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| Dezun | Feb 8 2009, 08:09 PM Post #1 |
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General Information Name: Dezun Fuerza Nickname : Karnage, everyone knows him by this name as he doesnt like revealing his true identity. Age: 23 in human years. Gender: Male Race/Species: Elf Alignment: Neutral Home Nation: Royotia Current Nation: Athlums Character Specifics Picture : ![]() Appearance: Dezun has a very pale light purple tone to his skin, his eyes are a deep purple colour, but turn red when he is angry. He has Tatoo's of thin vines going up his abdomen to his chest. In Royotia he will normally wear, Black trousers, with a piece of dark cloth going around the top of his trousers. [Look in the pic] and he has a TOP HAT x'D! with a buckle around it? and he wears dark, preferably black gloves, and yes he is topless.... But most of the time he will wear his armour, Black Helmet with a V shaped ?Visor?, Lightweighted armour for maneuverability, and it doesnt make ANY noise as it was his Assasin 'robes' back in his past. Personality: Dezun tries to keep a serious personality on, which sometimes just doesnt work at all, but he's a joy to be with and a very calm and collective person, he is also very intelligent but at times may not seem it. History/Background: Dezun had the natural upbringing of an Elf, but later on in life his family got murdered by someone unknown, Dezun promised to himself that if he ever found this person who murdered his parents, he would slaughter them. He soon decided to become an Assasin, knowing that he would eventually run into this person, but after months of work, he began to give up, thinking that he would never be able to find this person, until a few weeks later he found out that the person who did it was in his company, he went ballistic and slaughtered everyone who worked for the company and obliterated the company's building before burning the ruins. After a month or two Dezun decided to start fresh, he would be hired by people to kill others, with a valid reason ofcourse as he needed money. Now he works as a part time Hitman/Assasin. Character Battle Experience Ability(s): He has Extremely quick reflexes, and can manuever swiftly and obtains a insanely dark power which he has only ever used once. Weapon(s): Light Daggers - The hilts are silver covered with jet black tape and blades are jet black aswell. The Daichi - The only one of this type of Katana, it is light and can be wielded fast yet steady. Revolver - A Revolver which holds up to twelve silver bullets, the only one of its kind. Handle is taped with an extremely dark purple grip which almost looks black. One bullet to a limb could make the persons limb fly off and explode. Dezun only has twelve bullets for this weapon though and can only use it when it glows a dark mysterious purple colour, meaning it is active, [ He does not know that it's only active when in crisis situations ] yet using this makes him lose all of his abilities for a short period of time, Which Dezun needs as it is within his fighting style. Edited by Dezun, Feb 8 2009, 08:42 PM.
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| Leonus Sanctice | Feb 8 2009, 08:18 PM Post #2 |
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Take out the bits that are seemingly joking, or edit them. Add the picture because its reffered to in the appearance. Expand on the personality a bit, along with the background. In your abilities explain what the dark power is. The daich and the revolver need to be toned down, too powerful, " deals a massive amount of damage" "One bullet to a limb could make the persons limb fly off and explode" a sniper might do this in real life, i doubt a revolver or another handgun type weapon could do this, unless you put in more details about it i cant accept it. 3 days to edit
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| Leonus Sanctice | Feb 8 2009, 08:28 PM Post #3 |
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Accepted, moved. |
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