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+Kurakawa-Chan Jan 28 2009, 12:51 PM
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 D Rank Jutsu
-You get all of those to start, so you can add some more custom if you'd like

Jutsu #4 Hidden Mouth Needles.
-How do they get there?
-If they're in your mouth, then your going to inhale the poisen to unless its chakra, but you don't have poison chakra so..

Jutsu #8 Prison Flood Jutsu
-You might want to specify that if you get hit, it stops, or some minute way for the person to get out, cause if they're still unable to move, and all it takes is concentration, then that could be high A rankish, especially if you can't get hit.

Jutsu #11 Water Shockwave
-How long can he control the water, and to what extent? Can it take sharp U-turns, or is it gradual etc..

Jutsu #13 Water Burial
-How does it send them to a burial
-If it uses all of your chakra, you die, so you might want to make it virtually all, or to that effect.

Jutsu #14 Water Dragon
-Explain more, what does it look like, can it cast any jutsu?

Jutsu #15 Great Explosion Technique
-List your drawbacks, if it automatically kills, thats gonna have to do some serious damage to you, if not kill you as well. If there are some ways to escape the maelstorm, then you might not have to kill yourself as well, but you still need some heavy drawbacks.
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