boy at school he acted like any ordinary student being polite kind, and somewhat shy during certain instances but had no problem being out going for the most part, this attitude follows him wen it come to people he is affiliated with whether they be Guild mate, friend or even temporary colleague. When he meets new people he tends to be straight forward and to the point and tends to keep as emotionless as possible, However his attitude completely changes when he is doing his work for the guild or in the middle of some sort of conflict. He completely transforms into a cold, calculating, and ruthless person who puts completing his work before all. He has a pretty straight forward sense of honor and justice and has no problem killing someone at all. In fact if his job requires him to kill someone he will do so no problem, or if there is someone he deems evil he can kill that person with out mercy or remorse. He finds himself fit to take on this task due to the fact that he doesn't allow himself forget that while he does do good things and wants to eradicate all evil for the good of all he will always think of himself as evil of a being as those he eliminates.
History
History
Long before Valintein was born his family resided in the most western part of Fiore. The Village where his family was from was found right at the border of Fiore past in the desert that could be found past Lotus City. Valintein’s parents continually travelled through the desert looking for work with in Lotus city. However on one fateful day when they were advertising that they are willing to work for food, a rather wealthy gentleman by the name of Watson had been in town on business had stumbled upon Valintein’s father and mother. Feeling some sympathy for the poor family Watson offered them transport back to a small town located in the south right near the boarder of Fiore, in order to live on his estate and work as his hired help. Several years had passed by since his parents had moved from their village to the Small town and by this time they had already given birth to Valintein’s older brother, and were expecting another child who was none other than Valintein himself.. At the same time Watson’s wife was also expecting to bear a child around the same time Valintein’s parents were, so naturally the two expecting mothers became friendly with each other and had already decided that their two children would be playmates despite Watson’s obvious disgust at the idea that his perfect little girl would become playmates with a lesser child. Several days later both mothers gave birth to their children on the same day. Watson’s wife had named their daughter Aoba, while Valintein was given his name by his parents.
The town where Valintien lived was located near a hidden fort, this fort of sorts was the home to a massive demon horde and their leader who only went by the title of Code Emperor. Not much was known about this Code Emperor aside for the fact he was leader of his own little kingdom of demons and unlike most demons The code Emperor had a deal struck with Watson, who was not only Valintein’s parent’s employer but the Mayor of the town, this deal was simple and very undemon like which was simply this, the demons were allowed in the town for work and such and were to be treated as normal people, which in return the demons would protect the town from harm if there was ever a need. Vali enjoyed the demons in town and was very friendly with many of them including the young ones and even though he was only 7 years of age he was very mature and welcoming to the demons. However one night a child was murdered in the streets by a demon which the town’s armed forces started a war with the demon horde. Despite being a child and not having any special abilities Vali charged his way into the battle field not to fight but to try broker peace but as a result he managed to get seriously hurt some how and his right arm was severed from his body and was lost on battle field. This event actually ended the conflict for neither side wished to harm a child and Vali was treated for his wound and returned home where his parents, brother and even Aoba were by his bedside as he began recovery. A truce was brokered between the demons and the humans, and The Code Emperor had gotten word of this event and had sought an audience with Vali’s family. The entire family had taken him to the castle of the Code Emperor where the Emperor expressed his deepest apologies and as a way to atone for the tragedy the befell Vali the Code Emperor had performed a spell which removed his right arm, degraded the age of the arm to match the physiology of Vali’s body and attached it to Vali. As a result Vali was not only given a new arm his blood mixed with the Code Emperor’s giving him access to the same magic as the Code Emperor the Flames of Purgatory, but of course Vali was not to learn how to use this magic until he was older.
Eight years went by quicker than the calling wind. Valintien had grown up to be quite a handsome young man, and all thanks to the Code Emperor he was able to live his life normally and while he grew up he also grew a reputation as a lady killer throughout hos hometown and school. This often got him into trouble with the other boys in town who would usually challenge Valintein to a fight. Sometimes the fights weren’t always fair and his calm disposition would often get him into trouble since he would initially try to avoid the fight even if he could win which for some reason made his adversaries even more mad and there would be more trouble, trouble that his brother would usually help bail him out. However after all said and done Valintein’s brother was would give him a licking for not sticking up for himself and that he had to toughen up especially if he wanted to be able to protect Aoba, which would often get a rise outta Valintein. Despite his reputation as a ladies’ man he still found himself in good graces with his child hood friend Aoba who had also become quite the lovely young lady herself. To himself he found himself very much in love with Aoba but of course because of their positions in society he felt that he would never be good enough to win Aoba’s heart, unknown to him that she had already fallen for him and it was obvious especially to her father.
On the night of a new moon Aoba had summoned Valintein to come out to the courtyard of her father’s estate. When Valintein had arrived he couldn’t have predicted what was to happen next, under the bright sea of stars in the sky he was greeted by Aoba and was asked to sit next to her at the fountain located in the dead center of the court yard. She had asked him if would ever grow up and finally decide on one woman to settle with. Of course Valintein having his heart’s desire for her he made a clever pun on how there wasn’t a woman that could tame him. At that moment Aoba had looked at him and asked if that included her. Valintein was taken back from what she had said and didn’t know what to say, but before he could even try to say anything Aoba kissed him, which had automatically made him kiss her back. At that moment that kiss was the greatest thing to ever possibly happen to him, but unknown to the two Watson looked on and soon became enraged by the very sight of his daughter kissing Valintein.
Watson went absolutely mad and hired a group of mercenaries. He was desperate to maintain his stature throughout the town as the one of the noblest families in Fiore. Soon the mercenaries moved in and started to attack Valintein’s family at their small home in town. Valintein was on his way back from seeing Aoba and for the most part the night went well. That was until he finally made it home to see that his family had been slaughtered and crucified above the door of their home.Valintein was devastated by the sight he had seen, but luckily his brother did not perish right away, though his wounds were fatal he stayed alive until Valintein made it home. Valintein was told with his brother’s dying words that Watson had hired a group of mercenaries and were responsible the slaughter of his family. With his brother passing on, Valintein made his way to Watson’s house with the intention of killing him.
Upon approaching the house a rage burned with in Valintein’s heart, a rage that consumed his heart and his eyes had turned red. As if the blood of his slaughtered family dyed his eyes and his hand began to flicker with a power Valintein never knew that he had. Valintein walked up to the door and reduced the door to ash by touching it with a strange blue fire.. With the rage entering his heart it must have unlocked the hidden power that had been lying dormant with in his right arm, the arm that was given to him by the Code Emperor. Several men tried to interfere with Vali’s revenge but they found out that it wasn’t a wise idea for he grabbed anyone who came near him and lit them on fire. Valintein found his way to Watson’s office and completely pulverized the door with his fire. Vali entered the room ready to destroy those who exterminated his family as if they were vermin, but before Valintein was able to make a move his rage disappeared and was replaced with overwhelming sorry for laying in front of him on the floor was his beloved Aoba. Vali looked at Watson, the blue fire grew intense and he was about to demand an answer for this atrocious act but before he could speak Watson had already let him in on what happened. Watson told Vali that Aoba had discovered what her father had done confronted him about his evil deed. Aoba had threatened to leave with Vali in order to live a better life away from him. In response Watson had his very own daughter struck down for her insolence.
In a fit of rage Vali unleashed more of his magical energy and his entire right arm was egulfed in a surging black fire that radiated a blue aura while his right arm was shroud in black and red fire.. One of the mercenaries decided to throw a bomb at Vali in order to end this with a bang. That bomb would prove to be his undoing as Vali would use his new ability by hurling a fire ball made from the flames of both arms on the bomb which destroyed the bombs shell and sent the explosion as well as his fire back at Watson and his soldiers of fortune. Of course Vali was also blown back by the blast of shock wave that the bomb had created and was severely injured. He was found and treated by local medics and was treated for his wounds.
From that day forward his sense of justice was altered forever luckily before his heart could have been completely consumed by the flames of purgatory and destroyed forever he visited by the Code Emperor, who took it upon himself to use a nifty trick to do two things. one was to absorb mostly all the magic that the flames of Purgatory offered him that night including that fire which almost consumed him and was inturn the cause of death of Watson. The Code Emperor also erased the memory of what happened when he used the multi colored flame so he would have no idea how anyone actually died but he couldn’t remove the memories of his loved ones being killed. The Code Emperor left two things as a going away gift for Vali. One was a note giving him instructions on how he could improve his magic but that was all. The Code emperor also told Vali he was interested in the boys ability to call forth the flames so easily and with expectations greatness from Vali, the Code Emperor also left Vali control of the Blue fire as a reward for doing so well so far. So with the memory of how his family was slaughters and the love of his life was killed, he now judged those who would be evil and had no remorse in doing so.
Armory
Weapons
Name: Extending Spear Class:A Description:The staff at first glance looks like a pipe that is about 12 inches long and it has a hole on each end which is built to contain the main part of the staff which is the main shaft that extends out from both ends making the staff a total length of 5 feet. The extended shaft narrows as it reaches either end coming to a fine point that resembles a joust’s point. Effect/Function:The staff’s shaft is able to extend 2 feet of pointed metal from both ends being a total of 5 feet in length and retract with a push of a button./ It functions just like a regular spear or Joust, it can be utilized in pole arm style combat, used as thrust the point with the intention of piercing the target. It can also be thrown at a target.
Christmas is Ruined- 7 sp 1,400,000 jewel Free A ranked Item ( Up to 10 mil. Jewel)
Arcs
Arcs
N/A
Expenses
Expenses
3,000 on 5 TP
Skills & Disciplines
Pole arms
Vali has gone through various rigorous training regimens in order to done his skill with various Polearms such as Spears, lances or anything similar to those weapons.
Unarmed Combat
Vali has honed his body and mind to be efficient unarmed combat by studying various styles such as Boxing, Muay Thai, Jiu Jitsu, Jeet Kune Do, and Tai Chi.
Cooking Expert
During his preteen years Vali was taught by a family friend how to cook various meals and did so with exemplary skill
Magic
Magic Name: The Flames of Purgatory Magic Type: Fire Tier of Magic: 1 Rank: 4
Magic Description: The Flames of Purgatory are a unique and advanced style of Fire magic. It's power derives from the Seven Deadly sins Wrath, Sloth,Greed, Gluttony, Envy, Lust and Pride and the user can call forth a different flame with each flame representing a sin as well as having its own special ability. Satan's Blaze which represents the sin of Wrath is the beginning flame for any user of the Flames of Purgatory, is a brilliant Blue Flame and can be used for basic flame based attacks such as fire ball to more advanced Pyrokinesis such as walls of fire. The other flames however provide much different spells that can be used for different functions such as using the flames that represent Greed which the user can actually manufacture the two swords,one sword a green flame And the second one a yellow flame and use them for attack. Can use a colorless flame which represents Gluttony that is specifically oriented for incinerating and eatting away at objects. Can use an Iridescent flame representing Lust, which is used as a trap and can catch a person in an explosion. A black flame representing sloth can be utilized to enhance physical stats as be used to counter a debuff with a buff. There is a silver flame representing Envy which can be formed to look like a serpent like figure and can be sent to attack a person diminishing physical stats upon contact and a red Flame which represents Pride and with this flame the person is dealt extra damage when bound,under a status effect or directly after a damage causing technique. The only catch with this magic is that every other flame besides Satan's Blaze can not be learned naturally but can only be obtained when one with this magic comes into contact with the demon who guards each flame.
Techniques Point
Technique Points (Base+Earned) 6
Technique Points (Bought)6
Technique Points (total)12
Technique Points (Used)12
Spells
Satan's Blaze - 4
Type: Offense Range: Touch Effect: The user has his hands ignited in the blue flame that represents Wrath. When he touches a person, he engulfs them in flame for one turn, causing light damage. He can then use the tech again as long as the duration is active or for a total of 3 times.Damage:Light Cooldown: 3 Duration: Spell active Active 3 posts or fires 3 times
Satan's Flare - 4
Type: Offense Range: 35 meters Effect: The user shoots a stream of blue fire from his right hand out at the target making like a flamethrower effect that explodes on contact with the target. The stream of fire would be 35 meters long and 7 meters wide. Damage: Moderate Cooldown:3 Duration: 1
Satan's Wrath-4
Type:Offense/AOE Range:0-35 meters Effect: The caster draws a bright blue flame from inside his or her body and concentrates it in front of his mouth, after the flame is fully gathered the user then can unleash the concentrated fire in what would be in the shape of a cone at whatever the caster has targeted. The cone of fire is 35 meters long and 7 meters wide and works like a flamethrower,which moves at the users will within a radius of 30 meters.
Damage: Moderate Duration: 1 post Cooldown: 3 posts
Okay your sources-- was the birthday reward for the previous character? Not sure if this is allowed if its scoopable or transferable. If it was applied AFTER, you wouldn't be able to claim those rewards due to the rules involving the correct creation of the character.
Satin's Blaze-- Melee fire fists? Moderate for rank 4 per hit is too high. Specify to light damage for rank 4 and specify how many targets can you deal damage to per post of its duration.
Satan Flare-- You mean cooldown of 3 right? Please make that clearer.
NOte: Correction-- they are scoopable so it works. But be sure if it was made for previous character or not.
Your magic description is relatively vague, and doesn't give that much insight to what exactly your magic can do. As of now, am I aware that you can perform pyrokinetic feats, and create weapons (I'm assuming it's pretty much just fire in the shape of swords here). Please, give more examples as to what this magic can actually do.
Satan's Blaze - Do you mean that it does Light damage for every post the fire burns on a person? Is this a melee-enhancement or simply a zero-distance offensive spell? How many targets can this spell burn before running out?
Satan's Flare - Just straight up list the range as 35 meters. Mid Range means little.
You only have 6 deadly sins listed. You forgot Envy. (nit picky I know, but if you're gonna do it, might as well do it right.)
Otherwise I don't see much issue. Another probably nit pick, but if possible you might want to say which flames go with which sin in your magic description to save confusion later. [for you as well as everyone else]