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| Topic Started: May 3 2012, 02:37 PM (1,730 Views) | |
| Levvins | May 3 2012, 02:37 PM Post #1 |
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*squishes fumloon*
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Account Name: Levvins "Could you please... I don't know, shove off?" ![]() Name: Katelynn Mürykk Nickname: N/A Age: 17 Birthday: February 20 Sign: Pisces Gender: Female Height: 1.67 m (5'6") Weight: 49.0 kg (108 lbs) Bloodtype: B Alignment: Chaotic Neutral Relatives: N/A Hometown: Republic of Mins Occupation: Dark Mage Guild: N/A Guild Mark Location: N/A Guild Mark Colour: N/A Class: D Speech Colour: #091d35 ![]() Her skin is of a flawless, unblemished white - it would seem almost impossible to exhibit any signs of aging on her skin. Being blessed with a head of very dark blue hair, her hair is occasionally held in an odango style, her ponytails much longer than most, reaching down to her lower back, and a bang would persistently show itself no matter how much styling she does. However, when she feels like it, she likes to let her hair down, partially or completely. Her eyes are violet in colour, normally giving a warm and friendly feel to her. Her chin is rather angular, yet her cheeks are rounded sufficiently to make her angular chin look less pronounced. Her neck is slightly longer than normal, but this is kept inconspicuous by her collar. Petite in size, her height is still normal for girls of her age. Her thighs are very well built for her age, while her lower legs are very well built as well, though covered by her long boots. Her arms are less so, having found less need for pure arm strength as compared to leg strength. As such, her arm muscles are less defined, but they are there, only hidden behind her soft, smooth skin. Her shoulders are not as broad as other girls her age, while her arms reach halfway down her thighs. Looking at her from afar, one would not expect much of this young woman. Being a less than imposing figure at 1.67m (5'6"), Katelynn would not be expected to engage in overly manual labour. Yet, her hands are somewhat hardened from the physical exertions of her less-than-ordinary history. Having taken her whole childhood to finally experience physical exertion, perhaps this physical characteristic of her was something that she intended on having in the first place. ![]() Her clothing choice is to wear black and whites, contrasting well with her hair and skin color. She prefers to wear heeled boots with platforms, raising her relative height about 5 centimetres. The boots hug her skin, and they stretch all the way until right below her kneecaps. While initially the choice of shoes was not the most practical, she has since learned to manoeuvre surprisingly well with them on. She wears a black and white skirt, with the sides both white and frilled, and the front and back are black yet not frilled. Her jacket wraps snugly around her body, with the jacket being about a ¾'s fit sleeve. Her collar remains up most of the time except during leisure, covering up all her neck save for her throat. The shoulders have a hardened metal, of an aluminium sheen, in order to offer limited protection to her arms. Her clothes, overall, hug her body and enhance her figure, yet provide enough flexibility and mobility to engage in physically demanding activities. ![]() N/A ![]() N/A ![]() Picture ![]() Personality ![]() History ![]() S-Class A-Class B-Class C-Class D-Class - 61Strength: 10 Accuracy: 10 Stamina: 10 Speed: 10 Magic: 21 Stat Points Earned: 0/16 Arc Points Earned: 0/0 Jewels Earned 2,300,000/3,500,000 ![]() Storylines - 0 SP | 0 Jewels Missions - 0SP | 0 Jewels Arcs - 4SP | 600,000 Jewels | 0 AP Events - 12SP | 2,800,000 Jewels | 0 AP Transactions - 0 SP | -1,200,000 Jewels Completed Loans - 0/0 Jewels ![]() Ambidexterity - Katelynn is skilled in writing and manipulating objects using both hands. Arts - Katelynn is a very artsy person, capable of composing music, drawing, as well as engage in literary expression. Singing - She has a remarkable voice, and she likes to use her voice to express herself. Her songs are capable of brightening up almost anyone's day. Swimming - Having swum for a long time, she is more than capable of swimming. The only thing limiting her from swimming everywhere would be her own stamina. ![]() Magic Name: Coup de Grâce Magic Type: Darkness Manifestation Tier of Magic: 1 Rank: 3 ![]() Coup de Grâce is a Darkness Manifestation Magic, in which one has the ability to control Darkness in general. However, this Magic differs from Darkness Manipulation in that Coup de Grâce provides for the complete control of Darkness in combat situations, through which she is able to engage in a variety of magic limited only by classification, possibly including Shadowmelding (Camouflaging) and Animation. This magic can be considered a Higher Order Darkness Manipulation, in which the Darkness and Shadows are able to be animated, for defensive, supportive, and offensive purposes. For Animation, one would not be able to materialize immobile objects for self-defense - rather, an Animation would entail the creation of "minions" to do Katelynn's dirty work. This Darkness Manifestation Magic would have a slight disadvantage in areas of high amounts of natural light. Techniques: 2/5 (2/2 Starting, 0/1 Earned, 0/2 Purchased) Shadow's Deceit - 1 Type: Defensive Range: Self Effect: Shadow's Deceit is a Camouflage technique - this technique would enable Katelynn to receive an advantage while in areas of relative darkness. This is manifested in an increased difficulty in discerning Katelynn's physical location in areas of relative darkness. It can also be said that Katelynn would be "blending in with the shadows". Having an Accuracy stat slightly below the value stated per rank would enable opponents to discern a fair bit of her location - much like a blur. The range of Accuracy Stat needed to discern a fair bit of her location is 5 below stat for ranks 1-5, and 10 below stat for ranks 6-10. If one could normally see in darkness, Accuracy stat required is 7 below stated amount. Rank Progression Shadow's Ambush - 1 Type: Offensive Range: [Rank * 3] m Area of Effect: [Rank] m radius Effect: Katelynn is able to manipulate the darkness in an area of relative darkness to engage in offensive techniques. Shadow's Ambush involves the use of the darkness in the area of relative darkness to form sources of attack. The attacks manifest themselves as attacks from weapons, most commonly with a blade, and they physically attack the victim as "floating weapons". The attacks can be nullified by escaping the area of effect. The extent of damage dealt is dependent on the rank of the technique. This is an Area of Effect, Instantaneous Cast technique. Rank Progression
Edited by Yovel, Jun 30 2012, 11:22 PM.
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| Levvins | May 6 2012, 04:15 PM Post #2 |
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*squishes fumloon*
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Ready to be critiqued. |
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| Giggles-mesh | May 7 2012, 07:05 AM Post #3 |
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Get Chance and Luck!!
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~ Definitely at least another 5 line Paragraph on your Physical Description ~ A little more too history wouldn't hurt either, Again, another Paragraph should be good. ~ Shadows Deceit: ~
You may want clean that up abit, since it says the same from rank 6 to 10. ~ Shadows Ambush: ~ You may want to tone down your Number of slashes per rank... Like may be Rank 1 and 2 have two slashes before advancing. ~ Tone down the strength of the slashes, try to have rank 10 remain under 110. |
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| Levvins | May 7 2012, 11:13 AM Post #4 |
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*squishes fumloon*
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Edited. |
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| Lightning | May 7 2012, 12:38 PM Post #5 |
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Steel your mind. Run on instinct.
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- Your physical description is still on the shorter side of what we like to see, try to add more to it. - You need more personality then what you have there, try to get another paragraph like the first one - Your first tech has some issues, for starters the fact that at rank 6 and onwards she is invisible even while moving and yet when she moves during the tech it’s disabled. Logic took a derp there I think. - The second tech needs some wording changes too, first of all you say they FEEL a gash etc but that doesn’t mean they get one. Is this what you meant? That they get no more then pain of a wound? Also you shouldn’t say the target is likely killed, that is wrong wrong wrong. The target is not most likely killed as it depends heavily on the target. |
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| Levvins | May 7 2012, 01:08 PM Post #6 |
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*squishes fumloon*
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I got caught in the middle of an edit there, but edited accordingly. I had forgotten to include the Stamina benchmark for the second technique beforehand. (and yes, I noticed the derp xD) Edited by Levvins, May 7 2012, 03:00 PM.
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| Aysia | May 7 2012, 04:24 PM Post #7 |
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A-Class
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► Place personality in a named spoiler ► Magic description
► Such as? A few examples would be nice
► How large are the slashes? Also, 10 slashes and four targets, is that 10 slashes on each target or spread out between them? |
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| 御 Cloud | May 7 2012, 05:24 PM Post #8 |
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Who you calling chocobo head...
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Reduce the size of your banner image, you're stretching the forum. |
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| Zen | May 7 2012, 07:06 PM Post #9 |
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If it's any help with re-sizing, Chrome modifies the size of images to the board and not vice versa, and, according to the code wizzle it's shrunk down to 90% of its original size. |
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| 御 Cloud | May 7 2012, 08:22 PM Post #10 |
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Who you calling chocobo head...
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Well, on Firefox it's not being shrunk. To change an image size without actually resizing it, use [img=x,y](URL here)[/img] instead of just normal image tags. |
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