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| [Deleted] Jamelle Ventis; Wandering Kitsune | |
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| Topic Started: Jun 28 2012, 11:42 AM (816 Views) | |
| Bleak | Jun 28 2012, 11:42 AM Post #1 |
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Account Name: Bleak Profile Name: Jamelle Ventis Nickname: Jamie Age: 23 (Apparent) Gender: Female Height: 5'8" (Over 6' with the ears) Weight: about 86 KG Guild: N/A Class: D Affiliation: Neutral Appearance Physical Description: The first thing most people notice about Jamelle is red. Brilliant red. The long streams of her red hair, the tall, rather prominant points of her velvety ears, the long, waving fox tail, red almost to the tip, which is purest white. The immense mass of red moves almost as thing alive, apart from the woman it is attatched to, a part of. The second thing that tends to strike most is a much smaller feature. Her eyes, amber, some might say, but more definitively golden, a shining yellow even in direct light, with much less brown or the shades of orange that characterize human eyes of that color. Her eyes are bright, vibrant, constantly reading her surroundings, quickly moving from object to object, their nigh constant movement making them draw all the more attention. Anyone who gets past those two features will find her to seem an extraordinarily human woman, her figure tight, her skin smooth, her form without excess fat, her pristine flesh hiding well toned musculature. Her facial features are gentle, soft, not quite child like, but expressing a similar gentleness, a vibrant youth. All in all she is a very striking figure, a blend of inhuman traits and almost statuesque perfection of form leaving her image clear in the minds of all those who encounter her. Clothing: Jamelle has a most elaborate sense of style, blending fashion touches and more practical gear together into a strange, but oddly appealing mix. The central points of her array of garments is a cloth corset, overlain and reinforced by a layer of stiffer leather for both a modicum of decency and a hint of protection, tightly fitted black shorts, a pair metal braces covering over a bit more than each of her wrists, matching her heavier boots who's more noticible protection extends up, over her knees, their purple-silver metallic grip hugging up her legs, leaving mostly just her inner and upper thighs uncovered. Along with these basic and defensive garments she likes to wear additional pieces for flair. A black jacket vest with a dark fur ruff framing a black, high collar, its sleeves under her bracers, giving her padding from the metal, black, fingerless gloves worn beneath, as much for fashion as to help her maintain her grip when needed. Upon her pants she wears a wide belt, and affixed to it a large, spreading coat tail, like the bottom half of a trench coat, split in front for freedom of her legs, behind for the freedom of her tail, much like the rest of her garments the leathery material is half for show, and half to help turn away blades that might strike at her sides and behind. For she is greatly of the opinion that functional dress and stylish dress need not be separated. Accessories: None of note Extra: Her total lack of scars, blemishes, etc. on her skin is part of what makes her appearance notable. Picture: Jamelle Personality: Jamelle is generally a laid back, aloof creature, pleased to sit down, share food and drink with anyone of an agreeable nature, while at the same time hardly becoming emotionally invested in those around her. If they were amiacable and polite she would happily share a meal with her gravest nemesis, even if she would then proceed to fight that individual to the death. In many ways she is inhuman, reflecting her animal nature, paying attention to societal expectations only as much as she must to avoid general public reproof, capable of being surprisingly childish, jealous and envious, given to expecting, if not to be regarded as of supreme skill, to be treated at least as a person of import and ability. But even as she is capable of moments of inexplicable dark temper, she is just as capable of suddenly breaking into boisterous good cheer. Her moods are ephemeral, and her habits are consistent only in their fey nature. Still, her base from which all these moods spring is ultimately quite easygoing and good natured, given to lend aid, even if the recipiant is not always pleased that they accepted it in the long run. Even still, once any particular 'helping' is done she generally feels compelled to travel on, for when on the road she desires to see new places, and meet new people, but once she's met them she feels no particular impulse to stick around. Her habits are very... Consumptive, find a new experience, wallow in it, consume it, and then move along, which makes maintaining friendships or other relationships somewhat difficult, as she doesn't have a strong impulse TO maintain such associations. Still, she tends to eagerly and openly participate in new friendships, or at times other relationships, be it that of enmity or perhaps more... Positive emotions. In the end, though, she is strongly controlled by the whims of her nature, hardly constant except in her urges to seek something new. There is one other thing of particular note about her personality. Her purported "amnesia." While it is true she does not remember a time before she possessed her current form, part fox, part late teen to mid 20s human, she does not consider herself to have amnesia. She has a feeling, the sense that that first point she remembers was the point at which she became what she currently is, and if what came before was some other sort of entity, that which she has 'forgotten' is someone else's life, someone else's history, and feels no need or desire to seek it. Even if it was known and given to her, she would find it nothing more than a passing curiosity, what came before came before she herself, and she cares little. History History Weaponry/Equipment Metal Bracers (D Rank Armor): These are metal guards, a band around her hand, and a wider plate over the back of her wrist, extending a short way up her arm. Armored Boots (D Rank Armor): These pieces of worked metal cover her feet and extend up her legs, including articulated knee coverings, spreading open a bit above the knee, but giving her general leg protection. Leather Reinforced Corset and Skirt (D Rank Armor): Both the corset she practically wears as outer wear and the skirt that hangs from her belt to a bit below her knees are reinforced with stiff leather. Wide bladed 2 handed Sword (D Rank Sword): One of the heaviest of heavy swords, this cross guard and pommelless claymore features an unusually broad blade, and, while certainly an impressive mass of metal, is almost more of a club than a proper sword at present, little more than the very tip retaining any sort of truly sharp edge. This oversized blade measures 160 centimeters in length, 25 of this centimeters being the overlong, heavy hilt. This massive sword weighs in at what would generally be an impractical 3.75 kilograms, but Jamelle has proven remarkably adept at controlling its girth. Stats - 45 Strength: 11 Accuracy: 10 Stamina: 11 Speed: 10 Magic: 3 Earned Stat Points Earned: 0/0 Arc Points Earned: 0/0 Jewels Earned 100,000/100,000 Sources Sources Skills & Disciplines Wilderness Survival: Being part animal, or nature spirit, or... Something (She's not strictly sure) Jamelle is quite at home in the woods, or in most natural places outside of, say, the ocean or desert, and is quite capable of finding food or tracking people in such surroundings. Heavy Sword User: While her actual technique with her weapon may often be more like the swinging of a club than the wielding of a sword, Jamelle is capable of using the massive blade with some notable adeptness, tiring less easily, and leaving her self less open than one might expect for wielding so massive a blade. Heavy Drinker: Jamelle is pretty resistant to most intoxicants due to a lifestyle of excessively consuming them, whether to quell her base instincts or just for the hell of it often varies, but she rarely gets more than buzzed, no matter how late into the night her drinking extends. Magic Magic Name: Mysticism of the Kitsune Magic Type: Supernatural Abilities - Tails of Legend Tier of Magic: 1 Rank: 1 Magic Description: While her blood and nature does not grant her any particular mastery or power in any one specific discipline of magic, Jamelle is, in and of herself, a magical creature, capable of utilizing her tail, and in time tails, to preform supernatural feats, in combat and every day life, concealing objects within it, or using them to lash out for attack or defense, welding them as additional limbs, often superior to her own. From them she can even project damaging fox fire, either as small bursts from her tails or in a more concentrated blast, or attempt to use other magics to beguile her opponents, creating delusions either of things present or of mistaken allegiances. As her power grows, so do her tails, or perhaps vice versa, their energy flowing into her, granting her animal senses far beyond that of any human, the flow of their power granting her improved health and regeneration, and the legends say that when a Kitsune reaches nine they reach their absolute apotheosis, capable of weilding immense power, at least for short periods of time. Techniques: 2/2 One Divine Treasure - 1 Type: Storage Range: Personal Effect: A fox is a trickster, and sometimes a thief, and so this is the most basic of their abilities: To conceal that which they hold. Jamelle may store a singular object in each her tails by thrusting it into its mass herself, and draw it out by reaching into the same. Each tail can only hold a single object, but may do so indefinitely, carrying it without any apparent change in weight and concealing it from all physical and some magical searches. Using this ability she can store about five kilograms of weight in each of her... Single tails. After extracting an item from a tail she must wait 4 posts before she may place a different object within it. Fox Senses - 1 Type: Support Range: Observation Effect: Jamelle is of animal nature and, because of this, has senses that exceed the norm, though they are not normally much more than 'unusually sharp.' She can additionally speak with others of 'her kind,' humans, obviously, but also foxes, and foxes generally see her as a friendly entity, willing to work with her, and would certainly never attack her. Additionally, she can channel her energy inward, enhancing her already unusually adept senses to a supernatural degree. This grants her +3 Accuracy, as well as truly exceptional hearing, vision, and scent acquiring abilities enough for limited tracking for 2 posts, with a 2 post cooldown. Edited by Bleak, Jun 30 2012, 10:32 AM.
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| Levvins | Jun 29 2012, 08:18 AM Post #2 |
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*squishes fumloon*
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» Profile spacing: Please try to space out the areas in between the fields - kinda hard to see where one field ends and another starts when the first field is more than just a few lines long. » Weight: Specify it as 190 lbs, please. It's not really something nice if you want a kitsune at 190 kg, which is roughly 419 lbs...
» There's no point placing your image's URL on top of the actual image - the code in the spoiler fixes it. » Personality: I'd like the personality lengthened by two to three lines.
» Could you specify all the dimensions of her weaponry and equipment? Also, at the start you are normally limited to 3-4 pieces of equipment and weaponry in all.
» Is this a passive technique? If not, please state duration and cooldown. i.e. how long you can store the object, and after how long can you store the object again. » How big an object can you conceal at this rank? » Spelling errors - "theif" should be "thief", "singule" should be "single". » Wording - "its furry depths herself" sounds rather... wrong...
» Normally this would go under Skills and Disciplines... |
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| Bleak | Jun 29 2012, 08:48 AM Post #3 |
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Okay, I think I covered most of the spelling errors (Durrrrr me are stupid), fixed the weight, am currently leaving the separate image link because Booru sites from time to time break all direct links so I would like to leave the alternate source of access there. I, er... Compressed my overly itemized list a bit to fit tightly into the 4 items thing (The bracers and boots are probably a matched set too if that makes them 1 "item" too, I'm not entirely clear on it) I figured since I had basically 1 "armored outfit" and 1 "weapon" I was probably in the clear on that one, but I will endeavor to be more inclusive in my definitions in future. Moved the one ability to skills, replaced it with something I hope is not objectionable, added additional definition to the other skill. Fixed "phrasing that sounds wrong" haha. As for personality I'll admit I'm kind of at a loss. What's there is really what she is, I'm not sure what else you want to see in there and padding for the sake of padding seems, uhm, wrong I guess, can I get a bit more direction than "More" if you would be so kind? |
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| Zen | Jun 29 2012, 11:12 PM Post #4 |
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After changes discussed in cbox...![]() 1/2 Approval Edited by Zen, Jun 29 2012, 11:14 PM.
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| 栄 Snow | Jun 30 2012, 04:46 AM Post #5 |
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Dark Lorde of the Sith
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Sorry but this needs a cooldown. The cooldown being how long you must wait before placing an item into a tail, which also includes replacing a current item in a tail. "concealing it from all physical and some magical searches." - At Rank 1? Sorry but no, for Rank 1 this is considered too powerful alongside the removal of the objects weight. "Using this ability she can store about four to five kilograms of weight in each of her... Single tails." Is it four or five kilograms? |
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| Bleak | Jun 30 2012, 05:05 AM Post #6 |
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Okay, I've done everything except the bit about being able to hide things because, so far as I can tell, in the rules and talking to people in the CBox, there normally isn't any way to detect things kept in special/pocket dimension storage, which is what this is, and so not only is it possible for it to currently have this quality but it must, by the nature of the thing, have this quality based on the information available to me. I hope this is acceptable. |
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| 御 Cloud | Jun 30 2012, 10:27 AM Post #7 |
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Who you calling chocobo head...
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- "Fox Speech: Jamelle can speak with other foxes, and they generally have a positive or helpful opinion of her, willing to help her in small ways, and they and their relatives would certainly never attack her. Fox Senses: Jamelle has unusually sharp hearing, sight, and sense of smell, not so great as to be supernatural, but noticeably higher than average." Both of those aren't really Skills or Disciplines (which have to things that are completely not magical, and that a normal human couldn't do), however I would be completely fine if you made them a passive effect of Enhanced Senses, I have no intent on making you spend excess TP on abilities like that. One Divine Treasure - Minor thing is minor, you use rounds, not posts. (I do this all the time. >.< ) Enhanced Senses - This should probably have a max duration of 2 posts, even if it gives less accuracy than a normal buff. |
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| Bleak | Jun 30 2012, 10:32 AM Post #8 |
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Edit'd |
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| 御 Cloud | Jun 30 2012, 10:35 AM Post #9 |
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Who you calling chocobo head...
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Technique changed, so, re-1/2 approved. |
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| 博 Tenken | Jun 30 2012, 10:39 AM Post #10 |
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Hoennese and proud!
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