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| Topic Started: Apr 24 2011, 06:19 AM (877 Views) | |
| Kiega | Apr 24 2011, 06:19 AM Post #1 |
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Account Name: Kiega Name: Atoi Aida Nickname: ?? Age: 16 Gender: Female Height: 5’2” Weight: 131 lbs Guild: n/a Class: D Affiliation: Light Physical Description: Having an average build, Atoi is neither short nor tall. She isn't thin as a stick either, but to be called big would be out of proportion. Her black hair barely passes shoulder-length, but is usually found clipped up. In the front, she has it combed mostly to the left. Her chestnut-coloured eyes do not stand out against her light tan skin. Atoi dislikes the use of any cosmetics if she can help it. It feels intruding on her body. However, she knows the benefits of having a good appearance, and works to keep her looks in a natural top condition. Clothing: Atoi likes to wear an amethyst-coloured sleeveless shirt that drapes to her left, but leaves part of her right side bare. Simple, black capri pants complete the look. The only time she cares much for her dress appearance is when waitress work is involved, or if there is a special occasion. If she must, she would find a dress to wear. If she can't wear what she usually does, Atoi would not mind wearing anything that isn't loose. Accessories: A belt that has a loop strap hanging to the right, and two plain clips she uses to keep her hair up. Extra: Picture: Sketch Personality If one has just met her, Atoi can be described as very kind and honest. She cares about first appearances, and it has become a habit to put up an innocent face. However, in actuality she can and will be blunt if needed. She cares about others, whether she knows them or not due to what her brother died for. Near those who know her, she always seems to have a displeased look even though to her, it's normal. After all, a smile is something to work towards. Atoi acts rash under dire situations, but because of knowing this, she keeps quiet and lets others make the decision if it's reasonable. Atoi can tolerate many kinds of people, including the ignorant, greedy, and selfish after seeing so many. However, she can't stand anyone who would make fun of those that gave their lives for others, and will personally resent the person or people until an apology is given. She doesn't look for attention, nor would she feed an egotist. Instead, she would rather give her opinion to those who choose to listen. If it seems needed though, she will intrude on a situation headed downhill without asking for anything in return. History History Weaponry/Equipment Sword (not to scale) Stats - 51 Strength: 10 Accuracy: 10 Stamina: 8 Speed: 8 Magic: 15 Stat Points Earned: 11/17 Arc Points Earned: 0/0 Jewels Earned 5,350,000/6,450,000 Sources ` April Event = 3 SP | 750,000 Jewels ` The meeting of three = 3 SP | 450,000 Jewels ` Perhaps Just Another Day = 1 SP | 150,000 Jewels ` November Birthday Appreciation! = 10 SP | 5,000,000 Jewels Skills & Disciplines: Atoi knows and has the skills of a waitress, including good reflexes to prevent dropping things, memorization, and being able to put up a welcoming act. She is no master swordsman, but she knows the feel of holding a sword and is able to use the basics. Magic Name: Mantra Magic Type: Support Tier of Magic: 2 Rank: 2 Magic Description: Mantras are buffs that temporarily give an effect depending on what the specific mantra is. Usually, a symbol appears above the affected person's body when under a mantra. There are two ways to activate a mantra on someone else. The target has to either accept it by saying "Yes" after the mantra user says "Accept" (when within range), or it can forcefully be placed by touch. There are no Mantras that exist with a purpose to directly or indirectly harm someone (although someone with a creative mind could probably make it do so). The duration of a Mantra is determined by the caster and type of Mantra. A Mantra will cancel out when the person affected moves out of range. Some Mantras are able to be maintained with others depending on the level of the mantras. (If a magic circle appears like it does in the anime, it would be wisteria-coloured). Techniques: 4/6 (4 + 2 bought) Mantra of Enduring Finale – 1 Type: Delayed Support Range: 1 person within 10meters (can do self) Effect: Has no effect while activated. If another Mantra ends while this is activated, this Mantra ends. When this Mantra ends, the person affected gains +5 Stamina for the current post. If used on another person, the range of the person from the user no longer matters for the delayed effect. Duration: 3 post (or when conditions are met) Cooldown: 4 post from usage Mantra of Buoyancy - 1 Type: Support Range: One person within 10meters (can do self) Effect: Makes those affected lighter and able to jump twice as far and high as normal. (less force needed against gravity). Duration: Up to 2 posts Cooldown: 2 posts Mantra of Reticence - 2 Type: Support Range: 3 people within 20meters (can do self) Effect: Silences the movements of those affected. Footsteps, limb movement, and any attached clothing are reduced to a slight whispering sound. Other equipment and body parts (hair, stomach, and breathing for example), can still be heard normally. Duration: Up to 2 post Cooldown: 2 post Edited by Snow, Nov 24 2011, 06:52 AM.
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| 御 linkrulesx10 | Apr 24 2011, 10:02 AM Post #2 |
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Ok, looks like a decent profile so far but there are a few things to be fixed up. Firstly can you please expand physical description and clothing, such as what colour skin and eyes as well as colour of the clothes, i love the little guy in the picture with the sign, made me laugh XD also for magic are you dead set on sleep as the only magic you have as it might be a bit handy to have a dew other effects as at low ranks you are not able to put people to sleep as it is pretty much lethal in a fight to collapse and sleep. you also start with 2 TP which means 2 rank 1 techs or 1 rank 2 tech. |
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| Kiega | Apr 24 2011, 10:59 PM Post #3 |
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Ah thank you. I had left the profile in 'edit' and went to do something else, but now I've added that. I believe it may be a little too short though... but not sure. I'm not sure what you're asking for concerning the magic. I changed the effect so that it wouldn't be overpowered, and fixed the technique count. Finally understood the TP system after you mentioned. Should this be moved to Char Creation? Edited by Kiega, Apr 24 2011, 11:00 PM.
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| Kiega | Apr 25 2011, 04:10 AM Post #4 |
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Edited magic |
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| Ghost6442 | Apr 25 2011, 10:29 AM Post #5 |
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Embrace Madness! It wants hugs...
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range 10 meters and how high? I suggest double |
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| 御 talon | Apr 25 2011, 04:59 PM Post #6 |
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Cool down duration.
Cool down? Number of target? One person or a number of people? |
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| Kiega | Apr 25 2011, 10:06 PM Post #7 |
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Edited. For buoyancy, it's for one person for now. Didn't realize I wrote "one people". Added cooldowns. |
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| Ghost6442 | Apr 26 2011, 01:44 AM Post #8 |
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Embrace Madness! It wants hugs...
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1/2 approved |
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| 御 Cloud | Apr 26 2011, 10:03 AM Post #9 |
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Who you calling chocobo head...
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