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What is your Longest RP reply ever?
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Topic Started: Jun 1 2010, 06:42 PM (1,504 Views)
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御 Jossle
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Jun 1 2010, 06:42 PM
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Swordsman & Swordsmith as One!
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I been wondering just how much is the average max post lenght you guys have even achieved this is mine. It's an excerpt from an old site me a dycho rp together
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Eliwood was cursing on his mind that makoto had revealed that little information, this could be quite problematic at this stage of the plan and the queen would not be pleased "Troublesome woman...you don't know what you have unleash" Eliwoood simply sat there as he remember how he saw the truth behind all truths
(start flash back)
Eliwood stood in the Princess chamber as he wait for the queen to arrive, he found it strange that he was called into the her daughters chambers instead of the audience room, she even asked him to tell no one of his visit even the brigade, he felt awkward for doing that but followed the queens command to the letter "must be really top secret if his majesty wish to speak to me in chambers" he heard the door open and saw queen been carried on a wheel chair by the princess (think of saber from Fate/Stay) and quickly rushed to her side "My queen! What has happened? are you hurt, I swear that whoe- he was stopped by queen hand who then grabbed eliwood chin smiling weakly "no one except time has hurt me my Lancelot, as you know I am no spring chicken but this is not why I have called you" the princess pushed the wheel chair to a small tea table and motioned eliwood to sit in front of the queen
Eliwood looked soberly at the queen knowing this was important "what is that you wish of me my queen? speak and it shall be done!" said eliwood with conviction at the queen who send him an icy stare "I want a heir to the hellsing house yet your wife seems reluctant to provide you with a heir and my patience is running thin with her" Eliwood instantly freaked out at hearing those word believing Lyn would be out in the guillotine and was about to speak when the queen raised her hand silencing him "do you truly believe that I am not aware that she has refused you various times, I understand your concern for her Sir Eliwood, I truly do but are you forgetting your priority, first comes England and then you" Eliwood resign to his fate as he would need to use force himself on Lyndis "if that is your wish, I will force Lyn to cooperate" the queen shook her head "that will be taken care of but first I must explain you the true reason of calling you" Eliwood raised an eyebrow at this "if its not my lack of heirs what trouble you my queen, then what is it"
The queen looked at her for a second and smiled at her as she was a beautiful woman with shining blond hair and she all the thing woman would die for, great body, wealth and power as well as she was trained by Zelgius in secret and she was as powerful as Eliwood. Princess Arturia had a blush on her face as she stole glances secretly from Eliwood. It was no secret to the queen that she had set her eyes on Eliwood and secret loved the Hellsing heir and for a time it seem Eliwood would ask for her hand as they both date for awhile but Lyndis came in a married with Eliwood during the aftermath of Julius death. Arturia hate Lyndis with a passion for that.
The queen said "Arturia, give me the book" Arturia quickly reacting to her mother command and coming back from her fantasies about Eliwood , handed a very old book to the queen "Here you go mother" said the princess as the queen took the book and put it in front of Eliwood "Eliwood, I believe you are familiar with the Perdragon Code " Eliwood just nodded not finding what this had to with anything "Yes your majesty, I was introduce to it during in my childhood as is required to all nobles to learn it so they can read top secret material but what has this come into place" the queen pushed the book forward and Eliwood took it and opened , at first sight I look a sort of unrelated poems but once he started using the Perdragon code to read it he found there was another meaning to this book, it was a book about predictions but they were extremely accurate it even used modern day terms, they depicted and revealed secret that totally changed Eliwood, he spent thirty minute to read the entire book that was massive as he seemly was possessed by a force to keep reading and then once done...he drop it as the queen had half smirk on her face "shocking isn't it? that book is the true book of revelations by John... what is on the bible is but a resume of it" Eliwood snapped from his trance as he rested his elbows holding head between his hands "...this is impossible, there is no way that book is false but the information is...so precise, everything is there...we are doomed" the queen put her hand on Eliwood's head and said "no, there is hope. You are our hope as you didn't notice something; you don't exist in that book " Eliwood looked up surprised "What does that mean?" the queen looked seriously at him as brought her hand back to her wheel chair rest and pulled another book exactly like the other "It means you are the variant as the Church choose to mix this two books to create the revelation book on the bible, making it so the faithful did not went into panic knowing that god kingdom would not come anyway after the suffering but as you just saw, god is not that forgiving" Eliwood nodded as he recalled the text "in the book he abandoned the human race and built a new world and left earth giving it to Satan as his personal playground" he shuddered at the horrible image that came with that book.
The queen continued as she handed the next book to Eliwood "now read this book" he did as commanded reading a much more pleasant book compare to the previous although still dark, a happy ending if you may and once he was done he found that both book had one point from which they deviated, it was may 26 of the year 2010 "That's just 2 years from now and when the U.S will declare war against China due to the use of chemical weapon on New york, the spark that will trigger the Third World War" the queen nodded "exactly, that's the vital point in the time line when one of this fate will be chosen and according to what I am seeing...death only awaits us as even if try my hardest I cannot do anything against this books predictions but there is a way to save mankind" Eliwood looked expectant as the queen simply pointed at him saying "you” and as expected Eliwood stood frozen "me?" the queen nodded smiling at his reaction " as I told you, you don't exist on eithier book meaning you are an unaccounted factor as there are certain events that happened because of your interaction...mainly the defeat of Julius"
Eliwood was surprised at this fact remembering that in the damnation book his father was an enemy and puppet of Satan who led the world to madness "so I am altering fate, but why me? am I Jesus or something like that?" the queen laughed at that "no you aren't but I believe that since your father was likely possessed by Magnus Evesor when he conceived you weren't accounted or expected but seems Yoko somehow managed to conceive you, probably trough her genetic alteration thus altering the flow of time as in the Salvation book Jesus is reborn and saves mankind as promised but the exact date is unknown. My late husband Arthur discovered this fact shortly before his death and we started planing a way to defy this prediction of the end of the third world war being a nuclear massacre, we used our power to lead you into becoming the man you are today so you would one day become my husband successor and guide the British army to victory in third world war....Eliwood what I want is you to succeed me to the crown by marrying my daughter and becoming The King Hellsing I" Eliwood stood frozen by surprise and Arturia blushed beat read. Eliwood had just been asked to become a king and commit adultery "but your majes-" again the queen silenced him "Eliwoood, I will be honest...Lyndis was not in our calculations, we expected you to notice the obvious but as always men are incredibly oblivious so I will point for you...my daughter loves since childhood and Lyndis knew this so she wanting your force herself married to you to avoid losing the race to your heart knowing that Arturia was going to confess to you during your victory feast over Julius defeat and knowing she stood no match in front of my daughter she proceed with her plan." Eliwood stood silent at this revelation as it know all made sense how Lyndis was so set on marrying on her home land as Arturia looked like a cheery "MOTHER!" yelled the woman as queen chuckled and continued "The real reason we were putting so much pressure on you was to test Lyndis's commitment to you as proper queen should follow his King without question in all matters and she failed in this matter as she is a great solider but not a queen but I will give her a last chance, if by the time the next underworld tourney which will be in 9 months she is pregnant or gives birth I will permit you to keep her as your wife and future queen, but if not...I will dissolve your marriage on the spot!" said the queen with force at the last part
Eliwood lowered his head as tear flowed from his eyes "so she manipulated me, after all this years of been used as puppet, I was again a marionette dancing for someone's tune…damn it! Can’t I have anything in this world, must everything be tainted by lies?! " Arturia instantly move to his side and rest a hand on his shoulder in a soothing manner as Eliwood took that hand and looked up "do you really love me? or is it an obligation for you my liege?" Arturia did not respond but kissed him on the lips surprising Eliwood who eventually went with it feeling the deep emotions of Arturia flow with the kiss and once they stopped she said "I love you out of my own volition my knight, I have always did and always will..yes our marriage would be greatly convenient for our plans but my reason for loving you is not that...I love you because of you were always there for me when I was a child, you even when you knew I was the princess you still treated me like a normal child, you let me be who I was, no crowns attached " said Arturia with all the love she could muster finally saying those words to her beloved. Eliwood knew there was no lie or his hyper-sense would activate and he knew deep down he love Arturia "Arturia...I am sorry I didn't notice you." whispered Eliwood as he then stood up and kisses Arturia with untold passion and once they were done Artruria said “I forgive you” leaving a silent ‘if you stay with me’ in the air which Eliwood caught on “always the queen sat there smiling at the couple, her smiled said 'worship me, for I am the goddess of matchmaking'
Queen noticed how Eliwood silently wrapped his hand around Arturia’s waist said “by your reaction I know what your going to say but I feel something bothering” Eliwood nodded to the queen saying “ I would like to keep to nine months waiting time but not to conceive with lyndis but I would like to try to have Lyndis and the other help us during the war effort , even if she betrayed me…she is still my masters daughter and fellow knight so if possible I would like to save them” The queen nodded given her approval as she then moved her wheel chair towards Eliwood and took his hand taking his marriage ring off “you won’t be needing this…now I will leave you to love birds alone… and Eliwood” this took the attention from Arturia “I am sorry I had to be the bearer of bad news but I wanted my grandson to be with a woman that truly loved him as Lyndis…same as her father loves the battlefield more than anything even you, but you knew that deep down didn’t you?” Eliwood looked at the queen and nodded “I knew it…it in her blood after all, same is in my blood to become judas of the mafia but this time it will be for the salvation of human kind as only us will know the truth yet as long as I can save this world and bring peace… I will be the villain and bare their swords and spears” The queen and Arturia both looked down at that, as no one will ever know about Eliwood’s sacrifice as both woman knew that Eliwood would be the villain in everyone eyes but it was the only way to save the world. The queen called a servant who quickly picked her wheel chair and pulled her out as she winked at her daughter before leaving “now don’t mind me I was just living for a peace convention on Belgium so feel free to use this room” both Arturia and Eliwood blushed at the queen’s implication as both of them stood in front of each other for a long while until Arturia took the courage and said it anyway “make me love to me Eliwood, my lancelot” Eliwood just closed in and kissed as the chaste kiss turned more and more passionate as both started heading to the large bed while they slowly shed each other clothing. Eliwood and Arturia became one that night and also in that night was the time Eliwood truly felt loved, as with Lyndis there was love but it was confuse one, at time they loved each other as lover and others as Siblings but with Arturia it was different it was the love given by the one woman of your life and know Eliwood understood what love was all about.
After their love making, both of them slept naked beside each other under a cover with Arturia latched to his scarred chest “I am going to miss you this nine months, why must you go away Eliwood, do you doubt your power or that our army that you need the aid of that…woman” asked Arturia barely containing herself from saying and obscenity “Do not be jealous Arturia, Lyndis has become nothing in my heart as only you lie in it now but is not that I doubt our victory is just…I wish this war to end faster so we lose as few solider as possible but even so I know we will be victorious” Arturia simply nodded snuggling to Eliwood warmth enjoying the moment
(end of flash back)
Eliwood was brought back from his memories when Dycho accused him about murdering children, which he did in the name of the crown and with a cold face he responded" yes I was there during the Mishima purge under orders from her majesty queen ninian, on contrary to you, a lose gun with no aim, I am a knight of the crown of her majesty and I must follow her commands even if I don’t like them" he simply sat there during his proclamation making some Mafioso sending him very dirty looks even some civilian but he didn’t care.
Yoko stopped in front of Dycho and with her head down said "what you saw...I won't denied, I killed Mishima Karasu under orders from her majesty but there is not a single day I do not feel guilty for his death" Lyndis looked away, feeling the guilt of Keichi’s death bearing upon her shoulder and her partial guilt into turning makoto against dycho"and as you know I killed Hanabishi Keichi, which eventually drived makoto into becoming that which you fought…I am sorry Dycho, I really am” Eliwood responded at them “you were following order you two, there was no thing you could do” Hector crossed his arm as he watched the exchange “I am surprised that makoto would pull so much effort in breaking you…but you do know that Makoto will now hunt you down, right?” said hector with his arms crossed over his chest
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Jun 2 2010, 06:52 PM
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Teh cuteness =3
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Meh, I know I did a longer one somewhere, but I can't find it..
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Their minds were so connected, so close to each other that it almost seemed they were a single psyche, a mind of its own. All the different feelings and sensations that were running through Lune were felt by Noel as well, much like everything he felt, was sensed by her. Their synchronization was so amazing, so outstanding and unbelievable that Noel knew it was nothing common even between the people that were in love with each other. This was something special. It was what true love was and felt like, it was a state of unimaginable bliss and happiness, a feeling that exceeded every word, picture, thought that would be able to describe just a tiny bit of what was going on between the young pair. They could hardly be called a pair, even, as they were indeed one together, two halves that could only be truly living their lives when intertwined and locked in the other half’s passionate embrace. And they would never be apart again, regardless of how much the distance or time would try to separate them.
”... Love... together...”
The beautiful sigh resonated through both of their minds and Noel closed his eyes. The world around them was just too unimportant, too insignificant to matter, no matter how much it had endeavored to make the moment perfect for them. Had Noel cared about whether the Nature was trying to make amends for what it had done to them in the past, he would have been amazed by the incredible scenery it had prepared for both of them. But Noel’s eyes were closed as the moonlight shone on the two silhouettes, embraced in a loving, tender hug, a soft and warm night breeze blowing through the partially open window, brushing their skin with refinement. The tears had already dried on his face and his chest was slowly heaving up and down as he breathed, the heart beating together with Lune’s all the time. He could feel tears were streaming down her face as well and she needed to say or do nothing for him to know they were tears of joy and happiness because they were finally joined together..
That only made him want to show her even more how much he loved her and he tightened the hug just a little bit. It was not much he could say or do to show her the deepness of his love, the infinite dimensions of that incredible feeling spreading inside and outside his body alike. But he knew she would feel it nevertheless because the vast plains of this sweet sensitivity were dedicated to her and her alone. He loved her so much.. that every moment he spent not thinking of her, every moment he did something other than just be with her, was a forever wasted moment. But a single moment could not be compared to all eternity, a time span Noel knew he was going to love Lune for.. He would have loved her even longer if that was even possible.
He didn’t know for how long his eyes were closed like that, all the feelings whooshing right through their bodies without them wanting it to ever end. He could tell, though, that many minutes had passed since he woke up and saw Lune sitting on the chair near the bed, but he knew that the time was of least importance. As he held her like that, finally opening his eyes, a single thought had managed to break in through the barrier of love he had built around him and Lune. It had triggered as soon as Noel set his eyes upon the white walls of the hospital room. Some memories were almost instantly brought back.. memories from the past, the reason why he loathed hospitals so much. He had avoided them ever since it happened and he had promised himself not to ever set his foot in them. Yet, falling into a coma was not something he could influence on and so he could do nothing against being rushed into the hospital. Despite that, everything would have probably been fine if it was just any hospital. But it was the hospital, the one it had all happened in.
Normally, that would have been the start of one of the most horrible hauntings that were chasing Noel whenever he remembered a really bad memory from the past. It did not matter if there was anyone nearby, it simply happened and not even BusterMan could stop it, despite knowing Noel for so long. Those flashbacks were usually the best just to wait over as Noel could not help himself getting out of them, nor could anyone else that would happen to be there at that point. Noel would be able to feel when it started, but he could never really do anything to stop it and depending on how bad the memory was, it could be more horrible for him and take longer than usual. This was one of such memories, but surprisingly Noel simply closed his eyes once again without being affected by it at all.
It was Lune, who had given him the strength to chase the memory away, knowingly or not. Her presence alone was enough for Noel not to be scared by the flashback like he had always been. It was not something he was controlling either, since he had been surprised by this sudden rejection of the memory and refusal to be affected by it, himself. After closing his eyes and letting the memory, which would have otherwise made one hell of a nightmare for the boy, slip out of his mind completely calmly, Noel's mind slowly began to process what had really happened. It wasn't only him, who pushed the memory away so easily. It was Lune's innocent love for him, her promise to always stand by his side and protect him just like he did for her. She may not have even truly noticed what had happened because she was already becoming more and more exhausted and tired. But still, Noel knew that her love, which was like a pure, diamond aura around both of them, was the one that saved him. How many confirmations of her love he had already gotten, yet every next one seemed to make him even happier than he already was.
During that state of happiness, he also came across a pretty ironic thought. Here they were, in the middle of the might, embraced on a single, narrow hospital bed, having finally gotten a bit of privacy to talk, and they were already caught in the deepest whirlwind of emotions they could have ever imagined even existed. It almost seemed like they skipped a few parts, but Noel was happy for that. He had waited for far too long and he did not wish to be separated from Lune any longer. Even the thought of not being with her was painful for his heart and soul, more cruel than the traps of life and the mysteries of death. And he knew that even if it meant he'd have to suffer for another decade, millennium, even hundreds of thousand years, he would have done it. For Lune.
His thoughts were interrupted as he heard Lune softly stutter: ”..I... I... always... alwa-... wi-will love... you... No... Noel... Always... always toge....ther...” Her mind was being filled with loving emotions and Noel could feel she was becoming more tired with every minute, much because she had been up for so long, waiting for him and then all of this happened. As her lips brushed against his cheek, his eyes fluttered open and he kept holding her as she blew her breath in his ear, breath full of love and tenderness. Her breathing was becoming deeper as she slowly drifted into sleep and her beautiful eyes closed slowly. Noel's heart was beating slowly alongside Lune's, never changing the tempo, while the boy looked at the girl of his life lovingly. She was so peaceful and quiet, so nice and beautiful. It was incredibly hard to believe someone as extraordinary and innocent as her could even exist in this corrupted and evil world. She was much too pure, much too perfect for any human being. He could have nearly imagined her, with soft, puffy, snowy white wings and a golden halo above her head; a sweet figure of a girl that had to suffer for so long in this cruel world when she could have been in heaven, suffer for the boy she loved so much, the boy who loved her back with all he got..
”...Love... you... No... el...” he heard a faint whisper of a sleeping girl still embracing him with unaware gentility. How could anyone have even thought about harming this beautiful creature? How could anyone have even dared to set their hands on her, much less do things to her, things that Noel had seen in Lune's memory..? He could not believe people without morals.. No.. Such beasts existed and even got through their lives so nicely. Why did things have to be so unfair? Why did the innocent ones always have to be the victims? Lune was really the last person in the world to deserve such pain and suffering, Noel thought as he watched her with sadness in his eyes. She was so cute, a sleeping figure of a young girl, her hands wrapped around body of a boy that watched her sleep, saddened by what she had to go through, but yet happy that she was now there with him. The words she spoke in her sleep were like a soft warm kiss right on Noel's soul. His body shivered as he made an almost purring sound of complete contentment and happiness as he whispered back, despite knowing that she was in deep sleep and couldn't hear him anymore: ".. I love you, too.. Lune..." He pressed a single, warm kiss on her lips even as she slept.
He was partially sitting, leaned against the back of the hospital bed. He now straightened, pulling himself into a more sitting position carefully as to not wake Lune. As he did so, Lune slipped just a little bit down, so that she was not pressed with her cheek against his anymore, but rather had her head resting on Noel's shoulder, which acted as some sort of a pillow. Her hands were still hugging him around the chest and he remained in that position so that she could sleep. He slowly pulled the blanket over her partially exposed body so that she wouldn't feel cold, then he brought his hand up to her hair and slowly stroked it as Lune slept, sensibly and with care. His chest was heaving up and down as he breathed in unison with Lune's and their hearts sounded together.
Noel could not sleep yet. He had woken up from the coma only a new hours ago and he was more rested than tired. He looked towards the window and noticed the moonlight was falling directly on them. In the light of the moon, Noel could see his beautiful angel, sleeping unworriedly on top of him. Her thin, fragile body that still had some features of Lune's once male body was slowly moving with every breath that escaped her partially open mouth. Her soft, silky lips were quivering almost unnoticeably as she probably dreamt about something before her mouth turned into a slight smile. Her eyes he liked to look into so much, were now closed and her long eyelashes rested on the top of her puffy, slightly pink cheeks. Her face was just so cute that it made Noel sigh with joy as he once again remembered they were really together now.
The two of them, two young, innocent angels wrapped in a loving embrace, one of them asleep with the other one watching over her as she slept. It was a beautiful sight indeed, something the Earth or the entire Universe rarely got to see. The only thing they lacked were puffy wings and halos, but they exceed any other angels in purity and innocence.
The time slowly passed and the moon began to move on the night sky. Noel did not know for how long he had been awake, fighting the tiredness that began to grab on him after a few hours as well. His mind was completely blank as he was not thinking about anything in particular. There was just a general feeling of happiness and contentment, of knowing that Lune really loved him and he loved her back. He knew that no matter what burdens the future life would make them carry, they would always stand by each other’s side and their love would surpass ever challenge, go around every obstacle and wipe out every dark thought.
As Noel slowly began to drift in sleep, his hand stopped to rest on Lune’s. He lazily struggled to keep his eyes open, but he gave up after a few seconds and closed them. It didn’t take him more than just a few more seconds to fall asleep, right after a thought crossed his mind:
”…I love you, Lune.. My love.. reaches out into the universe and even parallel worlds for you… Wherever you might be… I will always love you…
Always with me… Always with you…”
Noel had been sleeping at the time Lune was already awake. His chest was slowly moving up and down with every breath that escaped his partially opened mouth and his eyes were closed tightly. There was an expression of content on his face as he slept, as though there was nothing in his life for him to worry about anymore because there was Lune by his side and with her, he could breach any obstacle, dissolve any problem. His hand was still resting on Lune's hair, staying there since the time he had been stroking it when he was still awake. His body was partially under Lune's as she was somehow lying on top of him, but that didn't seem to wake him up at all. He had actually fallen asleep in a half-sitting position, in a lovely embrace with his lover and stayed like that for more or less the rest of the night, yet it seemed like it was completely natural for him to sleep like that, to be in such position, to be with Lune..
A lot of bad things had happened in Noel's sad life, so he had learned among other things not to be naive and trust everyone, to be careful and to always stay on his toes. If he hadn't followed these simple rules that he had set himself, he would have lost his hope of ever seeing Lune again a long time ago and his life would have ended a lot worse if he hadn't already died. Everything was always about trust; Noel had learned it the hard way that people were not to be trusted as they'd turn their backs on you and backstab you the first opportunity they got. But it was not just that. If only it had stayed at only that. Trust was the biggest mistake of Noel's life, he had trusted many times and been burnt because of it, but everything was still ok until.. And after it happened, after he had been exploited and used so much that even thousands of years of mind washing wouldn't erase these horrible memories, Noel had finally learned his lesson.
People are not to be trusted.
Such a simple sentence, yet it had caused so many troubles in the young boy's life. And so, after that Noel didn't trust anyone. There were people he believed and put more faith in than the others, but no one could ever reach Noel's heart. Not his best friend Shannon, whom he had known for many years and had always helped him and stood by his side loyally, not Zenaki Tenko, who he had actually cared for and had a special tie on him and even saved his life, not his brother Mike, who had always stood on his side and protected him despite being a criminal, even risking his life for his dear brother, no, not even his parents, the Delzoun's, were not trusted by Noel despite his multiple and year-lasting attempts to find them so that they would be able to tell him who he really was. But there always was an open spot in his heart. It always seemed to him it was waiting for someone to come and settle inside it for all eternity, it was waiting for something that was so right, something that was meant to happen. And that spot inside Noel's heart belonged to Lune.
That's why it felt so good and right for Noel to simply be with her. She had occupied that empty spot that Noel doubted will ever be filled. And even though he did not know her yet at the time they first met, he could not suppress that strange, nice feeling that erupted inside him whenever he saw her. His mind didn't have any say in this; the heart had decided a long time ago. It was just that it had taken him a very long time to realize what the true feelings inside of his body really meant. After all, how could he have known? He was just a child, confused and inexperienced, having already been tricked by both mean people and cruel destiny – it was completely normal that he was very cautious and vigilant whenever it came to such important conclusions. There was never anyone, who would help him or guide him through his life; he had grown up without his parents or even guardians, alone, all by himself. Such pitiless upbringing had forced him to take care of himself even as a young boy if he wanted to survive, and he had to learn everything by himself, the hard way, because there was no one who would direct him.
The result was what Noel was like at present time. There was much more, though, that compensated to the evolution of his character that was more complex than even he thought really was. These other factors had essentially influenced in what Noel was now different from Lune: on the outside, he was much more outgoing, friendly to everyone and optimistic at all times. People had always seen him like that and no one ever suspected what was going on beneath that perfect mask that made Noel one of the most popular Team Leaders ever elected. But in reality, Noel was quite similar to Lune on the inside, just that Lune did not tend to hide that as much as Noel did. Even though their past was similarly bad, it was not the same and those tiny differences made a few character distinctions between them. Nevertheless, they were both introvert and quiet by nature, they both loved their own peace and both preferred people left them alone.
They also both loved music more than anything else except each other, of course. Music was something Noel would be forever grateful to. It had introduced the land of eternal and most extraordinary harmony, a bridge between him and the good, innocent world he was striving to reach so much. The sad songs he sang with his beautiful angelic voice that glided over the minor scale melody with a slightly mournful tremolo made him feel safe and they comforted him in the times of need when there was no one else he could turn to. He would sing when no one was around to listen to him, all alone in the dark and cruel world, sitting in a lightless, moosy corner, pouring his heart out as he sang with every feeling he felt in his body, reaching out to the heaven and hoping someone would answer the desperate call. And the call was answered. The music, the heaven had taken mercy on him and sent him Lune, the most beautiful creature that ever existed. That was the best gift anyone could have ever given him and the happiness that instantly swelled in Noel's heart was so intense, so unbelievably infinite that there was completely nothing in entire existence that could possibly describe or even give name to what Noel felt when he simply looked at Lune. Lune.. His lover.. He loved her soooo much..
And that was the reason why the young boy was now sleeping so unworriedly, without any fear of being molested, harmed or exploited. The calm, almost completely silent sound of his breathing showed how safe he actually felt there, with Lune so close to him. Had any other human being came even 20 feet close to him while he slept, Noel would have not rested that soundly and he would have most definitely woken up. What was happening now was not something common at all; it was actually the first time in Noel's life that he would be sleeping (so) close to someone and not wake up every few minutes out of fear of being hurt. What was more, Lune was not sleeping only near him, she was practically sleeping on top of him, leaned on his chest, her face snuggled against his cheek. Yet, his sleep was completely undisturbed and to him, it was as though this was one of the most normal and natural things, something that was meant to happen and even meant to be happening in order for him to live.
It could not be any different and now that he understood just how deep his love for her really was, he would have had problems sleeping if she wasn't there rather than if he was sleeping all alone. And it was not only love, it was also trust. No matter how ridiculous it may have sounded to an outside listener, trust had been the trait that had constantly been weaving strings of Noel's life and despite how strange may it had sounded to anyone, Noel would actually sooner love someone than trust him. That most probably arose from the simple fact that he had never loved anyone in his life. He had trusted numerous of people and he had been hurt because of it even more times, especially that last time, when it was crucial for him to finally learn his most important lesson on trust. On the other hand, he had never been in love with anyone. That meant that it was so much more possible for him to be subjugated and in spite of him learning very soon in his young life not to be naive, he was still pretty vulnerable to that sort of thing. Emotions were never something he would truly understand and he had been trying desperately to get a hold on that part of human interaction and personal understanding, but he was simply never successful.
But he didn’t have to understand his own emotions to know what his standpoint to her was. Without even having to think about it, he knew that he was in deep love with her, such deep love that nothing could ever possibly come in between. But now he knew that it was not just that. He trusted her fully. She had filled that empty spot in his heart with something he had never felt before and could not feel with any other person in the entire universe. His heart had almost instantly adopted that special feeling and Noel had not even realized it at first; it was needed for his sub consciousness to find out exactly what it really was. When he was awake, he would not have thought he had begun to trust her as soon as he set his eyes on her. But now that he was sleeping, Noel’s sub-consciousness had realized what was happening beneath that layer of Noel’s mind and so it had assumed she was the only person he would ever truly trust. And that was why in that state of unawareness Noel didn’t wake up as he usually would have – because he trusted Lune and knew she was there with him, to protect him, to care about him, to trust him, to love him.
Like if it was some sort of a coincidence, a thought appeared in Noel’s mind during his dreams, just at that moment: ”Lune… I trust you… I would trust you my life, I would do anything you wanted me to, I would die for you…” Those words were unspoken, Noel simply sighed softly in his dreams as that thought ran across his mind, before he continued to sleep soundly. Nonetheless, if Lune was awake and perhaps even if she wasn’t, she would have heard that thought as it was sounding clearly as a drop in Noel’s mind, reflecting in Lune’s mind as well. It was truly a magnificent thing, that connection between their minds, it was something that could not be questioned at all – they loved each other so much, they were so connected, they were practically one, that it was mandatory and even logical for them to have it. And much like words could run through both of their minds, so could different sounds and pictures. And that’s how Noel’s dreams could now be transferred to Lune’s mind if she was paying attention to it.
Much like Lune’s dreams before she woke up, Noel’s were warm and nice as well. It was a rarity for him to have that kind of dreams, especially because nightmares were the most frequent way of his past-remembering. There were numerous of nights when he was afraid to lie in bed and close his eyes, afraid of what pictures and memories would be brought up in front of his eyes and then he wouldn’t be able to open his eyes anymore to escape. It had happened so many times that in the end, he was afraid to go to bed and sleep and it had not been uncommon for him to fall asleep out of sheer tiredness because he was simply awake for that long amount of time that he practically collapsed and fell unconscious due to exhaustion, falling into a deep, dreamless sleep until he would be woken up the next day.. And it felt so good to him not to have any sort of nightmares, that he practicised that more and more often until it became an unhealthy habit, which was also one of the reasons why he was so pale and skinny in the present.
But these dreams.. were nothing like that. They were dreams, because of which Noel could be forever sleeping.. if there was not Lune waiting for him in the real world. And despite how sweet and nice the dreams could possibly be.. nothing could ever be compared to what Lune was like in the real world, there, in front of him.. for him to see, touch, kiss.. He would have woken up gladly if he knew she was already awake and if he hadn’t had problems waking up in the middle of his dreams (except when someone he didn’t trust was around). But now it would have been even harder to wake up because dreams were enveloping him in a warm, soft blanket which pictured amazingly realistic but sweet dreams that appeared in front of Noel’s mind, pictures that Lune could see now as well.
The scenery was so familiar. Slow, dark river lazily running under an ancient bridge, a hill covered with wet grass and a few trees, navy blue sky filled with infinite bright star, their light shining down on two boys, lying under one of the trees.. One of them leaned against the tree, holding a neat, obviously well preserved guitar in his hands, while the other one lay on his back near him, staring up at the night sky. But there was a difference. While the boy with the guitar played his heart out, the notes sounding perfectly through the quiet night, the other boy began to sing with everything he got, his angelic voice fitting in entirely with the minor scale melody the guitar was playing. The most beautiful song echoed through the land with magnificence but it could only be heard by the two boys, two young lovers that loved each other so much.. to be able to compose something of such brilliance and glory out of pure love for each other.
The song lasted and lasted and none of them knew exactly how much time had passed when the song finally finished. But it didn’t matter anyway, time was of no importance to them. As the last note resonated through thin morning air, it was already dawning. ”..That was so.. amazing…” muttered the boy with the guitar, looking at the other one with young, innocent love sparkling in his eyes. The other boy nodded and he rolled over to the first boy and pressed a cute kiss on his left cheek. ”.. Ya.. It was the best that had ever happened to me..” As the first sunrays sneaked over the waking landscape, the boy with the guitar smiled. And then the other one smiled, too. It was the most beautiful sight the Earth had ever seen. Then the older of the boys stood up and he held down his hand for the younger boy to grab. ”.. Come, we need to go.. It’s already dawning.. Let’s go back to our home…” The boy with the guitar looked up, then his hand reached out and he intertwined his fingers with his lover, who carefully and caringly pulled him on his feet.
”.. I love you, Noel…” whispered the younger boy. ”.. I love you too, Lune..” came the response as they held each other’s hands and walked towards the bright sun…
… Noel’s eyes flickered a few times as the sun shone on his face. He wanted to see what was going to happen next, he wanted to see where the two boys were heading.. But the sun was just too bright.. The picture slowly started to fade away as his eyes began to open. He could hear a distant beep of his PET on the table, indicating that BusterMan had returned to it, though it wasn’t more than just a few seconds before the Navi logged into the internet again. It seemed the Navi didn’t really want to disturb that moment and so he rather disappeared. Noel was too sleepy to do anything and his mind was still processing the dreams, not yet thinking about the real world. He had a tingling sensation in his groin, which was quite usual for the mornings, yet now he was almost embarrassed by it, especially because it appeared it was triggered by the dreams he had. A distinct blush covered his cheeks for a few seconds before it disappeared.
As his eyes finally opened, though, there was the most outstanding sight waiting for him, something that made him almost forget the nice dreams that he had tried so much to remember just a few seconds ago. He almost lost himself in the bright green eyes that stared back at him, eyes that were so familiar to him, so sensitive, sweet, angelic, lovable.. If only there were words that could describe those eyes.. And they were telling him how much she loved him.. He could see his own reflection in her eyes, reflection that was telling her how much he loved her back..
And now he knew the dreams were nothing unreachable. All the doubts about this being just part of his imagination were forever gone. She was here yesterday, but she was here now. And she will be here with him forever. And there was nothing that could change that..
”Good morning.. Lune.. I love you…” said the boy as he planted a loving kiss on her lips, his heart racing with delight as he stared at his lover. She was really there.. And he loved her.. more than anything…
OR if you really want a long one, just look at this: http://s1.zetaboards.com/Fairy_Tail_Guild/topic/2859067/1/#new
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Hoennese and proud!
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Well I've exceeded the Zetaboards Word-Count with both a Character, their History (twice over) and his introductory post. I'll look around for them and post up excerpts when I can xD
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Jun 3 2010, 06:20 PM
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Are these things individual single posts? >.> While I don't mean to sound like a jerk, but I think my attention span wouldn't last through the whole post.
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Sep 10 2010, 11:05 AM
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I see you ^.^
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My Longest Post Ever On A Site Got Deleted >.< And i cant find the second longest so here is just my minimum on this bleach site i use to get on.
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Someone had called for Ikari. It said it was a meeting of the 5 greatest arrancar. As he and Baito gazed at the moon glimmering in the dust filled sky's of Hueco Mundo they slowly walked to where the meeting was to be held. Baito in his child form jumped on the back of Ikari and sat on his neck with his arms wrapped around his head. Baito gave a gentle smile as he starred ahead. Ikari gave a gentle smile as well but then sighed, because he knew that if he was called for a meeting it meant he would have to do some work.
He then dug his feet into the sand, to get ready to move a little faster because he knew he would have to get there soon and stop being lazy or his master would get angry. Ikari slowly closed his eyes, breathed in and let out a loud sigh as he re-opened his eyes and moved his lips saying "Baito" Ikari paused and then started to speak again, "I'm going to start going a bit faster. So hold on OK." Baito then nodded and said "Lets Get Going or the master will be mad at us ~Mu nay." He said as he put on a happy expression.
Ikari then sonidoed threw the sands of the Hueco Mundo or as he called it the 'Desert Of Hell'. As he got closer to the meeting area. He started to feel some spiritual pressures, some higher and a little lower. Obviously he was head in the right place. As he got closer he began to slow down and as he did he landed around where the meeting place was. As he landed Baito hopped of his neck and walked next to him. Before they opened the doors Ikari let out a sigh.
Ikari was becoming bored with nothing to do. As Ikari looked at Baito and gave him a warm smile he rubbed the top of Baito's head. Baito then smiled as well. Ikari then took his hand of Baito's head. He then slowly opened the door to the meeting place. As he looked around he saw some other arrancar sitting in the chairs as relaxed as they could be. Ikari then walked and sat in a chair in the middle of the table area and Baito sat on his lap. Ikari then had a blank expression on his face. Getting even more bored by the minute. He was tired of waiting around doing nothing. But then again he enjoyed it a little bit as well.
Though the more he sat around doing nothing the more he remembered his past. And the more he remembered his past the sadder he became and he kept realizing he was lonely. The only person he had in this world was Baito and his master. And he would do anything to protect them. He had killed everyone he ever knew but he vowed he would never hurt the people he had left. He was empty inside no love, and hardly any joy. He kept saying to himself 'We're born alone, we live alone, we die alone. Only through our love and friendship can we create the illusion for the moment that we're not alone.' He then closed his eyes and let out a short sigh, and re opened them slowly as he awaited for his master to speak. While Baito took a quick look around sitting in Ikari's lap looking at the other arrancar.
To him and Baito. Loneliness is truly the worst death there is....
~History Flashback~
When Ikari was born he had a very strong and demonic spiritual pressure that caused all around him to get slowly ill. When the doctors who just so happened to be Quincey first discovered that he was making everyone ill they tried to kill him but his parents wouldn't allow it. They asked why but the Quincey only sad this "He will kill you if you don't kill him" His parents weren't spiritually aware so they didn't know what was going on and why they would want to kill him. They noticed 5 years 3 months after he was born that he was making them sick when they started having heart problems and they where getting breathing problems as well as aging faster and suffering minor brain damage. Also because of this parents began to fear Ikari and called him a monster, a bad omen and a curse from hell, a freak of nature. They treated him badly and took care of him very little hardly feeding him. They constantly abused him when they felt like they where getting ill or called him a monster and told them it was all his fault. Ikari's personality began to snap he began to get more and more depressed it was as though he never experienced happiness once. His parents never ever told him that they loved hm not once. They never hugged him or held his hand they never tucked him at night or held his hand. His dad being the worst parent hit him and whipped him every day for the slightest of mistakes or slightest trouble he got in. His dad spit on him, literally and would tell Ikari that he hated and despised him. Ikari hated his parents with much rage, then one day his dad said should have just let the doctors kill you, Ikari was heart broken but as much as he thought he should he was a little happy a little happy that his parents didn't let them kill him.
Even though he didn't like his life he figured it was better then nothing. Two years later Ikari's mom died of an extremely bad heart problem and old age they said even thought she was only 32 years old, the Quincey doctors most likely assumed it was mostly because of his reistu. His dad then asked the doctors what was going on and demanded to know why his son was killing them and why they wanted to kill him, so the doctors told him. His dad blamed Ikari and whipped him and abused him more and more, he would hit him with anything he could fine pieces of wood pots and pans his shoes anything and if he couldn't find anything he would punch him in the stomach repeatedly.. Ikari would cry and hold his stomach in pain, his heart grew with sadness and anger. During this time Ikari would mostly stay in dark corners he would sit there and mumble to himself how he wished his dad would die but he didn't really mean it he was just mad and sad but the truth was he didn't mine being beaten or abused as much because even though he was slowly killing them they still took care of him even if it was only a little bit. Deep down he knew his parents loved him but where just scared and maybe mad at him. Ikari was a little happy at this time but then everything would soon change.
His dad wanted to use Ikari as a weapon, the Quincey offered Ikari's dad allot of money to kill Ikari and to do surgery on his body to try to see what was making his reistu so deadly, then they where going to take it and mix it with there own power to make them stronger. Ikari's dad greed and took the money, Ikari was taken by the Quincey and constant test was run on him day and night but it did nothing it just made Ikari angry and that made stronger. But he didn't care as long as it made his dad happy, he figured it was the least he could do for killing his own mother. It began to kill the Quincy, so they decided to kill him. Then one day when they where about to kill him they discussed it in front of him he heard what they said and he went berserk he grabbed on of there knifes and with out knowing it focused his reistu threw it it created a large blast which destroyed everything around him including the Quincy. As he went back home weakened, tired and hungry he found that his dad no longer lived there. He then went to the neighbors and asked where his dad was, then after months of searching and living on his own he found his dad. His dad was shocked that he was still alive, but his dad didn't care as long as he had his money, his dad wouldn't even let him in so Ikari would sit outside of his house and would eat the scraps of the food his dad threw away. He figured it was better then nothing.
Then one day as some of his fathers rich new gambling and criminal friends came over they asked why he was sitting out said his dad simply replied it wasn't important and not to get close to him.Then his dad and his gambling friends had an argument over some money that his dad owed them. They where about to kill him but Ikari heard the argument they where having and heard them saying get read to die, so Ikari rushed in he saw them about to swing and cut his dads head of with a katana. Ikari screamed his screams echoed of the wall and his reistu went crazy. Then as the man with the katana swung everything began to get slower. His resitu got bigger and started to expand to the people trying to kill his dad. All he wished for was for those people to die and not to hurt his dad. His resitu become visible it was red and took the form of a devils face with horns and black eyes bleeding dark red lines of reistu that resemble a person crying. Then the reistu rapped around the people trying to kill his dad and they began to rot and turn to dust. After which Ikari's dad was amazed and thank full and took him back in, but he was still afraid and his feeling of hate mixed with his feelings of fright and confused him and it just made him hate Ikari more so he still abused an treated Ikari badly but Ikari didn't care as long as his dad took him back in because to Ikari that meant he loved him. Then after awhile Ikari's dad had started to get ideas into manipulating Ikari, he would take Ikari with him and use Ikari to kill people that he owed money to. Ikari started to become bloodthirsty as well as crazy he was sad for killing all those people but he didn't care as long as his dad was smiling even if it was when he was laughing like a homicidal maniac. Ikari power was getting stronger and stronger by the day so his dad usually stayed far back away from him. Soon Ikari and his dad began to come the richest people in town and everyone feared Ikari and had started rumors about him being a demon, but he didn't care he had been called names all his life this was nothing to him.
A few years and some months later once Ikari was coming home for getting food for his dad he had found out his dad had fallen ill just like his mother. Ikari was also sad but happy because his dad wouldn't abuse him anymore but sad because his only family left was dieing. Ikari cursed himself he hated himself he wanted to die. He ran outside then he found a puppy. He took the dog into his house in attempt to cheer his dad up. His dad looked at Ikari with rage and grabbed the puppy by it neck squeezing it and squeezing it until it almost died. Ikari screamed for him to stop and grabbed him arm and tried to stop him. But his dad wouldn't loosen his grip. Ikari snapped he went crazy and grabbed a knife. His dad looked at him with a look of hatred.
Ikari then took the knife and stabbed him repeatedly. As the puppy fail and his dads grip faded along with his life. Ikari screamed he was sorry to his dad. And his dad said in a very hateful but soft tone that he was the worst son ever and that he should have killed him when he had the chance. With that being said from his dad Ikari snapped. He then burst into tears hugging his dog. His dog licked his cheek and was great full for Ikari saving him. Soon the people of the village came and saw what he did they called him a monster and kicked him along with his dog out of the village. He wandered for years to come not having a place or home stealing to survive to live he had no one and no family he was depressed he attempted to kill himself multiple times but couldn't go threw with it he was to scared. Even thought he didn't like his life he figured it wasn't worth killing himself over it. When he left home he took his dog and his dads cloth favorite brown.
2 years later Ikari was now 10 he was wandering and stilling to survive. He killed any type of animal he could to eat, he stool any thing that could help him live anything. This included water, food and the brown cloak he had taken from his house when he killed his dad. He traveled for a whole years threw the desert with his dog they where caught in constant sand storms and had many mirages and then one day they saw a village they thought it was a mirages it was very far away so all he could see is the tip of the village statue. And finally after a whole year of walking threw the desert they had finally come along another village. Ikari then felt re leaved that he found another village. After going into the village people called him scum and said he wasn't worth helping so they treated him just like his old village. Then one day while trying to still food from a lady's house he was stooped and hit in the head by a kendo stick, he was knocked out. When he awoke he saw a beautiful lady holding a knife he wasn't scared at this point in his life he was ready to die he didn't care about anything or anyone at least not anymore accept his dog.
The young lady smiled and asked why he was stealing from her and why he did it, after a while he told her the lady was touched by his story and wanted to do all she could to help, so she took him in and then months later she decided that she would adopt him. She was very kind and nice. After talking to Ikari she looked at him with a big smile and said, "since both of you parents are gone why don't you become my son." Ikari's eyes widened with hope and joy as he simply nodded in agreement he was so happy that some one was nice enough to take him in even thought he had told her that he even killed his own family. She didn't care and she wasn't scared of him. She looked very lovely, and treated Ikari with all the love in the world, she taught him everything even how to fight. It just so happened that she was a kendo instructor and the best one in the village. Then one day Ikari's powers started to become stronger and he began to see spirits he began to get along with them and even made a new friend then person was a shiginami sure he was slowly killing everyone that he was around but he had learned to control it to some extent where it wouldn't kill them as fast it normally would. But as for the shiginami It was against the rules for him to be friends with Ikari since he wasn't a spirit, but after sometime they became friends anyway after a while Ikari told his mom that he could see spirit. She simply nodded and said "i know i can see them to, Ive always known that uve had a deadly reistu and that you would eventually see spirits but i loved you and took you in anyway. From the 1st time i saw you, because i can see them to as well as your dog". She put a smile on her face and rubbed his head softly. To him Ikari was the most important thing in the world and for Ikari she was, he loved her with all of his heart. He always wanted to be with her forever and ever.
Ikari was re leaved he wondered why his mom wasn't being affected by his powers. She then taught him about shiginami and soul society. And how she knew about it even though she was only human. It was because she also knew that shiginami and it was because she was his wife. He had died years before Ikari even came to the village he was killed in a house fire protecting Ikari's adoptive mom, when he was sent to soul society he some how still kept all of his memories, and asked to be put in the human world in that village. And because of his strong spiritual pressure and being around his wife also known as Kaley Doki, Ikari soon adopted her last name and disregarded his name he was no longer a member of the Kurnai family. Ikari was happy very happy for the 1st time in his life. But soon that all changed 15 years later when a hollow attacked him and his mom one night on a way from the store. His mom fought back bravely and was extremely injured she couldn't move Ikari tried to help and his dog rushed and bit the hollow on his mask. Ikari was scared he didn't know what to do. Then the hollow smacked Baito away and killed him Ikari was sad he grew angry. Then the his shiginami friend arrived an tried to fight the hollow but the hollow was to strong, so he ran and left Ikari and his mom to die. Ikari hated him for that and got angrier and his power began to manifest.
He shot a blast of reistu at the hollow nearly killing it. Then he shot another blast as the hollow used a cero it created a big blast killing his mom and the hollow as well as the shingnami and him. Soon Ikari became a spirit and wander the world looking for a new home he was then attacked by another hollow and met another shignami, at the same time The hollow him and the shiginami fought he killed the hollow but the Shignami feared him and thought that he was some type of evil spirit, so the shiginami attempted to kill, Ikari became depressed and sad he wanted to kill the shiginami, so with a quick move he yanked out his chain. His reistu fluctuated and then he turned into a hollow turned into a hollow.
After becoming a hollow Ikari fought and killed the shignami after a long and tiresome battle they where matched almost blow for blow. Ikari broke the shignami's arm and disarmed him of his sword then as he tossed the shignami in the air he gazed at him with his pure black eyes of bleed red and his devil like body was frighting it resembled that of a crying red devil, the shignami stared back with fright as his life raced before his eyes, Ikari shot a cero that obliterated the shiginami in one hit and destroyed the landscape and almost the whole village, saddened confused and heart broken he opened a garganta out of pure instinct and went to Hueco Mundo. Then he began to eat hollow after hollows and human after eventually becoming a menous.
Thanks to his spiritual pressure he was a very strong hollow and was very hard to even put a scratch on him during a fight. After becoming a menous he could remember his past as a human and as a hollow because of his strong spiritual pressure. He got more and more depressed. But he steal had a little love left in his heart that reminded him of his mother. Then one day he went to the human world to eat he was tired of eating other menos and when he went to the human world to get something to eat he was tired of eating other menous.
When he went some other menous followed. Once he got there along with some of the other menous they started attacking humans. After which a shignami appeared this shignami was his adoptive mom. Ikari stared at her with eyes of hope and joy but when he lent in to try to hug her she attacked him. He didn't know why but if he ddint fight back she would have killed him so he fought back and used a cero he nearly killed her he was about to go back to Hecodo Mundo but then the other Menous came and tried to eat his adoptive mom he fought them and ate them but when he looked to see if she was OK she was dead she had gotten hit in the cross fire with the battle with the other menous.
He then got even more depressed and went back to Heco Mundo and began to eat other menous to become stronger. He blamed himself for his moms deaths both times. He took his mind of the pain by eating other Menous After which he eventually became a Adjuchas then soon became a Vasto Lordes after which he traveled with other Vasto Lordes who where eventually killed because of his reistu a after which he ate there body's and became even stronger. After a while he eventually ripped of his mask and became a arrancar.
After becoming Ikari wandered Hueco Mundo the soft and bloodthirsty sand of Huceo Mundo alone and said. After which 1000 sad and lonely years later his soul was split in 2, he dosent nkow how he just fainted and when he woke up it was a dog licking his cheek that boy then turned into a boy and started to tell him that he was apart and a manifestation of his soul his power had grown so large that it was actually apple to create a second person out of him and then the boy said that they would always be together forever. He became friends with the other half of his soul and they lived peacefully Ikari then came up with a name for him he named him Baito.
But then one they when they went to the human world they where attacked by shignami and Baito was injured Ikari got mad and grabbed Baito and held him tight as his instinct kicked and he said Feel My Pain, "Lloron Diablo!". Then his power exploded, he had took on a new appearance and had new skills he instantly knew how to use them and was ready to fight and he fought to kill. He had released for the 1st time. He nearly killed all the shignami but as he was fighting them he kept getting more depressed because ever time he went some where someone wanted to kill him. He then entitled his powers Horseman's Crucible.
He then killed of all the shignami after one tried to bind him with a kido spell, he got angry and killed them all. When he was done he had killed atleast 20 of them but they where nothing more then rookies and 2 vice captains. After which he returned Huceo Mundo with the shignami's bodes where he layed all the body's down in a big pile. He came out of resurrection and him and Baito began to eat the shiginami's lifeless cold body's and Baito became better. Then he was slowly approached by another arrancar the arrancar saw how many body's he had and was impressed.
The arrancar took Ikari became his sensei he then learned how to control his spiritual pressure as well as make it so that his reistu wouldn't affect anyone into he goes into his resurrection. And control his resurrection better. As well as his resurrection powers and blood-lust. He even told Ikari what his resurrection resembled. Then one day on a trip to the human world with his arrancar teacher they where attacked and Ikari and Baito had no choice but to fight. They won but there teacher was killed. Ikari and them where lonely again. He was then taken in by the arrancar leader and given his teachers rank and now works for the arrancar and arrancar leader and wants to help his master achieve his goals and so that he can be stronger so that he will no longer be alone. But as for now Ikari and Baito still fill lonely.
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Sep 28 2010, 06:24 PM
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Shadow! Gaia! 13! The greatest dude around!
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this is my longest post *nods* not very good, but hey, its my longest >.<
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Kyo was laying in the shade on top of his home, drinking sugary drinks and eating ice cream. He found today to be warm and sunny, two things he hated. He preferred clouds and storms, maybe even rain. Kyo was tired of all of the hoopla he was getting, just because he was one of the fastest Chuunin around doesn't mean he had to play errand boy.
He hated push-overs, he just wanted to relax and have a seat doing nothing. He lived in a apartment that had 3 other rooms besides the landlady and Kyo. There was the Ukata family, the father Tirun (41), his wife Momo (38) and his daughter Hiruka (7). They lived right below Kyo, since Tirun was once a Jounin who got injured during one of his missions, so he can't walk right. Kyo looks after Hiruka when Tirun & Momo go out for special days.
Then there is the twins who live together. Mizumi and Izumi (18), they where Chuunin, and when they left on missions, he would look after their cat Miko. Izumi has a crush on Kyo, but she's too shy to confess to him, and his too dunce to notice her feelings. Mizumi tries to tell Kyo how Izumi feels, but everytime she says "She likes you!" he thinks she means as a good friend, for looking after their cat. He would always say the same thing back, "I like her too! As a cute little sister~".
Then there was the last room. This one belonged to a single man named Rimu (23). Kyo doesn't know much of Rimu, since they haven't spoken much. He doesn't even know what he does for a living. Kyo only spoken to him during supper time at night, and at morning when his leaving to work or train. Kyo doesn't like the fact that Rimu doesn't talk much, or even likes candy.
Of course, there is the landlord and his wife and son. The landlord is named Yuriha(53), his wife Nima(54) and his son, Chasou(13). Chasou and Kyo are friends, they eat candy after supper on the roof, looking over the village at night. Sometimes, they even comment on the women who walk by the apartment complex. Nima treats Kyo like her own son. She finds him a gentleman and a good big brother to Chasou, sometimes, she gets him to help around the apartment, and he does reluctantly. Yuriha teaches Kyo in the art of being a gentleman and a fine young man. Basically, the Touhma family adopted Kyo as one of them.
As Kyo is laying in the shade on the roof of the apartment complex, a strange chubby little bird comes flapping its wings towards him. He opened one eye to see what was going on, then he saw it. A chubby little bird sitting on his chest. "Buzz off!" screamed Kyo, making a sudden movement, to scare it off. "I have the day off! I don't need this crap!" continued Kyo, throwing garbage at it, trying to scare it off for good.
The fat little bird stole one of Kyo's pieces of candy, a nerve was struck when that happened. A small vein appeared, right above his left eye. "NOBODY STEALS MY CANDY!!!!!!" screamed Kyo, jumping from side to side, trying to catch the bird, but it started to fly off towards the training area. "HEYYYY!!!!!" screamed Kyo, jumping off the building and reaching for it, just narrowly touching its back feathers. The chase was going on for a couple of minutes. Before Kyo could realize where he was, the chubby little bird lands on his shoulder and drops the candy.
Kyo looked at the candy, he picked it up, nibbled it, and looked at the bird. He then noticed a little piece of paper attached to its leg. He took it out and looked at it. He had to look for a guy named Renjiro. It had a picture of him with the letter. After he looked at the picture, the chubby bird flew off. "Stupid bird..." mumbled Kyo, then he looked at a baby standing next to two guys and a girl. "Renjiro?" asked Kyo, looking at the oldest man.
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Castiel
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Oct 3 2010, 06:32 AM
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I see you ^.^
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- Jun 2 2010, 06:52 PM
Lol i just looked at that and when i went to the bottom it said he only got 3 sp lol.
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Jan 14 2011, 08:50 AM
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Jing shook his head and felt Pitr’s sadness although he could not see him. He had no time for wondering what was wrong for before him stood Blood. Blood smirked as she saw Jing stir from his sleep, “A well rested mind is more fun to rape.” She said plainly as she literally clawed her way into his memories. She did not notice the force guiding her as her intrusion led her to the one memory Jing kept hidden deep down inside his mind from everyone even himself…
Her name… was Cassis…
She was a beauty without compare and truth be told she was Jing’s first love ever since he was the age of five. He had met her in the village where he and his mother had settled down before Jing had become an orphan and started fending for himself. After his mother had died Jing had become the defacto outcast of the village forced to live in a rundown shack on the outskirts of town. Only four people came to visit him almost on a daily basis. Three of them were town kids who thought of him as their boss trying to please him by showing off their talent at thievery. The other had been her… that angel of angels.
She always carried around a wooden bat and dressed like a boy just so she could see him without people recognizing her. Despite this Jing had always been stricken by her beauty… and on more than one occasion that bat she carried around.
Jing wasn’t sure why she kept visiting him… she always acted like she wanted nothing to do with him and he had believed he wanted nothing to do with her.. But it all became clear on the day that the village girls began disappearing. Eventually Cassis was stolen right out of her bed. Jing didn’t think twice before he headed out to the woods tracking down the trail of the magical being that had taken Cassis. He would make them pay for stealing her… his Cassis.
He tracked them down… and he found them. Using the blade his mother had left him he sliced through the nature elementals that had stolen her from him. He cut them down without mercy. However it was his first battle and he did not get through unscathed. He was heavily scarred and bleeding pretty badly when he returned to the village looking like he had just returned from hell itself with the girl that everyone was panicking about. He had hoped they would be happy that they would thank him…
How foolish he was.
Cassis’s mother took the girl from Jing’s arms and yelled at him accusing him of taking her in the first place. No one cared that he was hurt. No one cared that he had returned her safely without even a scratch on her. All they cared about was that he looked guilty. All they cared about was that they could blame him.
That was one of the few times Jing had ever cried. He wept in anger and in despair. It was at that point that he left the village and his childhood behind. He hoped never to see any of them again. They had called him a monster and a thief. He was going to prove them correct. He was going to become the best there ever was.
Years had passed and Jing had built himself a reputation. He had all but forgotten about his past and he was growing cocky. When he heard that a new and rising singing sensation was carrying around a treasure of great worth he became determined to steal it.
It was all going as planned. His gang of bandits moved without mistake. They had taken out the guards without killing them and he had easily snuck past all the magical security measures. He kicked down the door of the singer and demanded that she give him her treasure.
What he had not realized until after he gazed upon her was that the singer was Cassis.
She stared at him and he at her for seconds that passed like years. All the emotions that he had forgotten rushed back to him and he for the first time in his life faltered. That was all Cassis had needed. She grabbed a blunt object nearby and rushed Jing driving the weapon into his skull knocking him out.
When he had recovered he was laying on a bed his shirt missing and an ice pack on his head where a throbbing pain persisted. He looked around and saw that Cassis was standing by the window watching him. “I didn’t know it was you… Not until I saw those scars…”
“Yeah… well you still hit like a guy.” Jing said cracking a smile.
“and you are still the most arrogant stupid idiotic boy I have ever met.” She countered her own smile betraying the harsh tone she was trying to put on.
They stared at each other in silence so Jing stood up and walked over to her. “I am glad you are ok…When I left I never found out if you were still yourself. Whether those creatures had harmed you in some way I couldn’t see… Cassis…” Jing started but was silenced when she rushed into him and kissed him.
It was soft at first then slowly grew more passionate. Jing returned it and for once found himself truly enjoying the company of another woman. Despite the many women he had tasted over the years his hunger persisted yet this one kiss took that hunger and satiated it. He wrapped his arms around her and hugged her close not wanting to let go.
“Just shut up… You always talked far too much.” Cassis said plainly looking into his eyes with her own full of something that Jing could not recognize.
He learned that night what love looked like.
After that night Jing followed her everywhere he abandoned his gang of bandits and went on tour with Cassis as her personal body guard. Their relationship deepened. Over time they began to trust one another. However they were always afraid to take that final step. To go that extra mile and make their relationship solidified with what others would call an act of love.
That all changed when Jing saved her from a particularly nasty vampire. He had not gotten out of the fight without injury. The creature had gotten him good in his side and after it was all over he had passed out from pain and exhaustion. When he awoke his wound was cleaned and dressed and Cassis had prepared a washcloth and water for him. “Don’t move… you might reopen your wound.” She ordered and Jing just did as he was told.
He let her clean him enjoying her gentle touch and the occasional warmth of her hands on his naked body. The water was pleasant but all Jing could think about was how much he cared for Cassis and how he wanted to prove it to her somehow. Cassis started to wash Jing’s face but he brushed the cloth aside and pulled her close into a kiss trying to tell her everything without words. She pulled away from the kiss and just stared into his eyes with that same love that he had seen for the longest time.
What followed after was a night of sensuality of love and passion unlike any Jing had ever experienced. He was not sure how many times he had her but every time he did he had only wanted more. When the sun rose he was still holding her their bodies seemingly as one. He could do nothing but stare at her sleeping face.
She was beautiful. She was beyond beautiful she was divine, and without a doubt she was now his to have and to hold in sickness and in health… till death do they part.
Then it happened. The tragedy occurred three months later.
“Jing they are coming!” Cassis said as she wrenched open a door to the moonlit outside world where rain fell lightly drenching her as the gloomy light cast from the sky highlighted her long raven black hair and the blue dress she was wearing. A shadow cast figure came running from the body he withdrew his weapon from, a dagger held in his hand blood still dripping from its blade.
A man who looked just like Jing did whenever he turned twenty one ran up to her and spoke, “It’s you they want Cassis just...!” his last word was inaudible overcast by the sound of people screaming from one floor below the smoke rising through the wooden floorboard casting a gloomy atmosphere mixing with the moonlight to make what appeared around them to be nothing more but an illusion from the past.
“I know Jing… but I am not leaving without you!” Cassis cried out ignoring the sound of the oncoming enemy.
Jing looked into her misty blue eyes and in them he saw the love she held for him. He looked back beyond the smoke and then turned to her and nodded, “Let’s go.” He took her hand and lifted her into his arms before bracing his foot against the wooden railing of the rain soaked terrace.
“I see the sacrifice!” he heard a voice cry out and without a second thought he jumped holding the woman tight. They landed badly Jing losing his balance on the muddy ground.
Jing put the love of his life down and took her hand tightly in his. A small smile on his face he pulled her with him running through the dark village which was lit only by the now burning buildings. As they ran the sound of their pursuers foot steps haunted their proceedings and the sweat that ran down their faces mixed with the water that now soaked their faces and their clothes.
Together they ran the hooded figures close behind them but neither Jing nor Cassis looked back for fear of being too scared to look away. Jing pulled her with him but the screams, the rain, and the fire that burned without looking hampered by the wate,r confused him. Every road, every building they all looked the same.
“Jing…” the woman whispered as they stopped seeing more hooded figures in front of them. They turned around and the figures that had been chasing them formed a wall of black robes blocking off escape from that direction. Jing looked around quickly and saw an unblocked path which he pulled her with him down. The thick smoke hardly hindered their progress but still they stopped dead when the came face to face with a blazing wall set aflame.
Jing had led them down a dead end alley, they realized far too late and when they turned around the robed figures were standing there the smoke spread away by their very presence as if afraid. Jing held Cassis protectively rain continuing to fall the fire illuminating them in that moment catching the fear and the desperation mixing in his eyes.
“Leave us alone! You can’t have her!” Jing yelled to the figures but his words fell on deaf ears. One of the figures lowered his hood and upon his face was a jade mask contorted into something too horrible for words. He extended one hand palm facing upwards as if expecting payment for something.
“Dormu celesti aparati.” The man said and a silver fire came up from his hand and rushed forward racing straight towards the couple.
Jing pushed the Cassis behind him and spread his arms in a wide protective gesture gladly willing to take any blow for his girl. “No!” Cassis cried out and to both their amazement the flame arched over Jing striking the woman directly in the middle of her chest.
What happened next brought great sadness to the horrified Jing as he watched the Cassis's soul lift directly from her body sadness in its eyes as it passed through his body struggling to get back to him. “Cassis!” Jing cried out once more everything else becoming inaudible as he reached for her and she mouthed words he did not hear. He felt her intention and nodded as if saying he felt the same way and watched as she was pulled into the mask.
The cult of the flesh came for her that day and despite all Jing did they had claimed her soul taking her away from him in the most horrible of ways. Her final words were never heard.
Jings eyes widened in realization and he stared into Blood’s grinning face. “My love… my child… They were both taken from me… I could not protect them…”
“Yes the cult of the flesh served us well.” Blood said and Jing stared into her eyes uncomprehendingly. “Surprised? What else would such a cult worship? My mother Ruler of Carnal sin. Desire of the flesh. She ordered the soul of your beloved Cassis taken.”
Jing looked at her and screamed in despair and anger all the emotions inside him flaring up all the doors of his memories opening at once until it overwhelmed his mind and he passed out seemingly dead.
“You now see the truth. The reason behind your curse. The pain inside your heart. Let it take you over let it transform you.” Blood said trying to control Jings mind with her claws. However what she heard inside his head was a melody. Like thunder and wind and fire rolling into one. She tried to pull away from Jing’s mind afraid to get caught in that torrent of emotion but something held her there. She heard a voice in Jings which were Victor's last words as he faded away to join the wash of power that came over Jing. " As of this day, what I can give of my power is yours to use as you must. My final gifts old friend, use them wisely." Then to her horror Jings’ eyes snapped open and he began to sing his voice filled with anger and regret,
“Everybody’s always talking at me, Everybody's tryin' to get in my head I wanna listen to my own heart talkin' I need to count on myself instead.”
As Jing said those words Blood felt herself thrown from Jing and could only watch as he kept singing slowly descending down from the wall his entire body becoming engulfed in tainted flames of his own soul.
“Did you ever… Lose yourself to get what you want?”
Jing’s body became slightly more muscular and adopted a dancers build most of the scars disappearing leaving behind only faded memories of their presence.
“Did you ever… Get on a ride and wanna get off?”
His face became more handsome almost impossibly so and his eyes became an even darker shade of grey devoid of emotion despite the look on his face. In addition as Blood became lost in those endless pools of grey she saw a distant spark of red that reminded her of a fire burning on a distant horizon.
“Did you ever… Push away the ones… You shoulda held close?”
At that moment sprouting from his head were great curved horns like those you would find on a ram. The horns had a spiral pattern to them and were the color of gold mixed with blood. His ears becoming pointed like those you would find on a demon or another humanoid patron of the abyss.
“Did you ever let go? Did you ever not know?”
He grinned revealing his teeth to be pointed like daggers and he ran his tongue along them revealing it to be forked like a snakes. His hands seemed almost delicate and soft to the touch but each finger held a claw like nail that seems to be more steel than bone.
“What are you going to do?! I won’t let you escape! My mother won’t let you escape!” Blood yelled drawing her whip and attempted to beat Jing into submission.
“I’m not gonna stop…” Jing declared grabbing the whip with one hand. “That’s who I am!” He pulled the whip from bloods hands tossing it to the side and walked towards her like a predator would approach its’ prey.
“I’ll give it all I got, That is my plan!” He sang loudly so that it would drown out Bloods scream as he drove his clawed hand through her chest ripping out her still beating black heart. Bloods eyes looked to the organ sitting in jings palm and gurgled up blood as she watched him devour it taking her power as his own.
Jing wiped his mouth of the succubus’s blood and walked towards the door continuing his song.
“Will I find what I lost? You know you can…” He paused as he kicked and broke through the door of his cell and screamed to the echoing hall,
“Bet on it!” “Bet on it!” “Bet on it!” “Bet on it!”
He turned and started towards where his newly discovered senses detected the greatest amount of demonic energy knowing that was the location of the one who had caused him so much grief.
“I wanna make it right, That is the way! To turn my life around, Today is the day! Am I the type of guy Who means what I say? Bet on it!”
“Bet on it!”
“Bet on it!”
“Bet on it!”
Jing paused as he reached a spiraling staircase leading upwards and began to ascend before starting the next verse of the song.
“How will I know If there’s a path worth takin'?”
He paused hearing foot steps drawing closer.
“Should I question every move I make?”
He climbed the surface of the wall and waited for the enemy, two more of the radiant sisters, to pass below him.
“With all I’ve lost my heart is breakin'.” He said in barely a whisper before dropping onto the two unsuspecting succubi. He tore, he slashed, and he stabbed and ripped. Neither of the two had a chance to scream before he had left them as a bloody mess on the stairwell. Shuddering with a carnal sense of delight at the feeling of the kill ascending up the stairs again,
“I don’t wanna make the same mistakes” he said when he reached the top floor and saw three more of the radiant sisters standing in his way. They brandished their weapons threateningly their demonic auras flaring up significantly. All Jing could do was chuckle as he held out one arm gathering his dark energy around it.
“Did you ever… Doubt your dream will ever come true?”
The energy began to take shape.
“Did you ever… Blame the world but never blame you?”
As the energy gathered and took shape the sisters energy somehow was drawn in leaving them dizzy and weak before they even realized what had happened.
“I will never… Try to live a lie again!”
The energy condensed into a shape resembling vaguely a fox shaped arm mounted cannon whose muzzle was glowing with the dark energy Jing was charged with.
“I don’t wanna win this game If I can’t play it my way!”
He fired the weapon and with a blast that could level a small town blew away the radiant sisters blocking his path walking through the smoke and ash as if it did not bother him in the least. With a smirk at the now demonic looking Familiar cannon which seemed to be grinning with satisfaction he continued forward his song seemingly loud enough to be heard for miles around.
“I’m not gonna stop, That’s who I am!”
“I’ll give it all I got, That is my plan!”
“Will I found what I lost? You know you can…”
“Bet on it!”
Jing paused smelling the air as his voice echoed into silence.
“Bet on it!”
“Bet on it!”
“Bet on it!”
When the last of his voices’ echoes had died out he took off at a sprint and broke down a door from which he had smelled something that he wanted. There standing before him was his gear which had been confiscated from him, and standing in his way was Sherry.
“I wanna make it right…” she said moving aside for Jing allowing him access to his gear. “This is the way…” she added as Jing donned his sling blade and his coat as well as his boots all of which underwent extreme changes in design the moment he put them on. It felt good to have his gear back, it filled him with such a lust… for blood.
“To turn my life around, Today is the day!”
Jings’ eyes looked to Sherry filled with a need to kill to slaughter and to maim.
“Am I the type of guy, Who means what I say?”
He threw her against the wall and extended his sling blade.
“Bet on it!”
He grabbed sherry by the throat and squeezed earning a pathetic whimper from her.
“Bet on it!”
He positioned the sling blade over her heart and drew back his arm.
“Bet on it!”
Sherry cried tears of agony which rolled down her face and onto Jings sleeve.
“Bet on it!”
Jing looked upon her face and something inside him felt great joy. He wanted to hear her scream. He wanted to cause her agony. He wanted to taste her blood on his sword after he had pierced her heart with it. He wanted so many things that he felt deep down more like an animal than a person. Without hesitation he drove the blade straight at her…
“Oh…hold up.” Came a voice from deep inside the animal mind of the bandit king.
Sherry opened her eyes to see that the blade had barely missed her by inches and that Jing was backing away retracting the blade.
“Give me the room to think!” he said lightly as he spun around slowly trying to push the room wider with his will alone.
“Bring it on now.”
He extended his blade once more and slashed at a nearby vase looking at it as he sloppily cut it diagonally. “Got to work on my swing…”
He turned around and started to exited the room a different air about him now.
“Got to do my own thing!”
He declared and stopped walking in front of a mirror turning to face it.
“Oh…Hold up.” Said that inner voice once more. That voice that sounded human.
“It’s no good at all To see yourself and not recognize your face.”
He smashed the mirror and ran his hand over his face examining the changes that had occurred. Slowly the demonic features faded away as his humanity struggled to overcome the demon inside of him. At last he won the battle and looked only slightly different than normal. At the most he looked more handsome and well rested.
“Out on my own have I really changed?” he asked and turned to Sherry who just looked at him in that same trusting way she used to when he had been wind child. He nodded to her and began walking out to face the leader of this realm.
“The answers are all inside of me All I gotta do is believe!”
He took off running with his familiar right beside him flashing him a dark smile which Jing returned graciously. Both declared,
“I’m not, gonna stop,” “Not gonna stop till I get my shot!”
“That’s who I am!”
"That is my plan!”
“Will I end up on top?”
“You can…” “Bet on it!” “Bet on it!” “Bet on it!” “Bet on it!”
Jing looked to his side and saw Sherry running along side him smiling and singing along.
“You can…” “Bet on it!” “Bet on it!” “Bet on it!” “Bet on it!”
“We wanna make it right…” “And this is the way!” “To turn our lives around!” “Today is the day!”
Jing slowed when he reached the doors to the throne chamber and formed his demonic familiar cannon charging it up.
“Am I the type of guy!” “Who means what I say?
“Bet on it!” “Bet on it!” “Bet on it!” “Bet on it!”
Jing took careful aim…
“You can bet on me!”
With that he let loose with a blast that turned the massive doors to rubble and entered the throne room at last he gazed upon the one responsible for all his suffering…
The succubus queen Malcanthet.
Jing entered the throne room cautiously his familiar cannon no longer armed with the newly demonized Kir walking beside him. The room did not have that much too it besides being larger than necessary with various banners and paintings portraying acts of such depravity that even Jing shuddered slightly at a glance. At the opposite end of the room there was a large throne that seemed to be made of blades with a woman of such beauty that it seemed a sin to look upon her.
The woman put on a smile that most would have taken as warm and friendly but Jing was not a fool. He had worn that same smile so many times during his life that he could recoginize when someone was using a fake expression of an emotion they were not feeling. “Malcanthet. Queen of the throne of blades. Mistress of Shendilvari and mother of the inari.” He said in a tone that showed slight respect but mostly it gave away his murderous intentions.
Malcanthet dropped her façade and rose to stand at her full height which was considerably taller than Jing was in his human form. “Bandit king. Star stealer. Thief. Jing. Those are your titles are they not? I knew this day would come although it has come sooner than I had expected. You look more human than I would have guessed… How much of a strain it must be to hide what you really are on the inside.” She said her lips wrapping delicately around each and every word as it left her lips. She stood before Jing completely naked except for her various piercings and exotic if not erotic jewelry.
“I am human no matter what you have done to my body. My mind is my own and I will not be one of your pets.” Jing declared firmly and was only slightly disturbed when the queen of the succubi laughed at him.
“Is that what you think I wanted? Another pet for pleasure? Another slave for sex? No Bandit King. What I seek is something only you could give me. I seek and end to the emptiness inside myself. The hunger eternal that I feel all hours of the day. Your desire… That is what I seek. I have molded and shaped your life for a long time and at last I can ease the burden you bare….” Malcanthet said spreading her leathery wings wide and draping them over herself like a cloak.
“So…That was why I have suffered? To be some sort of demonic medicine for the hunger you feel? An all you can eat buffet of desire and lust!?” Jing asked angrily his energy flaring like a bonfire growing dangerously close to turning him into a demon once more.
“Yes. But it is so much more than that. You would be my personal lover. My king if you will. I would no longer need my other sires. With you I could cast them off and live peacefully until the end of all things.” Malcanthet said drawing closer to Jing her own demonic energy calling out to his trying to draw it out.
“What gave you that right?! What made you think that I would want this life?! I WAS HAPPY! I had Cassis we were going to have a child! You took that from me and made me live an eternity with the guilt of my own failure! You gave me a lust for flesh that I could never satiate! A need for companionship I could never truly keep! You forced me to kill my own children by dominating their bodies with every emergence of my spirit!” Jing yelled falling to his knees in despair tears streaming forth from his eyes.
Malcanthet spread her wings and her arms wrapping both around Jing in a almost loving way, “Hush now… weep no more my bandit king… just let it all go and let me take away all of your burden. Forget those painful memories and join me in eternal bliss.”
Jing closed his eyes feeling the warmth of her body against his the edge of all his emotions waning as she drew them into himself. The fire in his eyes dwindled to nothing and he became entrapped within Malcanthets embrace. Everything else seemed unimportant. All that mattered was that she was there and that he wanted to remain in her arms forever. His mind spiraled downward into the darkness…
JING!
“Who are you?”
You are so stupid sometimes…
“Why does your voice sound so familiar?”
Don’t you recognize me?
“Should I?”
You promised to find me.
“Did I?”
You promised to protect me.
“When?”
When you saved me from the keeper.
“The keeper…”
Yes Jing… the keeper of the forest.
“I remember him…”
Just say my name…
“I can’t”
Say it!
“I can’t”
Just say it once for me… and for our child.
“…Ca…”
Yes…
“CASSIS!”
Jing yelled the name and Malcanthet hissed in pain as she was thrown away from him his body burning with that dark silver fire.
“CASSIS! CASSIS! BRING HER BACK TO ME! YOU STOLE HER FROM ME! I WILL KILL YOU!” Jing yelled and went completely demonic his body brimming with power and energy. He charged Malcanthet his demonic sling blade extended charging with such speed that the Demoness barely saw what happened. He sliced off her wings with two well aimed strokes and delivered a deep wound to her side. She fell to the ground hissing in pain and stared up at her end.
As Jing stood over Malcanthets’ body she could see the rage in his eyes and the murderous intent in his heart. “Please reconsider…” Malcanthet pleaded forgoing her usually unbreakable calm and pride for the sake of her own survival, “I only did what I did because I could sense the potential you possessed even back then to be one of the greatest demons to ever grace the abyss. You understand what it is like after so many years to have an unquenchable lust and desire. You were the only hope I had to end the thirst that overcame me every hour of the day. Please Jing…” she pleaded gasping in fear as Jing lifted her off her feet as easily as he would lift a rag doll.
“Yes… I understand it all too well. But that is not an excuse for what you did to me. For all that you have done to all who you ever laid your eyes upon. You deserve what is coming to you Malcanthet. You deserve every agonizing moment of my revenge.” Jing said coldly throwing the queen of the succubi to the ground so that she would land at the foot of her precious throne of blades.
“I only did it for the betterment of your life! I wanted to make you a great demon worthy of being my king!” Malcanthet declared backing up in fear as Jing approached her until she was trapped on her throne truly frightened by her own creation.
“Then you succeeded… Only you forgot to take one thing into account. I am human… And revenge is what we live for.” Jing said coldly and thrust his sling blade straight into Malcanthets chest piercing her black cold frozen heart. Malcanthet gasped in pain and looked down at the blade as her foul smelling blood oozed from the wound.
“Please I beg you… spare me!” Malcanthet screamed only for her words to fall on deaf ears as Jings power overcame her his entire body becoming engulfed in that familiar blackened silver flame that had become the trademark of his demonic legend. The flames engulfed her consuming her foul flesh taking away her life force rather than burning her to a cinder. When Jing removed his blade all that remained of the former queen was a dried up husk that no longer even resembled the beauty she had once possessed. It was at that moment that what was left of the radiant sisters entered the throne room all armed to combat whatever had caused their mother to scream like she had.
For you see this entire layer of the abyss was Malcanthets domain and it was her will that shaped it. Her final scream of agony had echoed throughout the entire plane heard by and felt inside every denizen that resided there. Black smoke resembling a crown formed above the corpse of Malcanthet and without hesitation Jing reached for and claimed the strange energy. He laughed slightly in madness as he felt the power flow through him becoming aware of everything that took place on Shendilvari. By claiming the crown he had become the newest Demon lord of the abyss. He now was more than the king of Shendilvari he was its demigod.
He brushed the dried up husk that used to be Malcanthet aside and sat upon its throne which when it came into contact with him molded and shaped itself to conform to his will. It no longer resembled a large conglomeration of blades but rather it looked like a throne of flames. The radiant sisters looked first to their dead mother then to Jing and for a couple of minutes they did nothing but stare. Then one after another they bowed showing that they wished to swear their allegiance to their new king.
“Prepare the army Sherry…” Jing said suddenly ignoring the rumble of his realm as it transformed to suit his taste.
“Of course my liege but might I ask why?” The succubus asked curiously earning a smile from Jing.
“Why else? I just killed the lover of the most powerful creatures of the abyss… they will not be happy to have a new lord to contend with.” Jing explained and laughed almost insanely as the sisters departed to ready the whole of Shendilvari for war. All that is except for Sherry. She walked up to the new king of Shendilvari and gave to him a necklace of pure gold in the shape of a heart.
“What is this?” he asked her and she shook her head in response.
“Just open it…” she said and stood there her eyes closed.
Jing opened the heart and saw within it a spirit. A soul of a beautiful woman weeping in pain and remorse. Jing stared at it and then to Sherry not quite understanding what this meant although he knew what it was she wanted him to do. “Sherry… you don’t have to do this.” He told her but Sherry merely smiled solemnly.
“Yes I do my lord Jing…It is the least that I could do. I owe you my life and now I am paying the debt in full. I am happy to do it. So don’t speak… just do it.” She said and closed her eyes waiting for his choice.
Jing kissed Sherry gratefully and released the spirit within the heart letting it take hold of Sherry as the device was intended to do all along. Slowly Sherry’s body changed in shape until at last when she opened her eyes again some one different was staring into Jings’ eyes.
“I…” Jing began but was silenced when a finger was pressed onto his lips and the person who had once been Sherry smiled at him.
“Just shut up… You talk too much.” Cassis said and kissed Jing happily glad to be reunited with the one she loved.
Jing returned the kiss happily and held her close not wanting to lose her again but most of all he didn’t want her to see him cry. He ran one finger over her belly and smiled at her questioningly and she nodded.
“Yes… they are here too. She was as I was when I died except that her child was demonic… a creature of the abyss without a soul. Not any more…” She said smiling.
Jing hugged her close and for once in his life he at last felt satisfied with how things had played out. Whether the abyss was ready or not Jing had at last come home. He and his family would be here forever more. The oncoming storm would never descend. All that would follow was the eternal spring…
(So yeah that was my longest reply ever.)
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Jan 15 2011, 06:50 AM
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The longest post I can find of late
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Darkened sky, the waning light of the sun setting just over the horizon slowly disappearing as twilight swept in and blanketed the sea around Simplyacity Island. The stars were the only source of light for tonight was a New Moon and no light was reflected across the waters from it. Even the stars barely gave off a glow for it was cloudy, a storm brewing and it would arrive quite soon.
On this dark cloudy night a large marine ship was approaching the island of Simplyacity. It was obviously captained by someone important for it had a sea-stone coated hull, allowing it to migrate across the Calm Belt with only minor issue. It could be believed, that if the ship belonged to a marine and he was important enough to be given a coating of seastone, then plausibly he either had a crew of very powerful fighters (Or maybe just a couple) that could easily wipe out Seakings, or maybe he himself was powerful enough to take on a nest of seakings without causing too much of a ruckus.
As the ship reached the port and docked it seemed that it would be the latter, for standing at the bow, just above the figurehead was a tall man, seven feet tall and wearing pure, shining white armour. Upon his waist was a sword, quite ornate but wide bladed and deadly for even though nobody could tell just by looking at him (Although they may suspect) he could wield the broadsword with a single hand, the five foot blade proving no issue for him as he cut through obstacles.The facial structure of the man himself was chiseled, unblemished yet showing a maturity and an experience of fighting that not many had at that age, or at least not quite yet.
As the ship halted at the docks the man, rather than use a gangplank to disembark from his ship he dropped from the top of the prow and landed with a heavy thud on the deck, a creak of wood from the weight of both the man and his armour.
Once he hit the docks, the man began striding forwards, long and unhindered strides that caused the docks to creak with every step. He was also seemingly unaffected by the wind which was causing the blue cloak to fly out behind him, causing it to not get tangled between his legs as it most likely would had the wind been blowing from behind him.
As the large marine stepped off the docks he was approached by a man whom he paid the docking fee to, only a few hundred beli which made little difference to the amount of coinage the man possessed back on the ship. This exchange was without words, just as well for the dockmaster for he was too tired to hold conversation and was quite honestly intimidated by the man who possessed such a large sword (About the same height as the dockmaster himself was) and wore it like it was nothing.
Once the exchange was finished the marine headed towards an inn, he was here to eat, restock his supplies and move onto the next island. He also needed to purchase a Logpose as his last had been broken on his way here due to an unfortunate fight with some pirates who now lay in the brig, having been fed and watered before disembarkation.
Entering the inn caused everything to instantly quiet, (of course there were only a few people in the inn and it wasn't that loud to begin with) but as the heavy man thudded inside not a sound could be heard except for him walking over to an empty table in the corner and sitting in the large chair that had seemingly been made for large people. Of course he made sure he sat on his cloak so as to not damage the furnishings and he removed his gloves, setting them to the side of the table so that he could eat.
As he looked around he took in his surroundings, a dimly lit room with a fireplace at one end and a bar at the other end. The door when opened gave a view of the bar from the outside and at the bar were eight stools. In the room there was a total of fourteen round wooden tables, in a circular formation with four chairs at each. Against each wall was a bench, capable of seating about ten to fifteen people. The room also had a single chandelier in the center of the ceiling and off behind the bar was a doorway leading to the kitchen. On the opposite side of the building from the door was a stairway which probably lead up to the second floor where the rooms for rent would be.
When one of the serving maids approached him and spoke he looked at her with little interest in her actual beauty but rather with the mild interest that said she could do something for him, which in this case was get him his food and drink.
"Good er...evening I guess Sir, would you like something to eat or drink?"
The woman was obviously intimidated by the large man who had a look upon his face that was neither friendly nor menacing. She however was one who overcame her fears quickly and so what started out as a hesitant sentence became more confident near the end.
"Hmmm, yes please I would indeed like something to eat as well as something to drink, for food it doesn't matter whatever you have on hand but to drink I would prefer something such as a tankard of milk if you have any."
It was quite a surprise to the maid that such a large man could speak so quietly and not bring down the roof with a loud voice. He had done this on purpose so as not to scare anyone and as soon as he had spoken the little noise that had existed before his entering returned, the three men who sat near the center of the room beginning to speak as they had been, quietly but not trying to hide what they were saying.
And so as the maid left to go retrieve the food and drink that had been asked for the marine busied himself with listening to the conversation without letting those who held it to know what he was doing.
"It is terrible, that Baron is destroying our living, we can't just let him continue destroying our crops and cattle, he needs to be dealt with."
"How do you propose we do that? We can't call the marines because he has destroyed all the communications devices that we had and if we send out a ship then he will know and he might kill someone because of it"
"That man who just came in, he looks like a marine maybe he could help?"
"What can a lone man do against a cyborg like the Baron? That man might be big but I am sure that heavy armour would slow him down and even though the Baron himself is quite slow if that man gets hit know amount of armour will protect him from a blast that can sink a ship."
"I say we talk to him and ask him, he is obviously powerful and we don't know what kind of skills he has, maybe he himself is a Cyborg."
"How about we do it after he is finished eating, don't want to get him angry because we interrupted him.
"So we have all agreed we are asking him for help?"
"Yes."
"Yes."
"Alright lets sit and wait."
And with that the three men busied themselves with drinking their beer and eating their food, leaving the marine to ponder on what he would be fighting against when he took up answered their plea for help.
A few moments after the men quit speaking the serving maid returned, a large bowl of stew on a platter with a half a loaf of bread beside it in one arm and a large tankard of milk carried behind her by the inn keeper. They both looked tired and weary, possibly because it was so late and they had to keep the inn open so as to gain a little more custom due to the baron causing havoc, or maybe just because they hadn't been sleeping well because of the barons antics. Either way it made little difference as to the why they were fatigued just that they were fatigued.
It took him about ten minutes to finish the stew and drink the milk, refilling said tankard of milk three times so in total drinking about nine liters of milk in this meal. After doing so he removed from the coin pouch that was at his hip, right beside his scabbard enough beli to pay for the meal and drink, placing it on the table beside his empty dishes.
The three men at the table waited until the maid had removed both the money and the dishes before approaching their savior. They were quite surprised by his reaction as he pushed out three chairs from the table for them to sit and then spoke before they could say anything.
"I will deal with this Baron for you, all I require is where I will find him and how many men reside under his control, this way I can make provisions for the amount of men I will have to place under arrest."
The three men looked at each other, shrugged and gave him the information he asked for. The Baron could be found in residence at the Church of Saint Claire where he had been staying as it was one of the nicest places on the islands. There was nobody with him aside from a single man who served and brought alcohol to him whenever he needed to refuel. It was said that the man was quite meek and easily intimidated but that anyone who attempted to do so was hunted down by the Baron and made example of. He rarely ever killed anyone just broke bones and punished them however he saw fit.
And so it was with this information that the Dealer of Justice stood up and exited the inn, thudding heavily on the floorboards as he replaced the gloves on his hands and headed back towards the docks. He would sleep on his boat tonight, but lightly so that if anyone were to attempt to get at him while he was sleeping he could deal with them quickly.
And so the night wore on as the marine slept standing up as he always did, hand on the hilt of his sword as he waited for morning and the beginning of his campaign towards liberating this island.
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Aroshi
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Jan 17 2011, 05:37 AM
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One of my longest posts here.... but I've made twice to three times longer before... which I'll never be able to find again. <.<
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Soul's hand inched ever closer to end the unwanted fighting that he was forced to fight. It wasn't that Soul didn't enjoy fighting this strong guy, but it was bothersome when it was cutting in his relaxation time. as Soul's hand was inches away from the mans head, and his other hand gripping the mans arm the fight seemed like it was decided and the victor was going to be Soul. Yet, Soul's arm was grabbed holding it a mere inch from the armored mans head. "What!?" Soul exclaimed as the man gripped tighter and tossed Soul from his shoulders.
The force of the throw was strong, and caused Soul to skip across the water. 'Grr... FUCK!' Soul thought as he reached his hand out sticking it into the water. This caused the water to slightly split as he flew through the spa. Soul continued to travel until his hand started to dig into the solid ground slowing him down until he was able to plant his feet that also dug into the ground. The second Soul was able to push himself forward, he did so and charged at the armored man.
The armored man looked towards Soul, even more angry then he was before and gripping his arm that was bleeding from where Soul pierced his armor. "You son of a bitch!" The man exclaimed as he started charging through the water towards Soul. The two let out a battle cry as they neared each other. Both Soul's palms opened and the same green circle compressed into a small pebble of solid green light until bursting into the size of a baseball. As the two neared each other, the man lifted his uninjured arm and swung it forceably in Soul's direction in a hook motion.
Soul ducked under the swing and pressed the orb of Green solid Ki magic into the mans abdomen causing an explosion. The force of the explosion caused the man to step back, which Soul took advantage of and jumped up into the air. As the man regained his composure, he took a quick look around until looking up. When the man looked up, all he saw was a Bright green light directly in his face before it exploded causing a shock wave of high wides in a 360 degree area and traveled out. Soul landed behind the large body mass, and his armor instantly disappeared before Soul buckled to one knee breathing hard.
"That was interesting..." Soul attempted to say while he was completely out of breathe. As he regained his breathe, the large man was still standing, a large cloud of smoke covering the area of his head. As the Smoke cleared, the mans helmet was completely missing, and his eyes completely white. The large man was out cold in a standing position until a slight gust of wind came through the various holes in the building that caused his body to fall over causing a large rumble in the ground. As the man hit the ground, Soul stood up, holding onto the Towel around his waist to keep it from falling. His lip was bleeding, and the blood dripped off his chin.
"Alright... Job is done..." Soul said as he slowly made his way back to where he was sitting before any of this shit happened. Soul stepped into the spring, and sat down stretching his arms out on the edge of the spa. Soul didn't even bother to remove the blood that was flowing down his chin, and dripping into the water. Soul was still out of breathe, and his eye's closed as he waited for his composure to come back. The adrenaline that was pumping through his veins started to calm, and his heavy breathing subsided.
"Now... Do you mind informing me on what the fuck was that all about?" Soul asked Lucia who was still relaxing in the spa. Soul's eye's opened and looked towards Lucia. For the first time he noticed just how beautiful she looked. Her chest was sticking out, making her breasts look bigger then they are. Her complexion in the spa lights was almost a caramel color. Soul gazed at her in amazement, the blood on his chin dripping constantly into the spring water that slowly started to drag away each drop that hit the water. At this very moment, Soul was extremely attracted to the way Lucia looked, and he almost forgot about the question he had just asked.
Link: A Surprisingly Sexy Encounter For who ever is interested in reading the topic.
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