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| Topic Started: Nov 18 2013, 02:33 AM (321 Views) | |
| Jova | Nov 18 2013, 02:33 AM Post #1 |
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Plot Summary: It has been a long time since the Dragon Slayer, Yuurei Soukutsu, return to his home place. A town called Kyoudai, which has prospered in its field of technology, and other invention. It’s a place where a lot of the people keep to themselves, until they come of age, and enter a certain profession. This is his home, and the young Fairy Tail mage has gotten a letter from his home town. He was surprised that he would get a letter from his parents, or anybody from his family, but the things he did were being spoken around the world of Fiore. It was good to know that his family heard of him, and wanted to keep in touch with him. It made the mage feel warm inside, and he decided that he would go visit his home. What the young Dragon Slayer didn’t know was that there was something dark lurking in his home town. He would soon find out thought, and from there what would he do to protect the place he would call his first home. I. A Letter from his Family Yuurei starts his day off making his way to the guild hall. He was surprised on who he had bumped into along the way, and figured he would hang out with his company. It’s not soon after someone else he knows appears, and he introduce the two of them. He couldn’t help but smile at this event, but it was soon cut short due to an interruption. The group doesn’t know who this person is, and with that their stranger did something to put each of them of them on guard. They face this person, but it doesn’t go to far. The mystery man disappears before the fight can come to a climax, leaving the group in slight confusion on what is going on. The group figuring it was nothing, Yuurei decides to take a moment to go to the guild. When he arrives he is given a letter, and opens it up to see that his family had written to him. He decides to go visit his family, and ask his friends if they would like to accompany him. After the convincing is done with, he and company set their journey to Kyoudai, Yuurei’s home town. II. Kyoudai and the Evil Around it The group arrives at his home, and it brings back memories. He is glad to be home, and he could only imagine all the people he knew who were still here. He could see that nothing really changed as he moved around the area; people working, and doing their normal day activity. They go around looking at place; Yuurei of course talks about some of the places that are around here as they slowly make their way towards his home. When arriving to his house Yuurei noticed that nobody is home. He was able to find that out before entering the mansion. He wondered what was wrong, and knew that there would have to be a butler at the least if his family was not home. This is where things get interesting, and he starts to slowly figure out something is going on here. After the events occurred in the house, the dark mages, and criminal syndicates start to show up all over town. They didn’t only target Yuurei’s family, but the other founding families in the city. There the people in this town were also being threatened, so they weren’t able to do anything. The group leaves the house to ask people question, but were met up with a few dark mages, and even people from a familiar syndicate. Yuurei was surprised about what he saw. The Criminal Syndicate belonged to a man name Fuji Samanosuke. He was able to find that out due to what a few of them were wearing. The dark mage an insignia on his face; it surprised him because he knew of the guild who was here. He had heard of them. These were mages from a guild called the Bloody Marionettes. He is surprised about what is going on here, and ask questions about why they were here. He knew these two groups were no joke, and he was a bit nervous to know that his family might be in danger. III. The Old Castle After the events between the groups the people in the town all seem to have locked themselves into their home. Yuurei doesn’t know what to do and tries to figure out where his family is held captive. Yuurei decides to go to the other founders of the town. He figures they would be able to help him out with his situation, and probably know something. The group goes to the first of three founders, the Jiyuu family. When they get there they see the bridge was up on the castle, and that was wrong. There were no guards out in front protecting the bridge that should have been flat out there, for people to come and go. The group does whatever it takes to get inside of the castle, and after moving around they are met with a few dark mages, and highly skill fighters. He realizes that the Jiyuu family is in danger as well, and probably every other founder of this town. IV. The Medieval Castle After the events in the first castle, the group has rescued the Jiyuu family from danger, and is now moving towards the next location. Yuurei knows that the founders are in danger he aims to go to the Touhi family. There was a part of him that he couldn’t believe that this family had been taken hostage, but things happen. He and company soon arrive at the place. He knew that there was no way they could sneak around this place. If they had gotten control of everything here, then the cameras and stuff would make sure that the enemy knew of their arrival. They do what they need to do to get in there, and chaos is made within the Castle. There seem to be a large quantity of dark mages in this town, and even criminals. He couldn’t understand why they were going through all of this for him, but knew it wasn’t going to end well. V. The Steamed Castle Yuurei saved this castle for last because he enjoyed this place. One of his closest friends owns this part. This place was owned by the Nicholai family. It was a steam punk based mansion, and the ways to get in were outstanding. The thing is you needed to know where things were. He had his company followed him to the back entrance of this mansion, and they made it in. They knew what to expect from all of this, and he just knew that rescuing the founders would allow the town to feel safe. Yuurei could only hope that his family would be here as well. The group goes through a lot through this castle because of the steamed power mansion, and the mages, and criminals that were as well. He meets a few old people as well that he had fought before, and finds a little bit about why they were targeting him. It allows him to put some of the pieces together, and it angers him more than he already was. VI. The Sport Castle After the events have come to an end in the Nicholai home Yuurei finds out that his family had been moved back to his house. They were waiting for him, but he knew that something strong would be blocking their way. He could only hope that things didn’t turn for the worst. The group rushes towards his home, and the first place they been to since they started the chase. The group is met up with Samanosuke, and the leader of the dark guild. It seems like they were waiting for Yuurei’s captured, but when they heard that he had rescued the first family they had moved back to his house. The trials the group face will be the results of whether the Dragon Slayer will be able to save his family or lose them because of his failures. Note: Each castle thread will not only be consisting of fights. We will go through obstacles throughout the castles, and searching for where the families are being held. It will be unique to each of the castle’s structure. There will be traps unique to each castle. Character's Involved Yuurei Soukutsu Ezekiel Belmonte Silvia Dusk Edited by Jova, Nov 20 2013, 03:19 AM.
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| Sinjin | Nov 18 2013, 03:17 AM Post #2 |
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Please redo plot. As it is.... it sounds more like random threads (not even urgent or ground-breaking from the way their summaries are written) put together to make an arc. Remember, an arc must be a BIG and CRUCIAL development. Thread 1 for example sounds meet-and-greet-y-ish. Perhaps former arcs had less strict operations and critcisms, but this time around, this arc will have to PERFORM as a REAL ONE. So, please redo this entry for something that accounts to a real arc. For guide, try making each thread as if it were already one complete story, rather than each thread like one chapter in a manga. Unless this issue is address, I hope fellow mmods will respect this decision. |
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| Jova | Nov 18 2013, 03:52 AM Post #3 |
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It has plot I just summarized it and didn't put detail its about Yuurei his friends and a crime syndicate, and dark guild. They take his family hostage, and others. It has development. I'm not going to write in details what is going to happen. I just quickly wrote general things on what is going to happen nothing more. It's not random at all. |
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| Sinjin | Nov 18 2013, 04:48 AM Post #4 |
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I gave you a guide on how to properly do it via chatango. apply it. you'll see that the problem is not "THE ARC" itself, but the "WAY YOU WROTE THE ARC" |
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